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"So I wrote music last night at bandcamp and am stuck for lyrics. I'm trusting you lot to give me ideas.  "
Might help to hear the tune or at least know if it's fast, slow, how the notes/chords etc are structured and spaced? |
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"So I wrote music last night at bandcamp and am stuck for lyrics. I'm trusting you lot to give me ideas.
Might help to hear the tune or at least know if it's fast, slow, how the notes/chords etc are structured and spaced?"
boom! |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
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"So I wrote music last night at bandcamp and am stuck for lyrics. I'm trusting you lot to give me ideas.
Might help to hear the tune or at least know if it's fast, slow, how the notes/chords etc are structured and spaced?"
I'd post it if I could. It's quite spacey but proper catchy. Alot of open chords and stuff, medium paced a bit like Dakota I think. |
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By *.1079Man
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"So I wrote music last night at bandcamp and am stuck for lyrics. I'm trusting you lot to give me ideas.
Might help to hear the tune or at least know if it's fast, slow, how the notes/chords etc are structured and spaced?"
yeah cause it's easy to do this on a forum thread |
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"So I wrote music last night at bandcamp and am stuck for lyrics. I'm trusting you lot to give me ideas.
Might help to hear the tune or at least know if it's fast, slow, how the notes/chords etc are structured and spaced? boom! "
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"So I wrote music last night at bandcamp and am stuck for lyrics. I'm trusting you lot to give me ideas.
Might help to hear the tune or at least know if it's fast, slow, how the notes/chords etc are structured and spaced?
yeah cause it's easy to do this on a forum thread "
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By (user no longer on site)
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"So I wrote music last night at bandcamp and am stuck for lyrics. I'm trusting you lot to give me ideas.
Might help to hear the tune or at least know if it's fast, slow, how the notes/chords etc are structured and spaced?
I'd post it if I could. It's quite spacey but proper catchy. Alot of open chords and stuff, medium paced a bit like Dakota I think. "
That is really vague????
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By (user no longer on site) OP
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"So I wrote music last night at bandcamp and am stuck for lyrics. I'm trusting you lot to give me ideas.
Might help to hear the tune or at least know if it's fast, slow, how the notes/chords etc are structured and spaced?
I'd post it if I could. It's quite spacey but proper catchy. Alot of open chords and stuff, medium paced a bit like Dakota I think.
That is really vague????
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Ok, open A, g minor diminished, e minor 7th, A major. |
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"So I wrote music last night at bandcamp and am stuck for lyrics. I'm trusting you lot to give me ideas.
Might help to hear the tune or at least know if it's fast, slow, how the notes/chords etc are structured and spaced?
I'd post it if I could. It's quite spacey but proper catchy. Alot of open chords and stuff, medium paced a bit like Dakota I think.
That is really vague????
Ok, open A, g minor diminished, e minor 7th, A major. "
Don’t tell him Pike |
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"You've obviously got to incorporate leeches into the song title somehow.
But have you got any for this? "
No, but Jayne Mansfield did help me extract some lobsters from up me bum 
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By (user no longer on site) OP
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"So I wrote music last night at bandcamp and am stuck for lyrics. I'm trusting you lot to give me ideas.
Might help to hear the tune or at least know if it's fast, slow, how the notes/chords etc are structured and spaced?
I'd post it if I could. It's quite spacey but proper catchy. Alot of open chords and stuff, medium paced a bit like Dakota I think.
That is really vague????
Ok, open A, g minor diminished, e minor 7th, A major.
Don’t tell him Pike "
That's it, it will be next week's no 1 on top of the pops and I'll be jumping up and down shouting that's my song. |
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"So I wrote music last night at bandcamp and am stuck for lyrics. I'm trusting you lot to give me ideas.
Might help to hear the tune or at least know if it's fast, slow, how the notes/chords etc are structured and spaced?
I'd post it if I could. It's quite spacey but proper catchy. Alot of open chords and stuff, medium paced a bit like Dakota I think.
That is really vague????
Ok, open A, g minor diminished, e minor 7th, A major.
Don’t tell him Pike
That's it, it will be next week's no 1 on top of the pops and I'll be jumping up and down shouting that's my song. "
Exactly, you should always hold a little back |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
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"So I wrote music last night at bandcamp and am stuck for lyrics. I'm trusting you lot to give me ideas.
