It's good to see photos of you both and overall it's a decent profile.
However, I would concentrate on saying what you do want, as this comes across more positively.
I'd also loose the warning at the end and double check spelling and grammar.
Nita
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Without sounding negative it's not really any different from any other couples profile that I come across.
Its decent and well written but yes I see what you mean about something missing but not being able to put your finger on it. It would be a profile I would probably reply to you if I got a message, but it's not one that I would feel the urge too send a message to if that makes any sense. |
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