I can't see a problem. You're very clear in what you want which I think is a good thing and offer to help with others fantasies. Your pictures are clear. I would say remove the line about not letting the profile put you off, it made me wonder what I was going to be reading .
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By *emini ManMan
over a year ago
There and to the left a bit |
I've seen a lot worse OP - although I would say it's all about you and what you want - know you say you're happy to help with others fantasies but you perhaps need to expand on that a little and get across some of what you can offer.
There's also a few things you've repeated e.g. "I'm here to fulfill several fantasies" and "we meet in a bar" - minor things I know but would help tidy it up a little.
Agree re the "don't let this profile put you off" thing - is almost like you're setting yourself up for rejection.
Maybe add a few more pics along the lines of your first one that show off your body - as for the cock pic, opinion is divided - some like them, some don't - personally I think they're better when they're not disembodied and the main focus of the pic ![](/icons/thumb_up.png) |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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On first impressions your profile is a little bit me, me, me. I would add a little more around what you can do for somebody else. Do you prefer a social meet before any play for instance?
Also, I would prefer to see a face picture as well as the two that you have which by the way are very nice. |
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