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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Profile text is alright, pics are a bit boring
In one of them I thought you were on a kitchen counter and just envisioned you accidentally chopping the wee man off |
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There is nothing wrong with your profile.
Your pics are very sort of ' spare of the moment' ..... but they do show who you are and what you have got.
The text is very uhmmmmm bland like you are applying for a job. I seldom believe profiles that say .....' i'll do you gently if you like or i can be dominant if you like.. just suggests that you are edging your bets.
Be a bit more assertive about who you are and what you want. It's more likely to get you they type of people you are looking for.
That will be just £30 please.
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Not bad,, though you have missed the opportunity to really impress, I'm guessing about who you are.
Photos are a bit similar, so consider alternative views of your body or other parts. It's generally good you've got no cock pics. |
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By *emini ManMan
over a year ago
There and to the left a bit |
Have seen a lot worse OP but would say it reads a little more like a dating ad than something for here - there's also a lot of "I" in there which gives the impression this is all about you rather than a shared mutually rewarding experience.
I think what I'm saying is you have a good skeleton but need to put some meat and personality on it - try and make it stand out a little, even unique in some way.
As others have said your pics are a little boring and samey - maybe learn how to use the timer and editing software on your phone camera and if you're stuck for ideas look around at other well verified single male profiles for inspiration.
Oh and you need to decide if you're discrete or discreet 
Oh and lastly you say you cannot accommodate - you might want to clarify the reasons for that - a lot here will automatically assume (rightly or wrongly) that it means you're attached.
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Have seen a lot worse OP but would say it reads a little more like a dating ad than something for here - there's also a lot of "I" in there which gives the impression this is all about you rather than a shared mutually rewarding experience.
I think what I'm saying is you have a good skeleton but need to put some meat and personality on it - try and make it stand out a little, even unique in some way.
As others have said your pics are a little boring and samey - maybe learn how to use the timer and editing software on your phone camera and if you're stuck for ideas look around at other well verified single male profiles for inspiration.
Oh and you need to decide if you're discrete or discreet
Oh and lastly you say you cannot accommodate - you might want to clarify the reasons for that - a lot here will automatically assume (rightly or wrongly) that it means you're attached.
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To be fair it's quite tricky writing about yourself without using the "I". |
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"Profile text is alright, pics are a bit boring
In one of them I thought you were on a kitchen counter and just envisioned you accidentally chopping the wee man off"
I get where your coming from picks are quiet bland thanks for looking it over appreciated |
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"There is nothing wrong with your profile.
Your pics are very sort of ' spare of the moment' ..... but they do show who you are and what you have got.
The text is very uhmmmmm bland like you are applying for a job. I seldom believe profiles that say .....' i'll do you gently if you like or i can be dominant if you like.. just suggests that you are edging your bets.
Be a bit more assertive about who you are and what you want. It's more likely to get you they type of people you are looking for.
That will be just £30 please.
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I am a dominant person but it depends on the situation I suppose and it is a bit like I'm posting for a job it's a work in progress
Do you take card lol |
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By *emini ManMan
over a year ago
There and to the left a bit |
"Have seen a lot worse OP but would say it reads a little more like a dating ad than something for here - there's also a lot of "I" in there which gives the impression this is all about you rather than a shared mutually rewarding experience.
I think what I'm saying is you have a good skeleton but need to put some meat and personality on it - try and make it stand out a little, even unique in some way.
As others have said your pics are a little boring and samey - maybe learn how to use the timer and editing software on your phone camera and if you're stuck for ideas look around at other well verified single male profiles for inspiration.
Oh and you need to decide if you're discrete or discreet
Oh and lastly you say you cannot accommodate - you might want to clarify the reasons for that - a lot here will automatically assume (rightly or wrongly) that it means you're attached.
To be fair it's quite tricky writing about yourself without using the "I"."
It's how much you use it that is key, and what I was referring to - too much of it though and like I said it can give the impression of it being all about the profile owner's wants and not what they can offer others.
And congrats you don't have a single "I" in yours |
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