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Constructive Criticism of the profile above ....

By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

Have a read of the profile above (or anyone else in the thread)in this post and either tell them what you don't like or suggest how they could improve their profile!

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Very witty chap and great profile

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Have a read of the profile above (or anyone else in the thread)in this post and either tell them what you don't like or suggest how they could improve their profile! "

I dont share your sense of humour, plus I prefer more photos on a profile. Just my view, no offense meant.

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Very witty chap and great profile

faultless

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By *hoenixAdAstraWoman over a year ago

Hiding in the shadows

"Very witty chap and great profile

faultless

Great selection of pics

Well written bio.

I like it

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Very witty chap and great profile

faultless

I love you Ghengis

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Very witty chap and great profile

faultless

Great selection of pics

Well written bio.

I like it "

Very nice but can guys on Fab read that much text???

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Very witty chap and great profile

faultless

Great selection of pics

Well written bio.

I like it "

For some reason I thought you didn't like me very much. So I'm pleased to read that

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By *hilloutMan over a year ago

All over the place! Northwesr, , Southwest

Incandescent

Sexy bum pics. Well written profile

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Very witty chap and great profile

faultless

Great selection of pics

Well written bio.

I like it

For some reason I thought you didn't like me very much. So I'm pleased to read that

"
I'm sorry you wont do well here

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

V polished and thought out. Only criticism is it's so good some might think you are a sociopath lol

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By *hoenixAdAstraWoman over a year ago

Hiding in the shadows

"Very witty chap and great profile

faultless

Great selection of pics

Well written bio.

I like it

Very nice but can guys on Fab read that much text???"

If they can't, then I I'm not inyrested on that kind of guy

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By *pider-WomanWoman over a year ago

Exeter, Bristol, Plymouth, Truro

"Have a read of the profile above (or anyone else in the thread)in this post and either tell them what you don't like or suggest how they could improve their profile! "

I like your profile. Your witty thats for sure and also have a good balance of pictures. Maybe add a full length picture maybe in a suit

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"V polished and thought out. Only criticism is it's so good some might think you are a sociopath lol"

Ghengis, this thread is moving too fast

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By *hoenixAdAstraWoman over a year ago

Hiding in the shadows

"Very witty chap and great profile

faultless

Great selection of pics

Well written bio.

I like it

For some reason I thought you didn't like me very much. So I'm pleased to read that

No idea why you'd think that.. You're ok

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Cyclist omg not popular

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Very witty chap and great profile

faultless

Great selection of pics

Well written bio.

I like it

Very nice but can guys on Fab read that much text???

If they can't, then I I'm not inyrested on that kind of guy

Agree with you there

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By *naswingdressWoman over a year ago

Manchester (she/her)

"Very witty chap and great profile

faultless

Great selection of pics

Well written bio.

I like it

Very nice but can guys on Fab read that much text???

If they can't, then I I'm not inyrested on that kind of guy

Agree with you there

Lovely profile. Maybe more pictures?

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Very witty chap and great profile

faultless

Great selection of pics

Well written bio.

I like it "

Great profile phoenix and love the wellies

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Have a read of the profile above (or anyone else in the thread)in this post and either tell them what you don't like or suggest how they could improve their profile!

I like your profile. Your witty thats for sure and also have a good balance of pictures. Maybe add a full length picture maybe in a suit

Spiderwoman an all round super hero, witty and fantastic photos

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Have a read of the profile above (or anyone else in the thread)in this post and either tell them what you don't like or suggest how they could improve their profile!

I like your profile. Your witty thats for sure and also have a good balance of pictures. Maybe add a full length picture maybe in a suit

Spiderwoman an all round super hero, witty and fantastic photos

for me the perfect figure i can only dream

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Have a read of the profile above (or anyone else in the thread)in this post and either tell them what you don't like or suggest how they could improve their profile!

I like your profile. Your witty thats for sure and also have a good balance of pictures. Maybe add a full length picture maybe in a suit

Spiderwoman an all round super hero, witty and fantastic photos

for me the perfect figure i can only dream

You seem to be an honest fella , well written profile & pictures

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Your wife looks hot

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By *hilloutMan over a year ago

All over the place! Northwesr, , Southwest

Norfolkcouple40

Very good pictures that will certainly appeal to your target audience

. I'd probably break the text up a bit so it flows better.

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Your wife looks hot "

I am the wife lol

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Fantastic profile. Interesting read and pulse raising pictures.

Maybe a few more full stops and paragraphs would make it easier reading?

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Very witty chap and great profile

Love this profile! Only think missing as me as a friend!!!

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Have a read of the profile above (or anyone else in the thread)in this post and either tell them what you don't like or suggest how they could improve their profile! "

I enjoyed it and I’m a straight man.

Mrs enjoyed pics.

Winner winner chicken dinner.

Oh and I’m a bit slow lately.....only just realised the name was just in her anus!!!

