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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Its a bit...........I can't say on here but speaking in the third person perspective its a bit Well lets just say self absorbed and a bit up your own bum. |
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By *ea monkey OP Man
over a year ago
Manchester (he/him) |
"Its a bit...........I can't say on here but speaking in the third person perspective its a bit Well lets just say self absorbed and a bit up your own bum. "
OK, I was going for an anthropolocal study pastiche style. Perhaps a touch more thought required... |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Personally, I'm not a fan of 3rd person profiles, I know I do it a lot in Forum, hands up.
Also, there are a lot of torso pics over anything else.
Better than most if you ask me though  |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Its a bit...........I can't say on here but speaking in the third person perspective its a bit Well lets just say self absorbed and a bit up your own bum.
OK, I was going for an anthropolocal study pastiche style. Perhaps a touch more thought required... "
You asked so no point lying to you there are others who have done similar things on here and it just looks pretentious if you wane people saying Hmmm pretentious *rick then some will see it that way but its your profile your choice what you put there. |
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By *ea monkey OP Man
over a year ago
Manchester (he/him) |
"Its a bit...........I can't say on here but speaking in the third person perspective its a bit Well lets just say self absorbed and a bit up your own bum.
OK, I was going for an anthropolocal study pastiche style. Perhaps a touch more thought required...
You asked so no point lying to you there are others who have done similar things on here and it just looks pretentious if you wane people saying Hmmm pretentious *rick then some will see it that way but its your profile your choice what you put there. "
No, I appreciate the candour. No offence taken |
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"Jesus h.....full of "I'm amazing me" sort of stuff.....are you?
Hmmmm, I don't think so. A wry tongue in cheek was intended but clearly not read.
I think I'll have another go in a bit"
Arhhhhhhh course your amazing  |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Do you like it?
If so dont change it.
It might come across in the wrong spirit to some but those people will probably be out off by your sense of humor and communicatiob style anyway so best that they see it from the start.
It will attract the type of people thay will enjoy chatting to you... |
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By *ea monkey OP Man
over a year ago
Manchester (he/him) |
"Personally, I'm not a fan of 3rd person profiles, I know I do it a lot in Forum, hands up.
Also, there are a lot of torso pics over anything else.
Better than most if you ask me though "
Ta GK, I need to get some pictures done really. Ones that don't revolve around my chest... |
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By *pider-WomanWoman
over a year ago
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If it wasnt for the fact you're part of the forums seriously I wouldn't have bothered to read all that.
If I was you I'd change my name and all the pictures a bit like reincarnation hah sort of thingy.
You're a great guy with an honest heart just be you. Just digging myself out of the hole here. xx
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Personally, I'm not a fan of 3rd person profiles, I know I do it a lot in Forum, hands up.
Also, there are a lot of torso pics over anything else.
Better than most if you ask me though
Ta GK, I need to get some pictures done really. Ones that don't revolve around my chest... "
You're a bright guy, sure you'll think of something  |
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By *ea monkey OP Man
over a year ago
Manchester (he/him) |
"Do you like it?
If so dont change it.
It might come across in the wrong spirit to some but those people will probably be out off by your sense of humor and communicatiob style anyway so best that they see it from the start.
It will attract the type of people thay will enjoy chatting to you..."
Yes, there is that point of observation too. If the humour and intent in which it was written isn't evident though then I just come across like a preening self obsessed twunt... |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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What would you like to achieve with the profile is my question I guess?
As a forumite profile it kinda makes sense to ppl who are familiar with you and it displays wit and expression. To non-forum types or ppl viewing you cold they'd probs think it a bit over complicated and introverted and I doubt it'd score you many dates, but I could be wrong and a profile is only the beginning of a friendship, meet, relationship or whatever comes from it....
Tough one really, I don't want to be critical because I actually really like you both on the forums and from the few short exchanges we've had. But I think my opening question is the key, what do you want the text to acheive? 
(well aware I'm in no position to give advice, but then my profile isn't really designed to achieve anything other than to facilitate my occasional sarcastic comments in the forum) 
Good luck anyway buddy! |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"It’s shite, OP.
I see no offer of free cake on there, or tea for that matter. Crap.
You're right, a glaring omissions Boldy...
Need to add cake... "
You’re welcome |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Its a bit...........I can't say on here but speaking in the third person perspective its a bit Well lets just say self absorbed and a bit up your own bum.
OK, I was going for an anthropolocal study pastiche style. Perhaps a touch more thought required...
You asked so no point lying to you there are others who have done similar things on here and it just looks pretentious if you wane people saying Hmmm pretentious *rick then some will see it that way but its your profile your choice what you put there.
No, I appreciate the candour. No offence taken"
I am not trying to offend I realise you are not a stupid man and you wouldn't ask if you didn't want an honest answer. Some would ask hoping lip service or sycophantic comments unlike some on here. I am sure you will get many that like its all a personal choice there was no offence intended just am unbiased opinion. |
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By *ady LickWoman
over a year ago
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After some of these comments I was looking forward to reading it.
For those that aren't aware of your personality and wit they would probably read the first bit and think something along the lines of 'what the fuck is this guy on about', for the forum people it wouldn't matter. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Do you like it?
If so dont change it.
It might come across in the wrong spirit to some but those people will probably be out off by your sense of humor and communicatiob style anyway so best that they see it from the start.
It will attract the type of people thay will enjoy chatting to you...
Yes, there is that point of observation too. If the humour and intent in which it was written isn't evident though then I just come across like a preening self obsessed twunt... "
I agree that you should keep it if you like it. It doesn't come across as arrogant to me. Humour in there and geekiness.
I would know from reading it that we're not compatible but I see that as a good thing in that we wouldn't be wasting time chatting. It will attract the right kind of person. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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The guys saying don't change it are the guys that neg on other people because they don't want you to succeed. Your profile is witty but maybe that's because I'm a huge Scott Bakula fan. Might I suggest getting to a swingers club? I plucked up the courage and went alone. Best decision I ever made. Good luck. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Forgot to look at the pics. Sorry if this offends, it's not my intention. A couple make me think you may also like to be a tv. Could be a turn on for some and turn off for others. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"After reading your feedback I've had another go.
Take a look and let me know, thanks! "
Far better some humour and a hint at humility and its well spaced so easy to read far better than the last one. |
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By *ea monkey OP Man
over a year ago
Manchester (he/him) |
"After reading your feedback I've had another go.
Take a look and let me know, thanks!
Far better some humour and a hint at humility and its well spaced so easy to read far better than the last one."
Thank you, it seems to flow far better and I'm not trying to be too clever with it |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"After reading your feedback I've had another go.
Take a look and let me know, thanks!
Far better some humour and a hint at humility and its well spaced so easy to read far better than the last one.
Thank you, it seems to flow far better and I'm not trying to be too clever with it"
The spacing really helps as well nothing worse than it all being bunched up. |
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Didn't read the previous version of the new version... but I really liked the current profile text.
If I was looking to meet men, it would get my interest.
Photos sadly are not of the same calibre. More variety needed. |
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By *ea monkey OP Man
over a year ago
Manchester (he/him) |
"Didn't read the previous version of the new version... but I really liked the current profile text.
If I was looking to meet men, it would get my interest.
Photos sadly are not of the same calibre. More variety needed."
It's on my list |
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"Didn't read the previous version of the new version... but I really liked the current profile text.
If I was looking to meet men, it would get my interest.
Photos sadly are not of the same calibre. More variety needed.
It's on my list "
cocks and action shots |
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