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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Having not seen much of your posting, bar what the green arrow has shown. Can I offer a couple of nuggets?
Your profile is terrible, the legal warning guff is meaningless and would you really take someone to court if they stole one of your photo's.
The other thing I've noticed is you seem to latch onto the first woman who replies to you, thinking she's showing you interest. The forum doesn't generally work like that.
Be yourself, but not look desperate. It takes patience and a well thought out profile. |
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By *emini ManMan
over a year ago
There and to the left a bit |
"Write a decent profile!
I'm not sure what to write to be honest"
Take a look at other single guy profiles for ideas - you need to sell yourself, tell the reader what you are looking for and can offer get some of your personality across. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Thanks for all the help guys much appreciated "
You're welcome, the main thing is that you now take the advice and make changes. Many guys before you have done the whole 'what can I do' or 'help me' type threads and then ignore all the advice given. |
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"Thanks for all the help guys much appreciated
You're welcome, the main thing is that you now take the advice and make changes. Many guys before you have done the whole 'what can I do' or 'help me' type threads and then ignore all the advice given."
I changed it up abit, any better? Or should I make it longer still |
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By *emini ManMan
over a year ago
There and to the left a bit |
"Thanks for all the help guys much appreciated
You're welcome, the main thing is that you now take the advice and make changes. Many guys before you have done the whole 'what can I do' or 'help me' type threads and then ignore all the advice given.
I changed it up abit, any better? Or should I make it longer still"
To be brutally honest...it's no better at all. Reads like you just tacked a bit on to what you already had and you've left the pointless legal blurb in too.
Think of your profile as your CV - if you submitted a CV like yours reads do you think you'd get the job? |
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By *ieman300Man
over a year ago
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"Write a decent profile!
I'm not sure what to write to be honest"
If you got rid of the last 3 paragraphs that would be an improvement. People dont tell you to get rid of the sydney copyright bollox without good reason. |
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Four paragraphs in your profile and three of them are legal warnings. If you're that frightened why have a face pic ?
Also when I first saw your pic, the way you are stood makes you look like you only have one leg. Forgive me, for asking this, but people make snap judgements on lots of things  And not everyone will meet non able bodied.
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Get a pen and paper (yes they do still exist), and right down things about your personality, the type of woman that is attractive to you, your best features, what a woman can expect from a liaison with you, what you hope to experience with the woman you meet.
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By *emini ManMan
over a year ago
There and to the left a bit |
"How about the new look one ??"
Major improvement OP - like some of the humour you've now injected into it. As a previous poster said it does need a spelling/grammar check, appreciate that's not everyones strong point but getting it right will make a lot of difference.
I'd also consider some pics of you smiling - the ones you have are OK, but they're a bit serious looking. Maybe add some that show off your body too. |
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