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Your wife looks hot

I am the wife lol"

Norfolk couple can do no wrong in my eyes!!! Jealous of him though but love her!!

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Fantastic profile. Interesting read and pulse raising pictures.

Maybe a few more full stops and paragraphs would make it easier reading? "

Thank you , adjustments made

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Fantastic profile. Interesting read and pulse raising pictures.

Maybe a few more full stops and paragraphs would make it easier reading?

Thank you , adjustments made "

You have a target audience?????

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Fantastic profile. Interesting read and pulse raising pictures.

Maybe a few more full stops and paragraphs would make it easier reading?

Thank you , adjustments made

You have a target audience????? "

Not much blurb, doesn’t give a lot to start a conversation about

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Fantastic profile. Interesting read and pulse raising pictures.

Maybe a few more full stops and paragraphs would make it easier reading?

Thank you , adjustments made

You have a target audience????? "

Says what you are looking for briefly without any other information on the couple and desires.

Good selection of pics

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Fantastic profile. Interesting read and pulse raising pictures.

Maybe a few more full stops and paragraphs would make it easier reading?

Thank you , adjustments made

You have a target audience????? "

Do you think so ? Strange how we never get hardly any messages to meet . That’s the swinging world lol

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By *ookie46Woman over a year ago

Deepest darkest Peru

"Fantastic profile. Interesting read and pulse raising pictures.

Maybe a few more full stops and paragraphs would make it easier reading?

Thank you , adjustments made

You have a target audience?????

Do you think so ? Strange how we never get hardly any messages to meet . That’s the swinging world lol "

Great pics and well written bio. What's not to like

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Fantastic profile. Interesting read and pulse raising pictures.

Maybe a few more full stops and paragraphs would make it easier reading?

Thank you , adjustments made

You have a target audience?????

Do you think so ? Strange how we never get hardly any messages to meet . That’s the swinging world lol "

I don’t! It was said by above person!

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By *hilloutMan over a year ago

All over the place! Northwesr, , Southwest

Cookie46

Great assortment of pics that show off your attributes.

Profile is good at describing you and what you're looking for

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By *ookie46Woman over a year ago

Deepest darkest Peru

"Cookie46

Great assortment of pics that show off your attributes.

Profile is good at describing you and what you're looking for

Thanks you

Likewise your new new profile is very good

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Cookie46

Great assortment of pics that show off your attributes.

Profile is good at describing you and what you're looking for

Thanks you

Likewise your new new profile is very good

I have no criticism

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Cute and intelligent

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Your wife looks hot

I am the wife lol"
well you are hot then lol

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Your wife looks hot

I am the wife lol"
well you are hot then lol

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By *pider-WomanWoman over a year ago

Exeter, Bristol, Plymouth, Truro

"Fantastic profile. Interesting read and pulse raising pictures.

Maybe a few more full stops and paragraphs would make it easier reading?

Thank you , adjustments made

You have a target audience?????

Do you think so ? Strange how we never get hardly any messages to meet . That’s the swinging world lol "

Really that surprises me alot.

What I really like about your profile is the balance of pictures between the male and female half it really comes across as a us profile not a dagiling female carrot. He gives me the hot flushes.... I've never thought about meeting a couple but if I did you two tick all the boxes and more.

your profile is classy, well written , just perfect dont change a thing

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By *pider-WomanWoman over a year ago

Exeter, Bristol, Plymouth, Truro

"Fantastic profile. Interesting read and pulse raising pictures.

Maybe a few more full stops and paragraphs would make it easier reading?

Thank you , adjustments made

You have a target audience?????

Do you think so ? Strange how we never get hardly any messages to meet . That’s the swinging world lol

Really that surprises me alot.

your profile is classy, well written , just perfect dont change a thing

My criticism would be you live in Norfolk

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By *oppet22TV/TS over a year ago

huddersfield

Mine would be your too far for me will put profile

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Fantastic profile. Interesting read and pulse raising pictures.

Maybe a few more full stops and paragraphs would make it easier reading?

Thank you , adjustments made

You have a target audience?????

Do you think so ? Strange how we never get hardly any messages to meet . That’s the swinging world lol

Really that surprises me alot.

your profile is classy, well written , just perfect dont change a thing

Thank you so much for your kind comments , i think you already know what we think of your profile and as a person xx

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By *ouis CyphreMan over a year ago

The Midlands

[Removed by poster at 08/09/19 13:52:14]

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By *ouis CyphreMan over a year ago

The Midlands

"Mine would be your too far for me will put profile "

Good profile, as it is clear about you and what you want.

Reading it, maybe a few more full stops, capital letters and paragraphs would make it easier on the eye.

Hope this helps

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Mine would be your too far for me will put profile

Good profile, as it is clear about you and what you want.

Reading it, maybe a few more full stops, capital letters and paragraphs would make it easier on the eye.

