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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"OP what do you think could be improved?
(If you click reply+quote we’ll know who you’re replying too) "
Sorry! I'm unsure that's why I'm asking for advice :/ |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Your age will go against you, most people are looking for older.
Your pics are either too far away or too close and many are blurry.
Your profile text isn't exactly inspiring, it doesn't show much personality or what you can offer. |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Your age will go against you, most people are looking for older.
Your pics are either too far away or too close and many are blurry.
Your profile text isn't exactly inspiring, it doesn't show much personality or what you can offer. "
Thanks for the advice  |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Shite profile, crap pics
I think that just about sums it up
Sorry if that sounds mean, but it does nothing at all to separate you from the thousands of other guys in exactly the same boat
A re-think is required
That, however, needs to come from you, not us
Based on your current profile, I'd read that you are young, like older women, likes boats and has been to Amsterdam
I'm sure there is more to you than that however, so c'mon ... |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Shite profile, crap pics
I think that just about sums it up
Sorry if that sounds mean, but it does nothing at all to separate you from the thousands of other guys in exactly the same boat
A re-think is required
That, however, needs to come from you, not us
Based on your current profile, I'd read that you are young, like older women, likes boats and has been to Amsterdam
I'm sure there is more to you than that however, so c'mon ..."
Thanks |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Picky only cos you asked.
Look at the age range.. 99 you say mature but really..adapt it.
Your profile is naf i agree with others no insights or uniqueness to it.
Unfortunately .. your age..
Suggest get to socials or clubs to expand yourself
Your over 10 a penny on here n doesnt stand out.
Change your pic. i see scrubbed out faces whats the point of it being there .. better profile pic defo needed. Save face shot for private.. like most of us do.
Good luck
Im out
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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You've only been on here 4 weeks, this is nothing in Fab time.
There are links on my profile to some great forum posts with advice for single men. Read, understand, use and you might become more successful.
As others have said, your age will be against you. But good luck. |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Where's that beach in your pics btw?
Looks stunning "
Crete northern side. Not many tourists they're as a few years ago a fire was started in the hills and took most buildings.
Now it turns out to be a popular nudist beach ?? |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"I'm struggling to get any body serious (lone f or mf) anything I'm doing wrong...
Any pointers for my profile would be good!
Cheers fab
JX "
Ignore the criticism, dear boy. You've made an elementary mistake which a minor readjustment will correct.
Your profile ought to suggest a craftsman, a sculptor even. The rough edges hewn away and then, and only then, do you hone. Hone it, reshape then hone, hone again. Until it is sharp, like Damascus steel in it's whetted precision.
Wryly, nay..deftly, amusing. Something to raise her eyebrow, not the corner of her mouth. When she places her top teeth on her lower lip (it must, must be the corner), you will know the arrow of your profile flies true. Yet even the finest fletchery will not assure you strike the heart. There is more to do.
Your picture suggests a man of action. A strong hand at the tiller on a tempestuous sea of desperate men. She must feel that coursing through you; those ripples will vibrate at her secret place where few dare to know.
Quote liberally (but not randomly) from the classics, for they will serve you well. I caution you against poetry. The surest line may strike the hardest part of her soul and all will be for nought.
Do not promise: deliver. Take no umbrage, for rejection says her core has been scaled but not breached. In time, she will come to you.
Go forth.
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By (user no longer on site)
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"Where's that beach in your pics btw?
Looks stunning
Crete northern side. Not many tourists they're as a few years ago a fire was started in the hills and took most buildings.
Now it turns out to be a popular nudist beach ??"
Oh Jesus - don't get 'em started on nudist beaches in here this weekend |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"I'm struggling to get any body serious (lone f or mf) anything I'm doing wrong...
Any pointers for my profile would be good!
Cheers fab
JX
Ignore the criticism, dear boy. You've made an elementary mistake which a minor readjustment will correct.
Your profile ought to suggest a craftsman, a sculptor even. The rough edges hewn away and then, and only then, do you hone. Hone it, reshape then hone, hone again. Until it is sharp, like Damascus steel in it's whetted precision.
Wryly, nay..deftly, amusing. Something to raise her eyebrow, not the corner of her mouth. When she places her top teeth on her lower lip (it must, must be the corner), you will know the arrow of your profile flies true. Yet even the finest fletchery will not assure you strike the heart. There is more to do.
Your picture suggests a man of action. A strong hand at the tiller on a tempestuous sea of desperate men. She must feel that coursing through you; those ripples will vibrate at her secret place where few dare to know.
Quote liberally (but not randomly) from the classics, for they will serve you well. I caution you against poetry. The surest line may strike the hardest part of her soul and all will be for nought.
Do not promise: deliver. Take no umbrage, for rejection says her core has been scaled but not breached. In time, she will come to you.
Go forth.
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Fan-fuckin-tastic  |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Where's that beach in your pics btw?
Looks stunning
Crete northern side. Not many tourists they're as a few years ago a fire was started in the hills and took most buildings.
Now it turns out to be a popular nudist beach ??
Oh Jesus - don't get 'em started on nudist beaches in here this weekend"
That's where I rented that boat too ,???? |
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