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Constructive criticism for the profile above.

By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

Have a read of the profile above in this post and either tell them what you don't like or suggest how they could improve their profile!

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Have a read of the profile above in this post and either tell them what you don't like or suggest how they could improve their profile!"

I like yours as it goes, more pics would be cool.

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By *hilloutMan over a year ago

All over the place! Northwesr, , Southwest

Well written profile and no lack of different and varied pics for appraisal. Well done

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By *lik and PaulCouple over a year ago

Flagrante

Great profile and liking the idea of national snuggle day

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

"Great profile and liking the idea of national snuggle day

Well written profile, clearly got a great sense of humour and some very classy and tastefull pics.

The only thing that I could really pick out and you can't change it and this is just my opinion is you've actually had too many meets

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By *carlet_woman_xxWoman over a year ago

somewhere

"Great profile and liking the idea of national snuggle day

Well written profile, clearly got a great sense of humour and some very classy and tastefull pics.

The only thing that I could really pick out and you can't change it and this is just my opinion is you've actually had too many meets "

I'd never make you cry after sex

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By *ove2lick91Man over a year ago

Wirral

Seems to be a fabtastic profile!

I don't think there's anything i'd change about it... good luck and happy fabbing!

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Great profile and liking the idea of national snuggle day

Well written profile, clearly got a great sense of humour and some very classy and tastefull pics.

The only thing that I could really pick out and you can't change it and this is just my opinion is you've actually had too many meets

I'd never make you cry after sex

Wider age range ...

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By *emini ManMan over a year ago

There and to the left a bit

"Great profile and liking the idea of national snuggle day

Well written profile, clearly got a great sense of humour and some very classy and tastefull pics.

The only thing that I could really pick out and you can't change it and this is just my opinion is you've actually had too many meets

I'd never make you cry after sex

Does what it says on the tin to be honest, and does it well, not sure any changes are needed - from a purely personal perspective would be nice to see more pics but if what you have works for you then that is all that matters

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Nohing to change really exactly everythjng you need to know ... maybe an outdoor photo?

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By *carlet_woman_xxWoman over a year ago

somewhere

"Nohing to change really exactly everythjng you need to know ... maybe an outdoor photo?

Just perfection

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Nohing to change really exactly everythjng you need to know ... maybe an outdoor photo?

Funny! No changes lol

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Pictures are boring. Blokes in pants r a turn off

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By *hilloutMan over a year ago

All over the place! Northwesr, , Southwest

Well written profile and good pics, though could perhaps use a few more

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Pictures are boring. Blokes in pants r a turn off"

Lose the close up pics

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

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By *eastAndTheHarlotCouple over a year ago

Hartlepool

Since we just redone ours we welcome any suggestions

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By *andKBCouple over a year ago

Plymouth

"Since we just redone ours we welcome any suggestions "

Looks like a great couple's profile. to the point and likes and dislikes, etc

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Since we just redone ours we welcome any suggestions

Looks like a great couple's profile. to the point and likes and dislikes, etc"
the mr looks terrified in his pic

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By *cedGemsWoman over a year ago

South West Wales ;-)

Cant cos its hidden pmsl

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Since we just redone ours we welcome any suggestions

Looks like a great couple's profile. to the point and likes and dislikes, etcthe mr looks terrified in his pic"

Its hidden!

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Pictures are boring. Blokes in pants r a turn off

Lose the close up pics"

Very nice, well written profile

I cant really criticise

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Since we just redone ours we welcome any suggestions "

Well written profile, fairly clear on likes and preferences. Personal preference is not showing friends list, but that's just me. Good mix of male and female pics rather than the typical mainly female.

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Cant cos its hidden pmsl

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exactly how i want it to be

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By *carlet_woman_xxWoman over a year ago

somewhere

"Cant cos its hidden pmsl

exactly how i want it to be"

Nice bloke

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Pictures are boring. Blokes in pants r a turn off

Lose the close up pics

Very nice, well written profile

I cant really criticise

Good selection of pictures, all rather sensual.

Funny blurb, nice profile apart the ‘tall’ bit.

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

I'm currently in the process of editing my profile.

Any constructive criticism is very welcome.

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

"I'm currently in the process of editing my profile.

Any constructive criticism is very welcome."

Your profile comes across a bit dull. More like a CV. Try rewording things so it runs smoother and flows better. It can make all the difference mate

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"I'm currently in the process of editing my profile.

Any constructive criticism is very welcome.

Your profile comes across a bit dull. More like a CV. Try rewording things so it runs smoother and flows better. It can make all the difference mate"

Appreciate it. Will do

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"I'm currently in the process of editing my profile.

Any constructive criticism is very welcome.

Your profile comes across a bit dull. More like a CV. Try rewording things so it runs smoother and flows better. It can make all the difference mate

Appreciate it. Will do "

What the other guy said

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

It made me smile....

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"I'm currently in the process of editing my profile.

Any constructive criticism is very welcome.

Your profile comes across a bit dull. More like a CV. Try rewording things so it runs smoother and flows better. It can make all the difference mate

Appreciate it. Will do

What the other guy said

I guess at my age the only time I've had to describe myself is through personal statements an CVs. It's going to be fun trying to shake those habits off.

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

"It made me smile...."

Always nice to see a well written profile but when they are too long that in itself can be a bit off putting.

Just my opinion but slim it down a bit

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Thats made me laugh good profile maybe a bit long tho

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"It made me smile....

Always nice to see a well written profile but when they are too long that in itself can be a bit off putting.

Just my opinion but slim it down a bit"

Made me laugh!! All good! Perhaps more photos?

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"It made me smile....

Always nice to see a well written profile but when they are too long that in itself can be a bit off putting.

Just my opinion but slim it down a bit

Made me laugh!! All good! Perhaps more photos?"