Hope this helps "
to comedy pics

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By *hilloutMan over a year ago

All over the place! Northwesr, , Southwest

It's LOO

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By *eliWoman over a year ago

"It's LOO

Your profile made me laugh. Too many Hamletesque photos. Putting the links to your voice YouTube thing is a great shout so I might copy that!

(I'm sandwiching the negative

)

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Less clothes more flesh

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By *ealitybitesMan over a year ago

Belfast

"It's LOO

Excellent profile. You'll forgive me for not looking at the pics but the text and content is exceptional so nothing much I can suggest to improve it.

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"It's LOO

Excellent profile. You'll forgive me for not looking at the pics but the text and content is exceptional so nothing much I can suggest to improve it. "

Good profile text. I like the line of "straight, not just fab straight"!

I'd probably say less cock picks and more general pics. But then again I don't have any cock pics on public so what do I know

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By *irth.Minge.FireMan over a year ago

Seen in far off places

Bright underpants and and the green shopping carrier / tote bag are off putting

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By *eliWoman over a year ago

"Bright underpants and and the green shopping carrier / tote bag are off putting "

Mentioning a desire to see a woman pee and pee herself is offputting.

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By *irth.Minge.FireMan over a year ago

Seen in far off places

"Bright underpants and and the green shopping carrier / tote bag are off putting

Mentioning a desire to see a woman pee and pee herself is offputting.

Yeah yeah Meli - whatever!

You would...

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Not a fan of bow ties or the username but good luck

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By *hilloutMan over a year ago

All over the place! Northwesr, , Southwest

Nice quads

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By *naswingdressWoman over a year ago

Manchester (she/her)

"Nice quads

Needs a red pen

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Your goal is to come across as arrogant as possible?

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By *tella HeelsTV/TS over a year ago

west here ford shire

Stop blocking TVs

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By *uxom redCouple over a year ago

Shrewsbury

"Stop blocking TVs "

I wouldn't change anything I love your honesty.

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By *oppet22TV/TS over a year ago

huddersfield

Nothing I can say bad about your profile will put to the point so people know what you are looking for

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Nothing I can say bad about your profile will put to the point so people know what you are looking for"

Nothing to say, very straight forward and to the point

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By *aven RedWoman over a year ago

Liverpool

"Nothing I can say bad about your profile will put to the point so people know what you are looking for

Nothing to say, very straight forward and to the point "

More pics, but only cos I want to perve them x

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By *ealitybitesMan over a year ago

Belfast

"Nothing I can say bad about your profile will put to the point so people know what you are looking for

Nothing to say, very straight forward and to the point "

Honest and straightforward profile. Anyone taking the time to read and understand should then be respectful.

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By *tella HeelsTV/TS over a year ago

west here ford shire

"Nothing I can say bad about your profile will put to the point so people know what you are looking for

Nothing to say, very straight forward and to the point

Honest and straightforward profile. Anyone taking the time to read and understand should then be respectful. "

Too far away

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Nothing I can say bad about your profile will put to the point so people know what you are looking for

Nothing to say, very straight forward and to the point

More pics, but only cos I want to perve them x"

Haha, duly noted

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By *ruebameMan over a year ago

from the womb and tryout to get back

"Nothing I can say bad about your profile will put to the point so people know what you are looking for

Nothing to say, very straight forward and to the point

More pics, but only cos I want to perve them x

Haha, duly noted

Agree more pics

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By *uzukiNo1Woman over a year ago

Rhyl

Hmmmmmmm a pic with Al maybe....

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By *uxom redCouple over a year ago

Shrewsbury

"Nothing I can say bad about your profile will put to the point so people know what you are looking for

Nothing to say, very straight forward and to the point

More pics, but only cos I want to perve them x

Haha, duly noted

Agree more pics

"
Fun pics

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By *sland_kidMan over a year ago

london, manchester, liverpool

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By *omeotherknobheadMan over a year ago

morecambe

bullshit legal disclaimer that means sod all...otherwise

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By *atisfying jackMan over a year ago

Hereford

"[Removed by poster at 08/09/19 20:18:57]"

Great profile very informative and not arrogant. Lots of pictures of himself (mainly clothed which is a bonus) hopefully comes across to the audience he wants as genuine.

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By *uzukiNo1Woman over a year ago

Rhyl

"bullshit legal disclaimer that means sod all...otherwise

Obvious really.....get some pics...

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By *andKBCouple over a year ago

Plymouth

"bullshit legal disclaimer that means sod all...otherwise

Very ranty profile but not actually stating anything.

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By *uxom redCouple over a year ago

Shrewsbury

"[Removed by poster at 08/09/19 20:18:57]"

Seems a very happy chappy

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"bullshit legal disclaimer that means sod all...otherwise

Very ranty profile but not actually stating anything."

Can’t fault really! Descriptive, well written, variety of pictures...very nice!

