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Suggestions or Improvements anyone? I think it's not too bad, i likes it
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Hey Hey, I recently finished my profile and wanted to know what people (mainly females) think of it (:
Don't apologise for being harsh if you think you are, say it strong lol, I can handle it
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By *emini ManMan
over a year ago
There and to the left a bit |
Being totally honest if that's the best you've come up with in 7 weeks of being here then I don't rate your chances very highly.
Your one pic does you no justice at all and just comes across as a little silly - consider posting some that show off your body (but not your cock).
Your profile blurb is one step up from 'will fill in later' at least but doesn't really read any differently from hundreds of other single male profiles on here - you need to get across some of your personality and not only what you're looking for but what you think you can offer. It doesn't need to be War And Peace but it should act as a shop window to sell you to anyone reading it. Currently it doesn't - actually reads like very little effort has been made and you know what they say about little effort in... |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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1 photo which isn't particularly interesting or inspiring and the suggestion you smoke won't sit well with lots on here. ..you need to explain why you can't accommodate because people may think youre attached. ..you need to up your game x |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Hey Hey, I recently finished my profile and wanted to know what people (mainly females) think of it (:
Don't apologise for being harsh if you think you are, say it strong lol, I can handle it
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Everyone above has given you ample reasons why your profile is poor. I'd heed their advice.
I'm just replying, as I'm female and you wanted
female opinions. My opinion -- it's poor. Very poor. No apology. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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We'd echo all the other posts. If we were looking for a single male we'd pass you by. Really non-inspiring.
You don't tell us anything you're into, you don't even know yourself. Therefore what are we going to get from you?
The way it reads you appear cocky.
The one picture you have gives nothing away what so ever.
We'd prefer to meet the bat, however we understand you meant you're not keen sending face pictures straight away.
The last single guy we met had a few good pics and his narrative told us what he wanted from a meet. |
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Hello OP.
Right tighty... so, your profile pic is you having a little snooze. Which is ok, we all like a nap now and then (I know I do) but if napping is the most exciting thing you can think to show us, well... that's a bit shit like. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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We're tempted but we've been burned before by supposed man/bat couples who've turned out to be single men with no bat companion. Now we won't meet unless we've seen the bat on cam or heard it squeak down the phone.
Her xx |
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By *emini ManMan
over a year ago
There and to the left a bit |
"We're tempted but we've been burned before by supposed man/bat couples who've turned out to be single men with no bat companion. Now we won't meet unless we've seen the bat on cam or heard it squeak down the phone.
Her xx"
Did have to chuckle at this!!
Shame too as they'd have been such a good match going by your first few profile pics |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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So... I'm getting the general idea of improving my profile is:
- adding much more description about myself (likes, dislikes, so on..) and what I can offer
- photos
Which I understand by looking at all of your profiles and seeing your points, thanks (:
Also about "the bat" if you really think about it, its yours.... |
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