Clear from the start. Nice creative photos and good selection. If you were not winding down I'd suggest a few more and a little humour, other than that I'm sure you've done very well here.

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By *carlet_woman_xxWoman over a year ago

somewhere

"It made me smile....

Always nice to see a well written profile but when they are too long that in itself can be a bit off putting.

Just my opinion but slim it down a bit

Made me laugh!! All good! Perhaps more photos?

Clear from the start. Nice creative photos and good selection. If you were not winding down I'd suggest a few more and a little humour, other than that I'm sure you've done very well here."

Interesting profile. Not for everyone. Nothing wrong with it

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By *oiluvfunMan over a year ago

Penrith

Concise but precise profile text

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

"Concise but precise profile text

You've had 58 verifications so I'm just going to copy and paste your profile and learn from the master!

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By *oiluvfunMan over a year ago

Penrith

"Concise but precise profile text

You've had 58 verifications so I'm just going to copy and paste your profile and learn from the master!

Veris aren’t everything my friend, and I’ve been in here over 8 years, but thank you for your appreciation

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Concise but precise profile text

You've had 58 verifications so I'm just going to copy and paste your profile and learn from the master!

Your profile name ... Love it or hate it!

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By *eastAndTheHarlotCouple over a year ago

Hartlepool

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"[Removed by poster at 11/06/19 00:17:36]"

Dont remove it. It's rather good.

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"[Removed by poster at 11/06/19 00:17:36]

Dont remove it. It's rather good."

I missed it lol!

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By *nowwhitexxx1Woman over a year ago

Hull

Well thought out profile and pics.. Clear about what you like and enjoy.

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Well thought out profile and pics.. Clear about what you like and enjoy.

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plenty off info and knows what she wants yeah good profile

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Well thought out profile and pics.. Clear about what you like and enjoy.

plenty off info and knows what she wants yeah good profile"
short n sweet with good pics

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

"Well thought out profile and pics.. Clear about what you like and enjoy.

plenty off info and knows what she wants yeah good profile short n sweet with good pics "

In my opinion although there is plenty of body to Your profile writing, it seems a bit jumbled up and not really fluid and your pictures seem a little bland mate.

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Could do with more pics, you can carry it off easily.

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Could do with more pics, you can carry it off easily."

Very informative and a good array of pics..

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By *LIRTWITHUSCouple over a year ago

Chester

"Could do with more pics, you can carry it off easily."

awesome, that is all

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

No criticism from us

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"No criticism from us

More cream required..

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

To the point well written get rid of the pointless warnings at the end

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By *VineMan over a year ago

The right place

"To the point well written get rid of the pointless warnings at the end"

Could do with a bit more of a description and correct the spelling mistakes

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"To the point well written get rid of the pointless warnings at the end"

The photos are good but need more and variety to them.

A bit more about yourself, what you are looking for and what you have to offer,but don’t forget to add your own stand out personality traits and sense of humour.

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By *lem-H-FandangoMan over a year ago

salisbury

"To the point well written get rid of the pointless warnings at the end

The photos are good but need more and variety to them.

A bit more about yourself, what you are looking for and what you have to offer,but don’t forget to add your own stand out personality traits and sense of humour.

LJ"

I don't enjoy profiles where each half describes the other. Makes me cringe lol.

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Apart from one or two spelling mistakes, quite good. Different and engaging, with good pictures.

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By *LIRTWITHUSCouple over a year ago

Chester

"To the point well written get rid of the pointless warnings at the end

The photos are good but need more and variety to them.

A bit more about yourself, what you are looking for and what you have to offer,but don’t forget to add your own stand out personality traits and sense of humour.

I don't enjoy profiles where each half describes the other. Makes me cringe lol. "

Like some torso pics

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By *ruebameMan over a year ago

from the womb and tryout to get back

"To the point well written get rid of the pointless warnings at the end

The photos are good but need more and variety to them.

A bit more about yourself, what you are looking for and what you have to offer,but don’t forget to add your own stand out personality traits and sense of humour.

I don't enjoy profiles where each half describes the other. Makes me cringe lol.

Like some torso pics

Needs more wine pics

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By *LIRTWITHUSCouple over a year ago

Chester

"To the point well written get rid of the pointless warnings at the end

The photos are good but need more and variety to them.

A bit more about yourself, what you are looking for and what you have to offer,but don’t forget to add your own stand out personality traits and sense of humour.

I don't enjoy profiles where each half describes the other. Makes me cringe lol.

Like some torso pics

Needs more wine pics

Needs to share wine together

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"To the point well written get rid of the pointless warnings at the end

The photos are good but need more and variety to them.

A bit more about yourself, what you are looking for and what you have to offer,but don’t forget to add your own stand out personality traits and sense of humour.

I don't enjoy profiles where each half describes the other. Makes me cringe lol.

Like some torso pics

Needs more wine pics

Needs to share wine together

Need to share more than wine

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

More face pics

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"More face pics

Adding on friends only

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By *aven RedWoman over a year ago

Liverpool

More wet t shirt pics x

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By *ustinCredible.Man over a year ago

whitecross/sankey valley

"More wet t shirt pics x"

Perfect profile all info and pics any body could need to know they'd want to meet you

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

"More wet t shirt pics x

Perfect profile all info and pics any body could need to know they'd want to meet you"

Strong enough profile but I think you could do with working on your pictures mate

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"More wet t shirt pics x

Perfect profile all info and pics any body could need to know they'd want to meet you

Strong enough profile but I think you could do with working on your pictures mate"

like the profile, like the pics he needs to be in my bed

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

"More wet t shirt pics x

Perfect profile all info and pics any body could need to know they'd want to meet you

Strong enough profile but I think you could do with working on your pictures mate

like the profile, like the pics he needs to be in my bed

Your profile makes a good read but adding more pictures would make it more appealing

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"More wet t shirt pics x

Perfect profile all info and pics any body could need to know they'd want to meet you

Strong enough profile but I think you could do with working on your pictures mate

like the profile, like the pics he needs to be in my bed

Your profile makes a good read but adding more pictures would make it more appealing "

I just love marmite

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By *imon the welderMan over a year ago

Northampton

Good profile and made me laugh out loud...