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By *stellaWoman over a year ago

London

No criticism, Buxom Red is

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By *rAitchMan over a year ago

Diagonally Parked in a Parallel Universe

"bullshit legal disclaimer that means sod all...otherwise

Obvious really.....get some pics..."

Nice pics, and the motorbike is great, too!

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"bullshit legal disclaimer that means sod all...otherwise

Very ranty profile but not actually stating anything."

Only thing I would say is it is a little bit long, but alot of people probably like that.

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By *uxom redCouple over a year ago

Shrewsbury

"bullshit legal disclaimer that means sod all...otherwise

Very ranty profile but not actually stating anything.

Only thing I would say is it is a little bit long, but alot of people probably like that. "

Distance!

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By *atisfying jackMan over a year ago

Hereford

"bullshit legal disclaimer that means sod all...otherwise

Very ranty profile but not actually stating anything.

Only thing I would say is it is a little bit long, but alot of people probably like that.

Distance! "

Very laid out profile with a good description of each other and what they're looking for.

Nice selection of pictures and really look like a genuine couple

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By *ily WhiteWoman over a year ago

"bullshit legal disclaimer that means sod all...otherwise

Very ranty profile but not actually stating anything.

Only thing I would say is it is a little bit long, but alot of people probably like that. "

More pictures...i've already perved at the existing ones far too many times

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By *omeotherknobheadMan over a year ago

morecambe

"bullshit legal disclaimer that means sod all...otherwise

Obvious really.....get some pics..."

nope, my profile is working (almost) perfectly atm

as i'm not lookin' to meet. It's keeping my inbox down beautifully

when i'm meeting again it won't look like the current train wreck that it is any more

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By *uxom redCouple over a year ago

Shrewsbury

"bullshit legal disclaimer that means sod all...otherwise

Obvious really.....get some pics...

nope, my profile is working (almost) perfectly atm

as i'm not lookin' to meet. It's keeping my inbox down beautifully

when i'm meeting again it won't look like the current train wreck that it is any more "

Love your user name made me chuckle.

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By *herryblossom_BJWoman over a year ago

Oxfordshire/Hampshire

"bullshit legal disclaimer that means sod all...otherwise

Obvious really.....get some pics...

nope, my profile is working (almost) perfectly atm

as i'm not lookin' to meet. It's keeping my inbox down beautifully

when i'm meeting again it won't look like the current train wreck that it is any more

Love your user name made me chuckle. "

Wow real pro fabbers here

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By *uzukiNo1Woman over a year ago

Rhyl

"bullshit legal disclaimer that means sod all...otherwise

Obvious really.....get some pics...

nope, my profile is working (almost) perfectly atm

as i'm not lookin' to meet. It's keeping my inbox down beautifully

when i'm meeting again it won't look like the current train wreck that it is any more "

Yeh I'm sure my constructive criticism didn't warrant an answer knob head......but ok....

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"bullshit legal disclaimer that means sod all...otherwise

Obvious really.....get some pics...

nope, my profile is working (almost) perfectly atm

as i'm not lookin' to meet. It's keeping my inbox down beautifully

when i'm meeting again it won't look like the current train wreck that it is any more

Love your user name made me chuckle.

Wow real pro fabbers here

O wow, total hottie

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By *uxom redCouple over a year ago

Shrewsbury

"bullshit legal disclaimer that means sod all...otherwise

Obvious really.....get some pics...

nope, my profile is working (almost) perfectly atm

as i'm not lookin' to meet. It's keeping my inbox down beautifully

when i'm meeting again it won't look like the current train wreck that it is any more

Love your user name made me chuckle.

Wow real pro fabbers here

Not sure how to take that!

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By *atisfying jackMan over a year ago

Hereford

"bullshit legal disclaimer that means sod all...otherwise

Obvious really.....get some pics...

nope, my profile is working (almost) perfectly atm

as i'm not lookin' to meet. It's keeping my inbox down beautifully

when i'm meeting again it won't look like the current train wreck that it is any more

Yeh I'm sure my constructive criticism didn't warrant an answer knob head......but ok....

Straight to the point on the text, a nice selection of pictures which shows off her many best features.

Not sure if she wants cock pictures or not though

Lovely profile

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"bullshit legal disclaimer that means sod all...otherwise

Obvious really.....get some pics...

nope, my profile is working (almost) perfectly atm

as i'm not lookin' to meet. It's keeping my inbox down beautifully

when i'm meeting again it won't look like the current train wreck that it is any more

Love your user name made me chuckle.

Wow real pro fabbers here

O wow, total hottie "

A really nice profile and super pics.

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By *herryblossom_BJWoman over a year ago

Oxfordshire/Hampshire

"bullshit legal disclaimer that means sod all...otherwise

Obvious really.....get some pics...

nope, my profile is working (almost) perfectly atm

as i'm not lookin' to meet. It's keeping my inbox down beautifully

when i'm meeting again it won't look like the current train wreck that it is any more

Love your user name made me chuckle.

