Be honest let me know how sad or corny this sounds tonight I saw a stunning woman in my local shop our eyes me I should have spoke to here but was in my work clothes so not looking my best.so thought I would see if she's a member here so put it on status I know probably million to one chance but she looked worth making myself look Licke some loved up teenager for if she is and looks at it.is that sad or what.bet all you guys think it is and ready for the usual keyboard warriors to say so and give me some stick before you do we have all been in this position before just I'm trying to do something about it.and lady's be honest but if she's not and you fancy helping me get over and stop thinking about what could have been and would love to mend this broken heart of mine I'm sure I could put down my box of tissues (that's for drying my eyes but I like the way your thinking)pick myself up from this very dark place and chat meet anything.now is that sad I'm ready for your comments I can take it.if she's here and rember me or not and you want to find out I will post again with the conclusion.ps I'm always up for a pity shag hope you all take this in jest as I'm a nice guy really. |
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And breathe!
Couldn't read it all as it didn't make any sense, lots of spelling mistakes and all in one block.
Maybe sit down and re write it all, use spell check, lots of computers have it built in... or if using your mobile phone, try looking at the words typed.
Hope this helps for your future stories. |
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"And breathe!
Couldn't read it all as it didn't make any sense, lots of spelling mistakes and all in one block.
Maybe sit down and re write it all, use spell check, lots of computers have it built in... or if using your mobile phone, try looking at the words typed.
Hope this helps for your future stories."
He didn't ask for an English lesson! I'm sure you got the jist of what he was saying.
Anyway all you can do is keep going in there Op I suppose,good luck! |
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I dunno how you could have a. Token heart from one encounter with a hot woman.
I've seen a guy around for 21 months now that I think is hot but unfortunately (for me) he's married so just have to endure seeing him around.
Focus attentions elsewhere. |
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Good point thanks for advice.will take it on board.just new to This part. Better to have constructive criticism than brave keyboard warriors.who let's just wouldn't say what they write to people face to face.cheers mate. |
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That's nice to know not really anything to do with post but thanks for reading and making a comment.and yes knaphill.probley not changed Much.woking has good for shopping at night good if you like fighting.do you remember the centre halls back in the 80s.when people fought 1 on 1 well most of the time and raley went running to the police when they started and lost.anyone who knows me yes still bitter.and all grown up now well almost.  |
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Thank you must say I'm sure I'm not the only one that has bad grammar and spelling.on here predictive text and hitting wrong keys on phone.but hey never wanted to be an author at least his comments got you to stick up for me thanks.bet he's gutted to see your post.x for you love.
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Hahaha bless you.
I had the very same a week last Wednesday at coffee club. Kickin myself for not going over to him for a chat. He wasn't there this wed....... 
ptu xxx |
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"Hahaha bless you.
I had the very same a week last Wednesday at coffee club. Kickin myself for not going over to him for a chat. He wasn't there this wed.......
ptu xxx
Next week x"
I'm hoping so. My friend has been doing a bit of miss marpling  xx |
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Your right next time I won't hesitate and from now on wear my best clothes to work lol.still never know could find something to take my mind of it.as you said if something looks go just go for it.so I just have.thanks for taking time to look at my post and comment not put anything up before it's nice to get people chatting.now need to get grammar in order.  |
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Ignore the grammar and spelling police if that's all they have to worry about then it's a poor show.
Press reply and quote tho so we know who your talking too x |
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