His undies are obviously knock-offs from China, some clown's put the writing on backwards

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Good profile and made me laugh out loud...

His undies are obviously knock-offs from China, some clown's put the writing on backwards"

Good selection of photos. Profile text is straight to the point. No complaints from me.

~Mia

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Good profile and made me laugh out loud...

His undies are obviously knock-offs from China, some clown's put the writing on backwards

Good selection of photos. Profile text is straight to the point. No complaints from me.

~Mia "

Similar for you. It's bang on for me, great profile and pictures.

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By *ools and the brainCouple over a year ago

couple, us we him her.

Crack on.

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Try to have a picture of you holding your cock in your hand

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By *nglishCharmMan over a year ago

Midlands

Great profile, photos also great

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Great profile, photos also great

Thank you for the kiss

..you need more photos though

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By *lem-H-FandangoMan over a year ago

salisbury

"Apart from one or two spelling mistakes, quite good. Different and engaging, with good pictures. "

I am a bit dyslexic, which words are incorrectly spelt please?

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Apart from one or two spelling mistakes, quite good. Different and engaging, with good pictures.

I am a bit dyslexic, which words are incorrectly spelt please?"

I know I am a bloke, but yeah...a good profile, making it clear what you’re looking for!

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Apart from one or two spelling mistakes, quite good. Different and engaging, with good pictures.

I am a bit dyslexic, which words are incorrectly spelt please?

I know I am a bloke, but yeah...a good profile, making it clear what you’re looking for!"

Has great photos.

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

"Apart from one or two spelling mistakes, quite good. Different and engaging, with good pictures.

I am a bit dyslexic, which words are incorrectly spelt please?

I know I am a bloke, but yeah...a good profile, making it clear what you’re looking for!

Has great photos. "

Not much to read on your profile bit if you aren't looking to meet I guess it doesn't need anything

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Apart from one or two spelling mistakes, quite good. Different and engaging, with good pictures.

I am a bit dyslexic, which words are incorrectly spelt please?

I know I am a bloke, but yeah...a good profile, making it clear what you’re looking for!

Has great photos.

Not much to read on your profile bit if you aren't looking to meet I guess it doesn't need anything"

Yep exactly!

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Apart from one or two spelling mistakes, quite good. Different and engaging, with good pictures.

I am a bit dyslexic, which words are incorrectly spelt please?

I know I am a bloke, but yeah...a good profile, making it clear what you’re looking for!

Has great photos.

Not much to read on your profile bit if you aren't looking to meet I guess it doesn't need anything

Yep exactly!

As above, you’re not looking...but thanks for letting us still have a perv!!

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Apart from one or two spelling mistakes, quite good. Different and engaging, with good pictures.

I am a bit dyslexic, which words are incorrectly spelt please?

I know I am a bloke, but yeah...a good profile, making it clear what you’re looking for!

Has great photos.

Not much to read on your profile bit if you aren't looking to meet I guess it doesn't need anything

Yep exactly!

As above, you’re not looking...but thanks for letting us still have a perv!!"

Good pics, nice blurb. No comment, all good

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By *uzukiNo1Woman over a year ago

Rhyl

"Apart from one or two spelling mistakes, quite good. Different and engaging, with good pictures.

I am a bit dyslexic, which words are incorrectly spelt please?

I know I am a bloke, but yeah...a good profile, making it clear what you’re looking for!

Has great photos.

Not much to read on your profile bit if you aren't looking to meet I guess it doesn't need anything

Yep exactly!

As above, you’re not looking...but thanks for letting us still have a perv!!

Good pics, nice blurb. No comment, all good"

Crnt be bothered looking .....but yeh great

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Apart from one or two spelling mistakes, quite good. Different and engaging, with good pictures.

I am a bit dyslexic, which words are incorrectly spelt please?

I know I am a bloke, but yeah...a good profile, making it clear what you’re looking for!

Has great photos.

Not much to read on your profile bit if you aren't looking to meet I guess it doesn't need anything

Yep exactly!

As above, you’re not looking...but thanks for letting us still have a perv!!

Good pics, nice blurb. No comment, all good

Crnt be bothered looking .....but yeh great

Lovely lady and she likes my boat

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By *uzukiNo1Woman over a year ago

Rhyl

"Apart from one or two spelling mistakes, quite good. Different and engaging, with good pictures.

I am a bit dyslexic, which words are incorrectly spelt please?

I know I am a bloke, but yeah...a good profile, making it clear what you’re looking for!

Has great photos.

Not much to read on your profile bit if you aren't looking to meet I guess it doesn't need anything

Yep exactly!

As above, you’re not looking...but thanks for letting us still have a perv!!

Good pics, nice blurb. No comment, all good

Crnt be bothered looking .....but yeh great

Lovely lady and she likes my boat

Hehehe she has a cracking boat

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By *man013Man over a year ago

Derby

"Apart from one or two spelling mistakes, quite good. Different and engaging, with good pictures.

I am a bit dyslexic, which words are incorrectly spelt please?

I know I am a bloke, but yeah...a good profile, making it clear what you’re looking for!

Has great photos.

Not much to read on your profile bit if you aren't looking to meet I guess it doesn't need anything

Yep exactly!

As above, you’re not looking...but thanks for letting us still have a perv!!

Good pics, nice blurb. No comment, all good

Crnt be bothered looking .....but yeh great

Lovely lady and she likes my boat

Hehehe she has a cracking boat

Too much hat not enough explicit content

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By *eclanHMan over a year ago

Liphook

"Apart from one or two spelling mistakes, quite good. Different and engaging, with good pictures.