Wow real pro fabbers here

Not sure how to take that!

You have many verifications and variety of photos so you obviously gained alot of experience being here

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"bullshit legal disclaimer that means sod all...otherwise

Bit abrupt & no pics, sorry

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By *aven RedWoman over a year ago

Liverpool

"bullshit legal disclaimer that means sod all...otherwise

Bit abrupt & no pics, sorry

Good write up, maybe more pics? X

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"bullshit legal disclaimer that means sod all...otherwise

Bit abrupt & no pics, sorry

Good write up, maybe more pics? X"

Thank you, aiming to get a few more done over the next week

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By *uxom redCouple over a year ago

Shrewsbury

"bullshit legal disclaimer that means sod all...otherwise

Obvious really.....get some pics...

nope, my profile is working (almost) perfectly atm

as i'm not lookin' to meet. It's keeping my inbox down beautifully

when i'm meeting again it won't look like the current train wreck that it is any more

Love your user name made me chuckle.

Wow real pro fabbers here

Not sure how to take that!

You have many verifications and variety of photos so you obviously gained alot of experience being here"

Most are from socials tbh.

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By *hilloutMan over a year ago

All over the place! Northwesr, , Southwest

Great pictures and a lovely couple in person

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By *sland_kidMan over a year ago

london, manchester, liverpool

"Great pictures and a lovely couple in person

Great profile bio.. although long, it gets the reader’s attention to continue reading.

Could be a great salesperson who sells ice to eskimos

Genuine effort in really portaying himself the way he is.

Good luck lad

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By *uzukiNo1Woman over a year ago

Rhyl

Arhhhhh lovely smiley pics.....first time I've looked at you, crnt be bothered reading the profile to long.....

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By *pursChick aka ShortieWoman over a year ago

On a mooch

"Arhhhhh lovely smiley pics.....first time I've looked at you, crnt be bothered reading the profile to long.....

Clear and precise

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By *sland_kidMan over a year ago

london, manchester, liverpool

"Arhhhhh lovely smiley pics.....first time I've looked at you, crnt be bothered reading the profile to long.....

Is that a hint, i should reduce the number of words in my text?

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Great pictures and a lovely couple in person

Great profile bio.. although long, it gets the reader’s attention to continue reading.

Could be a great salesperson who sells ice to eskimos

Genuine effort in really portaying himself the way he is.

Good luck lad

Chill doesn't need luck, m'dear, he has the ladies queuing at his door

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By *uzukiNo1Woman over a year ago

Rhyl

"Arhhhhh lovely smiley pics.....first time I've looked at you, crnt be bothered reading the profile to long.....

Clear and precise

Scare me when you wink at me!

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By *ruebameMan over a year ago

from the womb and tryout to get back

"Arhhhhh lovely smiley pics.....first time I've looked at you, crnt be bothered reading the profile to long.....

Clear and precise

Scare me when you wink at me!

"
needs to loose anal

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Great pictures and a lovely couple in person

Great profile bio.. although long, it gets the reader’s attention to continue reading.

Could be a great salesperson who sells ice to eskimos

Genuine effort in really portaying himself the way he is.

Good luck lad

Chill doesn't need luck, m'dear, he has the ladies queuing at his door

"
not sure how feisty and shy go together but seems to know what she wants

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By *uzukiNo1Woman over a year ago

Rhyl

"Arhhhhh lovely smiley pics.....first time I've looked at you, crnt be bothered reading the profile to long.....

Clear and precise

Scare me when you wink at me!

needs to loose anal

Needs to do anal!

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By *sland_kidMan over a year ago

london, manchester, liverpool

"Great pictures and a lovely couple in person

Great profile bio.. although long, it gets the reader’s attention to continue reading.

Could be a great salesperson who sells ice to eskimos

Genuine effort in really portaying himself the way he is.

Good luck lad

Chill doesn't need luck, m'dear, he has the ladies queuing at his door

I kind of figured that out

Was just being polite and supportive to a fellow brother

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By *rAitchMan over a year ago

Diagonally Parked in a Parallel Universe

"Arhhhhh lovely smiley pics.....first time I've looked at you, crnt be bothered reading the profile to long.....

Clear and precise

Good, honest profile and the first I've read that contains the word 'piqued'.

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By *ruebameMan over a year ago

from the womb and tryout to get back

"Arhhhhh lovely smiley pics.....first time I've looked at you, crnt be bothered reading the profile to long.....

Clear and precise

Scare me when you wink at me!

needs to loose anal

Needs to do anal!

Needs to take that idea out of her head

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By *uzukiNo1Woman over a year ago

Rhyl

"Arhhhhh lovely smiley pics.....first time I've looked at you, crnt be bothered reading the profile to long.....

