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over a year ago
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Hi guys,
I’m about half way through writing a few erotic short stories that i will be realising on Amazon kindle soon but I’m a bit torn on what way to take the story
It’s of a MF couple in the mid 20’s
Male has always been secretly bi curious and begins to experiment with anal play culminating in him using her rabbit before telling her about his desires to explore anal but not with another man.
They eventually get a strapon and while fucking he lets slip he wants a BBC.
Now as I have it at the moment she will find out he is into cuckolding find a man on a site like this
Surprise her bf by riding a bbc then is his turn obviously more elaborate than that but I’m not giving it all away
However I’m toying with the idea of him keeping her in the dark and planning it all himself having her blindfolded only to let her take it off and find him riding a bbc
Just want some thoughts thanks |
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"You could do a chapter on the importance of washing the sex toys as not to transmit diseases. "
I was at the thought of a guy using his girlfriend's rabbit in that way. For me there is not enough bleach in the world. However I decided that he used a condom on it and then washed it thoroughly before carefully rinsing to avoid upsetting her delicate ph balance. It's just not terribly erotic to put that in the story . |
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She organises a 3some with him and a black guy.she wears her strap on . He is blindfolded. He feels his ass being fucked and is loving it. Then at same time feels his cock being sucked. He doesnt know who is sucking and who is fuckng and he doesn't care. |
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"She organises a 3some with him and a black guy.she wears her strap on . He is blindfolded. He feels his ass being fucked and is loving it. Then at same time feels his cock being sucked. He doesnt know who is sucking and who is fuckng and he doesn't care."
Yeah I like that I kind of want her to start off fucking the black guy though so maybe he stays blindfolded and tied just so he can hear it? |
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"Is the couple in their mid 20s or is it set in the mid 20s?
The rabbit would be very confusing if it's the latter"
Ha whole new meaning to pulling the rabbit out of the hat |
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"She organises a 3some with him and a black guy.she wears her strap on . He is blindfolded. He feels his ass being fucked and is loving it. Then at same time feels his cock being sucked. He doesnt know who is sucking and who is fuckng and he doesn't care.
Yeah I like that I kind of want her to start off fucking the black guy though so maybe he stays blindfolded and tied just so he can hear it?"
Yeah deffo |
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