I am a bit dyslexic, which words are incorrectly spelt please?

I know I am a bloke, but yeah...a good profile, making it clear what you’re looking for!

Has great photos.

Not much to read on your profile bit if you aren't looking to meet I guess it doesn't need anything

Yep exactly!

As above, you’re not looking...but thanks for letting us still have a perv!!

Good pics, nice blurb. No comment, all good

Crnt be bothered looking .....but yeh great

Lovely lady and she likes my boat

Hehehe she has a cracking boat

Too much hat not enough explicit content

Gman, I think the photo with your face scratched out in red can be deleted.

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By *LIRTWITHUSCouple over a year ago

Chester

"Apart from one or two spelling mistakes, quite good. Different and engaging, with good pictures.

I am a bit dyslexic, which words are incorrectly spelt please?

I know I am a bloke, but yeah...a good profile, making it clear what you’re looking for!

Has great photos.

Not much to read on your profile bit if you aren't looking to meet I guess it doesn't need anything

Yep exactly!

As above, you’re not looking...but thanks for letting us still have a perv!!

Good pics, nice blurb. No comment, all good

Crnt be bothered looking .....but yeh great

Lovely lady and she likes my boat

Hehehe she has a cracking boat

Too much hat not enough explicit content

Gman, I think the photo with your face scratched out in red can be deleted."

Says straight, bio says bi, step up from fab straight suppose

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By *hilloutMan over a year ago

All over the place! Northwesr, , Southwest

Fipeter

You both come across as an experienced, fun and laid back swinging couple. Good variety of pics of both of you, which isn't common in couple's profiles.

Well done all around

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By *ustme34Man over a year ago

Bradford

I'll say I'm in on this I need to re do it so could be good advice

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By *hilloutMan over a year ago

All over the place! Northwesr, , Southwest

You'll need some public pics, and much more text on your profile better describing how you are, what you can offer and what you're looking for.

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By *uzukiNo1Woman over a year ago

Rhyl

"Apart from one or two spelling mistakes, quite good. Different and engaging, with good pictures.

I am a bit dyslexic, which words are incorrectly spelt please?

I know I am a bloke, but yeah...a good profile, making it clear what you’re looking for!

Has great photos.

Not much to read on your profile bit if you aren't looking to meet I guess it doesn't need anything

Yep exactly!

As above, you’re not looking...but thanks for letting us still have a perv!!

Good pics, nice blurb. No comment, all good

Crnt be bothered looking .....but yeh great

Lovely lady and she likes my boat

Hehehe she has a cracking boat

Too much hat not enough explicit content

Kiss it

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

"I'll say I'm in on this I need to re do it so could be good advice

Positive- photo verified

Negatives

No profile pic- crap

Vague description- crap

No pictures- crap

Start from scratch and make an effort.

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By *LIRTWITHUSCouple over a year ago

Chester

"Fipeter

You both come across as an experienced, fun and laid back swinging couple. Good variety of pics of both of you, which isn't common in couple's profiles.

Well done all around

Thank you very much - yours teasing and enticing pics, great bio, spot on

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By *aven RedWoman over a year ago

Liverpool

"Fipeter

You both come across as an experienced, fun and laid back swinging couple. Good variety of pics of both of you, which isn't common in couple's profiles.

Well done all around

Thank you very much - yours teasing and enticing pics, great bio, spot on

Great pics, both together, well written bio, no help in being constructive sorry x

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Fipeter

Great couples profile. Very clear on what you want, great selection of tasteful pictures and a warm welcoming bio.

Cracking profile!

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By *oiluvfunMan over a year ago

Penrith

A nice, open profile

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Not bad but why would someone need to block you if they dont like kissing. Just move on...

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By *ete le MeatMan over a year ago

Derbyshire/ Notts

Nice legs

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By *tella HeelsTV/TS over a year ago

west here ford shire

Why buy s miniature pac of pringles?

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By *oiluvfunMan over a year ago

Penrith

"Not bad but why would someone need to block you if they dont like kissing. Just move on..."

Taken onboard, and altered, thank you

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By *eclanHMan over a year ago

Liphook

"Apart from one or two spelling mistakes, quite good. Different and engaging, with good pictures.

I am a bit dyslexic, which words are incorrectly spelt please?

I know I am a bloke, but yeah...a good profile, making it clear what you’re looking for!

Has great photos.

Not much to read on your profile bit if you aren't looking to meet I guess it doesn't need anything

Yep exactly!

As above, you’re not looking...but thanks for letting us still have a perv!!

Good pics, nice blurb. No comment, all good

Crnt be bothered looking .....but yeh great

Lovely lady and she likes my boat

Hehehe she has a cracking boat

Too much hat not enough explicit content

Gman, I think the photo with your face scratched out in red can be deleted.

Says straight, bio says bi, step up from fab straight suppose"

Feedback taken and actioned.

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By *ust PeachyWoman over a year ago

Prestonish

"Apart from one or two spelling mistakes, quite good. Different and engaging, with good pictures.

I am a bit dyslexic, which words are incorrectly spelt please?

I know I am a bloke, but yeah...a good profile, making it clear what you’re looking for!

Has great photos.

Not much to read on your profile bit if you aren't looking to meet I guess it doesn't need anything

Yep exactly!

As above, you’re not looking...but thanks for letting us still have a perv!!

Good pics, nice blurb. No comment, all good

Crnt be bothered looking .....but yeh great

Lovely lady and she likes my boat

Hehehe she has a cracking boat

Too much hat not enough explicit content

Gman, I think the photo with your face scratched out in red can be deleted.

Says straight, bio says bi, step up from fab straight suppose

Feedback taken and actioned."

Nice profile!

No suggestions I’m afraid! X

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By *hilloutMan over a year ago

All over the place! Northwesr, , Southwest

DeclanH

You're honest and have laid things out in your profile text. You describe what you're about and what you're looking for.