Clear and precise

Scare me when you wink at me!

needs to loose anal

Needs to do anal!

Needs to take that idea out of her head

All the time you've known me have i ever not tried to fck your toosh!?.....

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Arhhhhh lovely smiley pics.....first time I've looked at you, crnt be bothered reading the profile to long.....

Clear and precise

Scare me when you wink at me!

needs to loose anal

Needs to do anal!

Needs to take that idea out of her head

All the time you've known me have i ever not tried to fck your toosh!?.....

Spot on profile, just needs to ler the married men in occasionally

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Profiles okay,honest about being married,nice variety of pics

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By *sland_kidMan over a year ago

london, manchester, liverpool

"Profiles okay,honest about being married,nice variety of pics "

Very honest and straight to the point profile.

Knows what she wants and when.

Great variety of pictures as well

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

if you like cats you should have it on your profile im not a fan of andrew lloyd webber

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"if you like cats you should have it on your profile im not a fan of andrew lloyd webber

Haha very funny

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By *arry2525Man over a year ago

lightwater

"if you like cats you should have it on your profile im not a fan of andrew lloyd webber

Haha very funny"

Little criticism I could offer, it’s a great profile. Maybe take a few more photos that aren’t so up close. Camera timer is your friend x

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Get rid of the action pic x

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Lose the smoking pics

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By *ily WhiteWoman over a year ago

Could do with more pictures of Mr Fuckable. But your bio is very clear about what you're looking for

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By *sland_kidMan over a year ago

london, manchester, liverpool

"Lose the smoking pics

Great profile with gorgeous pictures..

No nonsense text to say what they want and the criterias are set for unsolicited messages by “the unwanted” types.

Confident personalities

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By *hy_bangor_bi-girlWoman over a year ago

Bangor

"Lose the smoking pics

More pics of Mr. Profile is good though

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By *arry2525Man over a year ago

lightwater

"Get rid of the action pic x"

You think so?

For what it’s worth I’d keep the smoking pics in! Even though I gave up years ago I still think it looks HAF!

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By *uzukiNo1Woman over a year ago

Rhyl

Action pic ruins the rest of the pics.....hide it maybe...

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By *aven RedWoman over a year ago

Liverpool

The humour is good on your profile. Maybe put the action pic in friends only, write a bit more about yourself x

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By *ames in LaoisMan over a year ago

portloaise

"Get rid of the action pic x

You think so?

For what it’s worth I’d keep the smoking pics in! Even though I gave up years ago I still think it looks HAF! "

Ha Ha. I loved the humour and great selection of pics (even though I know that will be the first criticism of my own profile - no pics). Only thing I would add is maybe just a little about yourself after the humour. Good profile though

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By *pursChick aka ShortieWoman over a year ago

On a mooch

"Get rid of the action pic x

You think so?

For what it’s worth I’d keep the smoking pics in! Even though I gave up years ago I still think it looks HAF! "

Agree with the comments on the action pic

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By *oc30Man over a year ago

Cheltenham

A bit more public pictures

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"The humour is good on your profile. Maybe put the action pic in friends only, write a bit more about yourself x"

good selection of pics, profile direct and factual

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Hardly any profile text

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By *arry2525Man over a year ago

lightwater

Thanks for the tip x

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Thanks for the tip x"

Yes lose the action pic

Profile made me smile

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By *arry2525Man over a year ago

lightwater

"Thanks for the tip x

Yes lose the action pic

Profile made me smile

So did yours! The cat thing was brilliant! I may steal that if that’s ok?

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Lose the smoking pics

"
promote the wife very sexy

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Thanks for the tip x

Yes lose the action pic

Profile made me smile

So did yours! The cat thing was brilliant! I may steal that if that’s ok? "

Thanks,the cat thing is true,but steal away x

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By *pider-WomanWoman over a year ago

Exeter, Bristol, Plymouth, Truro

"Thanks for the tip x

Yes lose the action pic

Profile made me smile

So did yours! The cat thing was brilliant! I may steal that if that’s ok?

Thanks,the cat thing is true,but steal away x"

Great profile maybe add some full length pictures. Lovely lady very witty

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By *uzukiNo1Woman over a year ago

Rhyl

"Thanks for the tip x

Yes lose the action pic

Profile made me smile

So did yours! The cat thing was brilliant! I may steal that if that’s ok?

Thanks,the cat thing is true,but steal away x

Great profile maybe add some full length pictures. Lovely lady very witty

Cannot fault Spidey, beautiful pics as always and text spot on and articulate.....

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By *oiluvfunMan over a year ago

Penrith

"Thanks for the tip x

Yes lose the action pic

Profile made me smile

So did yours! The cat thing was brilliant! I may steal that if that’s ok?

Thanks,the cat thing is true,but steal away x

Great profile maybe add some full length pictures. Lovely lady very witty

Great profile, just a couple of spelling mistakes, but otherwise, pretty good!