Might help to hear the tune or at least know if it's fast, slow, how the notes/chords etc are structured and spaced?
I'd post it if I could. It's quite spacey but proper catchy. Alot of open chords and stuff, medium paced a bit like Dakota I think.
That is really vague????
Ok, open A, g minor diminished, e minor 7th, A major.
Don’t tell him Pike
That's it, it will be next week's no 1 on top of the pops and I'll be jumping up and down shouting that's my song.
Exactly, you should always hold a little back "
I always try to hold back. I just think of Jimmy hill and tyres. |
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"So I wrote music last night at bandcamp and am stuck for lyrics. I'm trusting you lot to give me ideas.
Might help to hear the tune or at least know if it's fast, slow, how the notes/chords etc are structured and spaced?
I'd post it if I could. It's quite spacey but proper catchy. Alot of open chords and stuff, medium paced a bit like Dakota I think.
That is really vague????
Ok, open A, g minor diminished, e minor 7th, A major.
Don’t tell him Pike
That's it, it will be next week's no 1 on top of the pops and I'll be jumping up and down shouting that's my song.
Exactly, you should always hold a little back
I always try to hold back. I just think of Jimmy hill and tyres. "
Ohh I don’t know I quite like hairy chins and rubber |
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"You need to pick a topic first, what would you like your song to be about?
Also what's your target audience? "
We are a band that did originals a few years ago and got very well known but as we got older decided to do covers and pub gigs but we've decided to be more creative again and record just for us, for our own satisfaction. I'd just like some ideas as I'm only a guitar player and can make a good tune but shit at writing lyrics. I think I would like to write something about the open minded people on here but without giving it away as I'm respectful. |
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We are a band that did originals a few years ago and got very well known but as we got older decided to do covers and pub gigs but we've decided to be more creative again and record just for us, for our own satisfaction. I'd just like some ideas as I'm only a guitar player and can make a good tune but shit at writing lyrics. I think I would like to write something about the open minded people on here but without giving it away as I'm respectful. "
That makes sense, but it really is hard to write lyrics that will fit with some music without hearing the music.
When I used to write, many years ago... what we would do is start with kind of a basic story overview. So if you want to base it on swinging, you could start by narrowing it down to a smaller part of the lifestyle (eg... the story of a happy swinging couple, of maybe about the never successful single guy). Then we can start telling the story.
Cal
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We are a band that did originals a few years ago and got very well known but as we got older decided to do covers and pub gigs but we've decided to be more creative again and record just for us, for our own satisfaction. I'd just like some ideas as I'm only a guitar player and can make a good tune but shit at writing lyrics. I think I would like to write something about the open minded people on here but without giving it away as I'm respectful.
That makes sense, but it really is hard to write lyrics that will fit with some music without hearing the music.
When I used to write, many years ago... what we would do is start with kind of a basic story overview. So if you want to base it on swinging, you could start by narrowing it down to a smaller part of the lifestyle (eg... the story of a happy swinging couple, of maybe about the never successful single guy). Then we can start telling the story.
Cal
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Cheers Cal, |
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"So I wrote music last night at bandcamp and am stuck for lyrics. I'm trusting you lot to give me ideas.
This music you wrote at bandcamp, your didnt by any chance write it with a flute?  "
There was this 1 time at bandcamp. |
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"So I wrote music last night at bandcamp and am stuck for lyrics. I'm trusting you lot to give me ideas.
This music you wrote at bandcamp, your didnt by any chance write it with a flute? "
Probably more of a pink oboe while he was polishing a rusty trombone |
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"So I wrote music last night at bandcamp and am stuck for lyrics. I'm trusting you lot to give me ideas.
This music you wrote at bandcamp, your didnt by any chance write it with a flute?
Probably more of a pink oboe while he was polishing a rusty trombone "
Well Ace, you've given me an idea there. It doesn't involve pink oboes though. |
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"So I wrote music last night at bandcamp and am stuck for lyrics. I'm trusting you lot to give me ideas.
This music you wrote at bandcamp, your didnt by any chance write it with a flute?
There was this 1 time at bandcamp. "
I knew someone would get it..... |
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