Face on public pics which is bold and saves you the hassle of sending face pics when messaging. Decent photos and no hanging appendages which for most people is a plus

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"DeclanH

You're honest and have laid things out in your profile text. You describe what you're about and what you're looking for.

Face on public pics which is bold and saves you the hassle of sending face pics when messaging. Decent photos and no hanging appendages which for most people is a plus

Stop being quite so darn sexy and give the other lads a chance ?

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By *obletonMan over a year ago

A Home Among The Woodland Creatures

_hillout

Pretty good - I would have tended to go with something a little more lighthearted - a little more succinct - a little less dry - perhaps get an attention grabber in early in the text to delay the inevitable "scroll down for pics move" - but that's my style and not his.

But cleasrly written by a smart attractive and intelligent guy.

Head and shoulders above the average profile

I will have to have him assasinated immediately

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"DeclanH

You're honest and have laid things out in your profile text. You describe what you're about and what you're looking for.

Face on public pics which is bold and saves you the hassle of sending face pics when messaging. Decent photos and no hanging appendages which for most people is a plus

Stop being quite so darn sexy and give the other lads a chance ?

Just constructive ... no criticism ...

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"DeclanH

You're honest and have laid things out in your profile text. You describe what you're about and what you're looking for.

Face on public pics which is bold and saves you the hassle of sending face pics when messaging. Decent photos and no hanging appendages which for most people is a plus

Stop being quite so darn sexy and give the other lads a chance ?

Just constructive ... no criticism ...

It's a good profile!

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By *eclanHMan over a year ago

Liphook

Very kind people. Not sure what ya’ll smoking but I want some of it.

Tobleton, I take your point about seriousness. My humour is mostly dry and understated. And I have been thinking about how to lighten it up a bit. It doesn’t scream fun. But I’m a fun guy, serious.

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By *eclanHMan over a year ago

Liphook

"I will have to have him assasinated immediately"

Come at me, bro.

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By *obletonMan over a year ago

A Home Among The Woodland Creatures

"Very kind people. Not sure what ya’ll smoking but I want some of it.

Declan - I was critiquing Chillout

But happy to take a look at yours - gimme a mo......

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By *eclanHMan over a year ago

Liphook

"Very kind people. Not sure what ya’ll smoking but I want some of it.

Declan - I was critiquing Chillout

But happy to take a look at yours - gimme a mo......"

Ha!

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By *eclanHMan over a year ago

Liphook

"Very kind people. Not sure what ya’ll smoking but I want some of it.

Declan - I was critiquing Chillout

But happy to take a look at yours - gimme a mo......

Ha!"

Things make so much more sense now

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By *obletonMan over a year ago

A Home Among The Woodland Creatures

DeclanH - pretty similar critique to the one I gave Chillout

I'm firmly of the view that if you don't grab someones attention with your profile within the first couple of lines, then it's "straight to pics" and you stand and fall by them and them alone.

Now you're a good looking guy in decent shape and your pics show it - but I reckon you've got more to offer someone than a life support system for a cock that's easy on the eye right?

I'd move paragraph 6 to the beginning - make it a little more playful - deliberately and obviuosly contradict yourself for fun.

Move the stuff about being married further down - give people more of a chance to like you before they give themselves an excuse not to.

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By *eclanHMan over a year ago

Liphook

DeclanH - pretty similar critique to the one I gave Chillout

I'm firmly of the view that if you don't grab someones attention with your profile within the first couple of lines, then it's "straight to pics" and you stand and fall by them and them alone.

Now you're a good looking guy in decent shape and your pics show it - but I reckon you've got more to offer someone than a life support system for a cock that's easy on the eye right?

I'd move paragraph 6 to the beginning - make it a little more playful - deliberately and obviuosly contradict yourself for fun.

Move the stuff about being married further down - give people more of a chance to like you before they give themselves an excuse not to.

That’s great feedback. Thank you.

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By *eorgeS5875Man over a year ago

Norfolk / Newcastle

To be honest i wouldnt have any idea where to critique your profile, its far more well rounded than mind.

Good effort and happy fabbing.

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Nothing I can see wrong. If I was a lady and nearby I'd possibly message you

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By * and M lookingCouple over a year ago

Worcester

Hit the sunbed and maybe lose the action shot

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By *eorgeS5875Man over a year ago

Norfolk / Newcastle

Just simply wow.

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Just simply wow. "

You're too young for me but that is a good profile and photos! Nice ...

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Just simply wow.

You're too young for me but that is a good profile and photos! Nice ... "

Move location a couple of hundred miles north xx

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Just simply wow.

You're too young for me but that is a good profile and photos! Nice ...

Move location a couple of hundred miles north xx"

Lol

better surfing here!

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By *ruebameMan over a year ago

from the womb and tryout to get back

"Just simply wow.

You're too young for me but that is a good profile and photos! Nice ...

Move location a couple of hundred miles north xx

Lol

better surfing here! "

Nice body

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Just simply wow.

You're too young for me but that is a good profile and photos! Nice ...

Move location a couple of hundred miles north xx

Lol

better surfing here!

Nice body "

Likewise ...

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Just simply wow.

You're too young for me but that is a good profile and photos! Nice ...

Move location a couple of hundred miles north xx

Lol

better surfing here!

Nice body

Likewise ... "

Interesting text, I just wonder how many people will actually read it?

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By *emini ManMan over a year ago

There and to the left a bit

"Just simply wow.

You're too young for me but that is a good profile and photos! Nice ...

Move location a couple of hundred miles north xx

Lol

better surfing here!

Nice body

Likewise ...

Interesting text, I just wonder how many people will actually read it?"

More public pics required - text is immaterial as you're a woman, but perhaps more about what you do want than what you don't?

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Just simply wow.