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Too drawer! And being a big kettlebell fan myself I salute your sir!

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By *pider-WomanWoman over a year ago

Exeter, Bristol, Plymouth, Truro

"Thanks for the tip x

Yes lose the action pic

Profile made me smile

So did yours! The cat thing was brilliant! I may steal that if that’s ok?

Thanks,the cat thing is true,but steal away x

Great profile maybe add some full length pictures. Lovely lady very witty

Great profile, just a couple of spelling mistakes, but otherwise, pretty good!

I'm on it. Thanks

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By *oiluvfunMan over a year ago

Penrith

"Too drawer! And being a big kettlebell fan myself I salute your sir! "

Thanks buddy! I’m currently swinging mine lol! Take a pic yourself!

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By *oiluvfunMan over a year ago

Penrith

"Thanks for the tip x

Yes lose the action pic

Profile made me smile

So did yours! The cat thing was brilliant! I may steal that if that’s ok?

Thanks,the cat thing is true,but steal away x

Great profile maybe add some full length pictures. Lovely lady very witty

Great profile, just a couple of spelling mistakes, but otherwise, pretty good!

I'm on it. Thanks

Pleasure

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Thanks for the tip x

Yes lose the action pic

Profile made me smile

So did yours! The cat thing was brilliant! I may steal that if that’s ok?

Thanks,the cat thing is true,but steal away x

Great profile maybe add some full length pictures. Lovely lady very witty

Great profile, just a couple of spelling mistakes, but otherwise, pretty good!

I'm on it. Thanks

"
how often do you read about women wanting a Relationship and a Local one, i could understand it if that person was actually seriously able to communicate on a regular basis but the popular women here Are not, so difficult to believe its a serious option but good luck

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By *uzukiNo1Woman over a year ago

Rhyl

"Thanks for the tip x

Yes lose the action pic

Profile made me smile

So did yours! The cat thing was brilliant! I may steal that if that’s ok?

Thanks,the cat thing is true,but steal away x

Great profile maybe add some full length pictures. Lovely lady very witty

Great profile, just a couple of spelling mistakes, but otherwise, pretty good!

I'm on it. Thanks

how often do you read about women wanting a Relationship and a Local one, i could understand it if that person was actually seriously able to communicate on a regular basis but the popular women here Are not, so difficult to believe its a serious option but good luck

Like reading war and peace your profile....

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By *emini ManMan over a year ago

There and to the left a bit

Does the job nicely - perhaps a better selection of pictures? Nothing wrong with those you have just perhaps a few more would enhance it

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By *sland_kidMan over a year ago

london, manchester, liverpool

I am ready for some criticism of my profile as well

Shoot em

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By *uzukiNo1Woman over a year ago

Rhyl

"Does the job nicely - perhaps a better selection of pictures? Nothing wrong with those you have just perhaps a few more would enhance it "

I'm not showing my foof I've told you many times now.....

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By *emini ManMan over a year ago

There and to the left a bit

"Does the job nicely - perhaps a better selection of pictures? Nothing wrong with those you have just perhaps a few more would enhance it

I'm not showing my foof I've told you many times now.....

I wouldn't dream of suggesting you did

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

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By *uzukiNo1Woman over a year ago

Rhyl

"Does the job nicely - perhaps a better selection of pictures? Nothing wrong with those you have just perhaps a few more would enhance it

I'm not showing my foof I've told you many times now.....

I wouldn't dream of suggesting you did

Well ok then.....because I'm not, it's shy...

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By *pider-WomanWoman over a year ago

Exeter, Bristol, Plymouth, Truro

"Thanks for the tip x

Yes lose the action pic

Profile made me smile

So did yours! The cat thing was brilliant! I may steal that if that’s ok?

Thanks,the cat thing is true,but steal away x

Great profile maybe add some full length pictures. Lovely lady very witty

Great profile, just a couple of spelling mistakes, but otherwise, pretty good!

I'm on it. Thanks

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Thanks for the tip x

Yes lose the action pic

Profile made me smile

So did yours! The cat thing was brilliant! I may steal that if that’s ok?

Thanks,the cat thing is true,but steal away x

Great profile maybe add some full length pictures. Lovely lady very witty

Great profile, just a couple of spelling mistakes, but otherwise, pretty good!

I'm on it. Thanks

I'm just trying to be open and honest with people. It also helps filter out the NSA people and us wasting each others time. Nothing is ever a guarantee where a meet may or may not go but you at least need to be on the same page to start....amen "
it would only work if you could get to know the prospective person though how can that happen with the levels of messages you receive, its ok being honest but you also have to be realistic

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By *pider-WomanWoman over a year ago

Exeter, Bristol, Plymouth, Truro

"Thanks for the tip x

Yes lose the action pic

Profile made me smile

So did yours! The cat thing was brilliant! I may steal that if that’s ok?

