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over a year ago
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"Well something is putting people off now this cold be my ugly mug or my badly worded profile so what I’m after is some profile advice
Many Thanks in advance
Mike"
There is no profile wording ... Bulk it out a bit  |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Why would someone go to the effort of asking you stuff when you've not bothered to make an effort yourself? You need to be way more informative, sell yourself my lovely. |
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over a year ago
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"Well something is putting people off now this cold be my ugly mug or my badly worded profile so what I’m after is some profile advice
Many Thanks in advance
Mike"
8 words does not constitute a profile....
its hardly even a sentence...
your profile is your shop window … get some advertising in place or prepare to be boarded up  |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Your profile is an advertisement for yourself .
If you read your profile woukd you pick you ?
Think about what you want to say and put it down .
Sell yourself that's what it's all about  |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Well something is putting people off now this cold be my ugly mug or my badly worded profile so what I’m after is some profile advice
Many Thanks in advance
Mike
There is no profile wording ... Bulk it out a bit "
U kidding its already far too wordy took me ages to get thru that  |
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"Ok so thank you for everyone’s advice I had a bit of a profile update any more advice or criticism would be great"
It’s better. I could be super critical but sometimes people just have to find their own way. Read your profile out loud, exactly as it is written and see what it sounds like. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Your tagline bit at the top doesn't make sense.
You could do with some more flattering pics as the angle ypuve taken them from isnt great.
Your text is quite negative, maybe try adding what you can offer? |
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