You're too young for me but that is a good profile and photos! Nice ...

Move location a couple of hundred miles north xx

Lol

better surfing here!

Nice body

Likewise ...

Interesting text, I just wonder how many people will actually read it?

More public pics required - text is immaterial as you're a woman, but perhaps more about what you do want than what you don't?

Don’t know what I want though. Yes. Get it about the pics. Cheers. Your profile is very clever. Wouldn’t change a thing

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By *ilth500Man over a year ago

Merseyside

"Just simply wow.

You're too young for me but that is a good profile and photos! Nice ...

Move location a couple of hundred miles north xx

Lol

better surfing here!

Nice body

Likewise ...

Interesting text, I just wonder how many people will actually read it?

More public pics required - text is immaterial as you're a woman, but perhaps more about what you do want than what you don't?

Don’t know what I want though. Yes. Get it about the pics. Cheers. Your profile is very clever. Wouldn’t change a thing

move closer to Liverpool

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By *eastAndTheHarlotCouple over a year ago

Hartlepool

"Just simply wow.

You're too young for me but that is a good profile and photos! Nice ...

Move location a couple of hundred miles north xx

Lol

better surfing here!

Nice body

Likewise ...

Interesting text, I just wonder how many people will actually read it?

More public pics required - text is immaterial as you're a woman, but perhaps more about what you do want than what you don't?

Don’t know what I want though. Yes. Get it about the pics. Cheers. Your profile is very clever. Wouldn’t change a thing

move closer to Liverpool

Space it out a bit. It's very clumped together as one paragraph.

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Appreciate some on mine please x

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Just simply wow.

You're too young for me but that is a good profile and photos! Nice ...

Move location a couple of hundred miles north xx

Lol

better surfing here!

Nice body

Likewise ...

Interesting text, I just wonder how many people will actually read it?

More public pics required - text is immaterial as you're a woman, but perhaps more about what you do want than what you don't?

Don’t know what I want though. Yes. Get it about the pics. Cheers. Your profile is very clever. Wouldn’t change a thing

move closer to Liverpool

Space it out a bit. It's very clumped together as one paragraph."

Only thing I’d say is that where you say “ if we’ve winked we’d like to talk” ... why not just talk?

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Not sure what the photo with cash is saying?!

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

I’d like some feedback on my profile if anyone can?

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By *eastAndTheHarlotCouple over a year ago

Hartlepool

"Just simply wow.

You're too young for me but that is a good profile and photos! Nice ...

Move location a couple of hundred miles north xx

Lol

better surfing here!

Nice body

Likewise ...

Interesting text, I just wonder how many people will actually read it?

More public pics required - text is immaterial as you're a woman, but perhaps more about what you do want than what you don't?

Don’t know what I want though. Yes. Get it about the pics. Cheers. Your profile is very clever. Wouldn’t change a thing

move closer to Liverpool

Space it out a bit. It's very clumped together as one paragraph.

Only thing I’d say is that where you say “ if we’ve winked we’d like to talk” ... why not just talk?

Because sometimes we like to wink

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By *uzukiNo1Woman over a year ago

Rhyl

"Just simply wow.

You're too young for me but that is a good profile and photos! Nice ...

Move location a couple of hundred miles north xx

Lol

better surfing here!

Nice body

Likewise ...

Interesting text, I just wonder how many people will actually read it?

More public pics required - text is immaterial as you're a woman, but perhaps more about what you do want than what you don't?

Don’t know what I want though. Yes. Get it about the pics. Cheers. Your profile is very clever. Wouldn’t change a thing

move closer to Liverpool

Space it out a bit. It's very clumped together as one paragraph.

Only thing I’d say is that where you say “ if we’ve winked we’d like to talk” ... why not just talk?

Because sometimes we like to wink

Really nice profile pic....

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By *LIRTWITHUSCouple over a year ago

Chester

"Just simply wow.

You're too young for me but that is a good profile and photos! Nice ...

Move location a couple of hundred miles north xx

Lol

better surfing here!

Nice body

Likewise ...

Interesting text, I just wonder how many people will actually read it?

More public pics required - text is immaterial as you're a woman, but perhaps more about what you do want than what you don't?

Don’t know what I want though. Yes. Get it about the pics. Cheers. Your profile is very clever. Wouldn’t change a thing

move closer to Liverpool

Space it out a bit. It's very clumped together as one paragraph.

Only thing I’d say is that where you say “ if we’ve winked we’d like to talk” ... why not just talk?

Because sometimes we like to wink

Really nice profile pic....

Loves adrenaline

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By *ruebameMan over a year ago

from the womb and tryout to get back

"Just simply wow.

You're too young for me but that is a good profile and photos! Nice ...

Move location a couple of hundred miles north xx

Lol

better surfing here!

Nice body

Likewise ...

Interesting text, I just wonder how many people will actually read it?

More public pics required - text is immaterial as you're a woman, but perhaps more about what you do want than what you don't?

Don’t know what I want though. Yes. Get it about the pics. Cheers. Your profile is very clever. Wouldn’t change a thing

move closer to Liverpool

Space it out a bit. It's very clumped together as one paragraph.

Only thing I’d say is that where you say “ if we’ve winked we’d like to talk” ... why not just talk?

Because sometimes we like to wink

Really nice profile pic....

Loves adrenaline"

Needs some pics with me in them

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By *LIRTWITHUSCouple over a year ago

Chester

"Just simply wow.

You're too young for me but that is a good profile and photos! Nice ...

Move location a couple of hundred miles north xx

Lol

better surfing here!

Nice body

Likewise ...

Interesting text, I just wonder how many people will actually read it?

More public pics required - text is immaterial as you're a woman, but perhaps more about what you do want than what you don't?

Don’t know what I want though. Yes. Get it about the pics. Cheers. Your profile is very clever. Wouldn’t change a thing

move closer to Liverpool

Space it out a bit. It's very clumped together as one paragraph.