Thanks,the cat thing is true,but steal away x

Great profile maybe add some full length pictures. Lovely lady very witty

Great profile, just a couple of spelling mistakes, but otherwise, pretty good!

I'm on it. Thanks

I'm just trying to be open and honest with people. It also helps filter out the NSA people and us wasting each others time. Nothing is ever a guarantee where a meet may or may not go but you at least need to be on the same page to start....amen it would only work if you could get to know the prospective person though how can that happen with the levels of messages you receive, its ok being honest but you also have to be realistic

I dont actually receive that may messages as I have a lot of filters on. I'm hard work so most people move on hah. Only time will tell.

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By *sland_kidMan over a year ago

london, manchester, liverpool

no body to criticize me

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By *iamond coupleCouple over a year ago

leeds

Although really pleasing on the eye, your profile pics are like a Holliday guide. Try some suggestive pics that leave us wanting to see more xx

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By *sland_kidMan over a year ago

london, manchester, liverpool

"Although really pleasing on the eye, your profile pics are like a Holliday guide. Try some suggestive pics that leave us wanting to see more xx"

Thank you for that tip. Your comments are Much appreciated.

I will try to oblige

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Although really pleasing on the eye, your profile pics are like a Holliday guide. Try some suggestive pics that leave us wanting to see more xx

Thank you for that tip. Your comments are Much appreciated.

I will try to oblige

"
im sorry i don't Want to see more of you than i have, can we hear please a little bit more of your thoughts on the economy

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By *sland_kidMan over a year ago

london, manchester, liverpool

after all the pints we shared!?

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

after all the pints we shared!?

"
yes im not a drinker hangovers don't rate high on my list lol

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

after all the pints we shared!?

Nice smiley pics and good text

. That mammoth disclaimer has gotta go though

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

he's a really funny guy dont change a thing

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By *sland_kidMan over a year ago

london, manchester, liverpool

"he's a really funny guy dont change a thing

Thanks mate. Appreciate your honesty

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By *sland_kidMan over a year ago

london, manchester, liverpool

after all the pints we shared!?

Nice smiley pics and good text

. That mammoth disclaimer has gotta go though

Thank you... disclaimer is being deleted

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By *hilloutMan over a year ago

All over the place! Northwesr, , Southwest

Great profile. You convey a positive vibe and a person is left with the impression you're good fun to be around. You also smile!

lots of people forget that detail

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By *uzukiNo1Woman over a year ago

Rhyl

War and peace was a shorter read ..

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"War and peace was a shorter read ..

Funny text, great pics, no arse shy guys for this lady

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By *uzukiNo1Woman over a year ago

Rhyl

"War and peace was a shorter read ..

Funny text, great pics, no arse shy guys for this lady

Why thanku Mr Handsome

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By *rAngleseyMan over a year ago

Anglesey

"War and peace was a shorter read ..

Funny text, great pics, no arse shy guys for this lady

Well presented profile with good pics.

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Nothing really...wuit smoking perhaps!

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By *hilloutMan over a year ago

All over the place! Northwesr, , Southwest

Great potential if more time spent developing the profile.

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Great potential if more time spent developing the profile."

You should offer your services as a ghost profile writer. Really well written, good info, humour, great photos.

9/10 - have a cookie and a paper hat.

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By *emini ManMan over a year ago

There and to the left a bit

"Great potential if more time spent developing the profile."

Does what it says on the tin and am sure works well - if there's a criticism to be had it possibly contains a few too many "I's" and "me's", that *some* may read as arrogance, rather than "we's" and "you's" but that's not to detract from the obvious time and effort that has been put into it's construction and is looking for a criticism in the spirit of the thread

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By *emini ManMan over a year ago

There and to the left a bit

"Great potential if more time spent developing the profile.

You should offer your services as a ghost profile writer. Really well written, good info, humour, great photos.

9/10 - have a cookie and a paper hat.

I type too slow!! So apologies for the apparent skip!! Excellent profile that lays out clearly who you are and what you are looking for and backs it up with some excellent pics - if there's a criticism to be had it's possibly a little long and wordy but not sure how you'd shorten it without detracting from it

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By *nabelle21Woman over a year ago

B38

Gemini man..I really like your profile. You have great classy pics. The text is well written and you come across as a warm fun and respectful guy. Honest and of a good nature. My only comment is it's quite long but in saying that you don't waffle on. I think that you are a pretty, hot, cool guy x

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

"Gemini man..I really like your profile. You have great classy pics. The text is well written and you come across as a warm fun and respectful guy. Honest and of a good nature. My only comment is it's quite long but in saying that you don't waffle on. I think that you are a pretty, hot, cool guy x"

You know I think you are amazing, and your profile and pictures are great.

The ONLY thing I can pick out that may put SOME people off you is that you are a smoker. But that's the best I can do! I just can't criticise you at all!

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