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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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hi guys could u let us know wat u think of our profile does it need revamping etc are piks in corect places etc honest answers are very welcome x bex  |
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No pics of the male, that would help, there are 2 of you, so show that.
Also try some full stops and punctuation, makes for very difficult reading.
The information itself is ok, just difficult to read. |
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Definitely try to break up the text. The trick is to read it outloud...right now there are no gaps for breath!
i found it too hard to read, so if u messaged us probably wouldnt message back unless i already knew you.
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Yeah its quite hard to read,, also on his pics i managed for a longtime without a facepic on my topsheet it's not hard to black it out or get one from behind X
between us (well relatively) if i read your page i would think it was a male writing it and posting pictures of a girl as men tend to write like that (no punctuation and written as its said so maybe think about softening it up a little bit.  |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Yeah, same as said before, mainly tidy up the paragraphs and bad spelling mistakes etc.
I know my own spelling isn't the best but try and actually use proper words and not some hacked up jumble of letters like "ure" instead of you're and "wen" instead of when etc etc.
Needless to say though, from your pictures, nobody is going to be put off from wanting to meet you by whatever you having in your profile, just your pictures will be enough  |
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Just a thought, if you can't have a picture of Greg up because of his work, have none of his work colleagues met you?
Because if they recognise you, then they are bound to realise you are married to him, and therefore on as a couple.
It doesn't have to be a face pic, just a torso/body shot. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Very good photos.
The text is still a little cluttered.
Try hitting the enter key at the end of your sentences to break it up, this will make it easier to read.
The content of the text is straight forward and is clear as to what you want from a meet.
Nice profile  |
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