Only thing I’d say is that where you say “ if we’ve winked we’d like to talk” ... why not just talk?

Because sometimes we like to wink

Really nice profile pic....

Loves adrenaline

Needs some pics with me in them

Needs to share wine

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Needs to share wife

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By *ruebameMan over a year ago

from the womb and tryout to get back

"Just simply wow.

You're too young for me but that is a good profile and photos! Nice ...

Move location a couple of hundred miles north xx

Lol

better surfing here!

Nice body

Likewise ...

Interesting text, I just wonder how many people will actually read it?

More public pics required - text is immaterial as you're a woman, but perhaps more about what you do want than what you don't?

Don’t know what I want though. Yes. Get it about the pics. Cheers. Your profile is very clever. Wouldn’t change a thing

move closer to Liverpool

Space it out a bit. It's very clumped together as one paragraph.

Only thing I’d say is that where you say “ if we’ve winked we’d like to talk” ... why not just talk?

Because sometimes we like to wink

Really nice profile pic....

Loves adrenaline

Needs some pics with me in them

Needs to share wine

Needs to lick wine from my body

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By *LIRTWITHUSCouple over a year ago

Chester

"Just simply wow.

You're too young for me but that is a good profile and photos! Nice ...

Move location a couple of hundred miles north xx

Lol

better surfing here!

Nice body

Likewise ...

Interesting text, I just wonder how many people will actually read it?

More public pics required - text is immaterial as you're a woman, but perhaps more about what you do want than what you don't?

Don’t know what I want though. Yes. Get it about the pics. Cheers. Your profile is very clever. Wouldn’t change a thing

move closer to Liverpool

Space it out a bit. It's very clumped together as one paragraph.

Only thing I’d say is that where you say “ if we’ve winked we’d like to talk” ... why not just talk?

Because sometimes we like to wink

Really nice profile pic....

Loves adrenaline

Needs some pics with me in them

Needs to share wine

Needs to lick wine from my body

Off to purchase serious amount of wine

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By *ruebameMan over a year ago

from the womb and tryout to get back

"Just simply wow.

You're too young for me but that is a good profile and photos! Nice ...

Move location a couple of hundred miles north xx

Lol

better surfing here!

Nice body

Likewise ...

Interesting text, I just wonder how many people will actually read it?

More public pics required - text is immaterial as you're a woman, but perhaps more about what you do want than what you don't?

Don’t know what I want though. Yes. Get it about the pics. Cheers. Your profile is very clever. Wouldn’t change a thing

move closer to Liverpool

Space it out a bit. It's very clumped together as one paragraph.

Only thing I’d say is that where you say “ if we’ve winked we’d like to talk” ... why not just talk?

Because sometimes we like to wink

Really nice profile pic....

Loves adrenaline

Needs some pics with me in them

Needs to share wine

Needs to lick wine from my body

Off to purchase serious amount of wine

Waits naked in anticipation

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By *LIRTWITHUSCouple over a year ago

Chester

"Just simply wow.

You're too young for me but that is a good profile and photos! Nice ...

Move location a couple of hundred miles north xx

Lol

better surfing here!

Nice body

Likewise ...

Interesting text, I just wonder how many people will actually read it?

More public pics required - text is immaterial as you're a woman, but perhaps more about what you do want than what you don't?

Don’t know what I want though. Yes. Get it about the pics. Cheers. Your profile is very clever. Wouldn’t change a thing

move closer to Liverpool

Space it out a bit. It's very clumped together as one paragraph.

Only thing I’d say is that where you say “ if we’ve winked we’d like to talk” ... why not just talk?

Because sometimes we like to wink

Really nice profile pic....

Loves adrenaline

Needs some pics with me in them

Needs to share wine

Needs to lick wine from my body

Off to purchase serious amount of wine

Waits naked in anticipation

Needs patience lol

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Just simply wow.

You're too young for me but that is a good profile and photos! Nice ...

Move location a couple of hundred miles north xx

Lol

better surfing here!

Nice body

Likewise ...

Interesting text, I just wonder how many people will actually read it?

More public pics required - text is immaterial as you're a woman, but perhaps more about what you do want than what you don't?

Don’t know what I want though. Yes. Get it about the pics. Cheers. Your profile is very clever. Wouldn’t change a thing

move closer to Liverpool

Space it out a bit. It's very clumped together as one paragraph.

Only thing I’d say is that where you say “ if we’ve winked we’d like to talk” ... why not just talk?

Because sometimes we like to wink

Really nice profile pic....

Loves adrenaline

Needs some pics with me in them

Needs to share wine

Needs to lick wine from my body

Off to purchase serious amount of wine

Waits naked in anticipation

Needs patience lol

Needs to get a room with Pruebame

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By *layfullsamMan over a year ago

Solihull

"Just simply wow.

You're too young for me but that is a good profile and photos! Nice ...

Move location a couple of hundred miles north xx

Lol

better surfing here!

Nice body

Likewise ...

Interesting text, I just wonder how many people will actually read it?

More public pics required - text is immaterial as you're a woman, but perhaps more about what you do want than what you don't?

Don’t know what I want though. Yes. Get it about the pics. Cheers. Your profile is very clever. Wouldn’t change a thing

move closer to Liverpool

Space it out a bit. It's very clumped together as one paragraph.

Only thing I’d say is that where you say “ if we’ve winked we’d like to talk” ... why not just talk?

Because sometimes we like to wink

Really nice profile pic....

Loves adrenaline

Needs some pics with me in them

Needs to share wine

Needs to lick wine from my body

Off to purchase serious amount of wine

Waits naked in anticipation

Needs patience lol

Needs to get a room with Pruebame

Missing a meet and play verification from me

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By *LIRTWITHUSCouple over a year ago

Chester

Wants to be playful

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By *VineMan over a year ago

The right place

"Wants to be playful"

More boob pics. They are practically perfect

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By *eliWoman over a year ago

"Wants to be playful

More boob pics. They are practically perfect "

You need a dick pic. Full on, over a toilet bowl one/next to a can of Lynx. What's the point of being on fab if you're not going to embrace it?

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By *irty Flirty HarryMan over a year ago

East Sussex

"Wants to be playful

More boob pics. They are practically perfect

You need a dick pic. Full on, over a toilet bowl one/next to a can of Lynx. What's the point of being on fab if you're not going to embrace it? "

Nice pics but personally I would like to see a few more.

Listing some interests might be interesting lol x

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Wants to be playful

More boob pics. They are practically perfect

You need a dick pic. Full on, over a toilet bowl one/next to a can of Lynx. What's the point of being on fab if you're not going to embrace it?

Nice pics but personally I would like to see a few more.

Listing some interests might be interesting lol x

Great profile, but I’d lose the blue jeans, blue shirt pic, double denim is for the likes of Hugh Jackman I’m afraid

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By *reckledbumWoman over a year ago

Blackpool

A smile on one of your pics would be my only criticism

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Nice profile and pics. Definitely one of the nicer profiles I've seen on fab.

"Wants to be playful

More boob pics. They are practically perfect

You need a dick pic. Full on, over a toilet bowl one/next to a can of Lynx. What's the point of being on fab if you're not going to embrace it?

Nice pics but personally I would like to see a few more.

Listing some interests might be interesting lol x

Great profile, but I’d lose the blue jeans, blue shirt pic, double denim is for the likes of Hugh Jackman I’m afraid"

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By *LIRTWITHUSCouple over a year ago

Chester

"Nice profile and pics. Definitely one of the nicer profiles I've seen on fab.

Wants to be playful

More boob pics. They are practically perfect

You need a dick pic. Full on, over a toilet bowl one/next to a can of Lynx. What's the point of being on fab if you're not going to embrace it?

Nice pics but personally I would like to see a few more.

Listing some interests might be interesting lol x

Great profile, but I’d lose the blue jeans, blue shirt pic, double denim is for the likes of Hugh Jackman I’m afraid"

Know what they want

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By *ilth500Man over a year ago

Merseyside

great body on the Mrs.. pictures are great

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By *ilth500Man over a year ago

Merseyside

"Just simply wow.

You're too young for me but that is a good profile and photos! Nice ...

Move location a couple of hundred miles north xx

Lol

better surfing here!

Nice body

Likewise ...

Interesting text, I just wonder how many people will actually read it?

More public pics required - text is immaterial as you're a woman, but perhaps more about what you do want than what you don't?

Don’t know what I want though. Yes. Get it about the pics. Cheers. Your profile is very clever. Wouldn’t change a thing

move closer to Liverpool

Space it out a bit. It's very clumped together as one paragraph."

done. thanks

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Nowt wrong with it ?

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By *LIRTWITHUSCouple over a year ago

Chester

"Nowt wrong with it ?"

Needs classy pics

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Nowt wrong with it ?

Needs classy pics"

Just left wanting to see more xx

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"A smile on one of your pics would be my only criticism

My smile is lopsided

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By *iddlesticksMan over a year ago

My nan’s spare room.

"Nowt wrong with it ?

Needs classy pics

Just left wanting to see more xx"

You’re strapline about you’ve already found what you’re looking for, could appear cocky, although you quantify it in your text.

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By *reckledbumWoman over a year ago

Blackpool

"A smile on one of your pics would be my only criticism

My smile is lopsided

Why the sad face?

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Need to sort your photos out

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Need to sort your photos out"

Needs undressing and caressing with my lips and tongue all over your body mmm

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Need to sort your photos out"

Needs clarification on a definition of 'decent package' I mean ball park it for us do we need to be half man/half donkey or something more reasonable

other than that looks good

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By *ust PeachyWoman over a year ago

Prestonish

"Need to sort your photos out

Needs clarification on a definition of 'decent package' I mean ball park it for us do we need to be half man/half donkey or something more reasonable

other than that looks good

I think you should smile on your pictures - everyone looks better with a smile!

Though I think it’s great that you’ve written about yourself rather than sex in your bio - I think a paragraph or so about what you like sexually and what you ‘bring to the table’ would be a good idea!

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By *andm300Man over a year ago

guildford

I like how you put personality into your write up. I thought you made it very clear what you are looking for. Its nice to see someone comfortable with who they are and what they want.

Ricky

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By *LIRTWITHUSCouple over a year ago

Chester

"I like how you put personality into your write up. I thought you made it very clear what you are looking for. Its nice to see someone comfortable with who they are and what they want.

Ricky"

Very nice pics of you both, makes a lovely change xx

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By *andare63Man over a year ago

oldham

Great pics and seemingly friendly down to earth peeps

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Great pics and seemingly friendly down to earth peeps

A few more pics would be nice (we need more as well lol) x

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By *nglishCharmMan over a year ago

Midlands

The two you have are stunning

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By *ookingformilfsMan over a year ago

Derby

"Great pics and seemingly friendly down to earth peeps

A few more pics would be nice (we need more as well lol) x"

Profile reads great, as you say just a few more pics of you both, and you will be fine.

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By *LIRTWITHUSCouple over a year ago

Chester

"Great pics and seemingly friendly down to earth peeps

A few more pics would be nice (we need more as well lol) x"

Yes pics of King also needed xx

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Need to sort your photos out

Needs clarification on a definition of 'decent package' I mean ball park it for us do we need to be half man/half donkey or something more reasonable

other than that looks good

I think you should smile on your pictures - everyone looks better with a smile!

I hate smiling in picture I feel awkward so it just comes across and so I always look angry or upset.

Yeah ok thanks for the advice I'll get on it!

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