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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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It's got a bit more substance than most, but it's a bit generic to be brutally honest. Nothing there really stands out and says 'I must meet this person' |
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By *emini ManMan
over a year ago
There and to the left a bit |
I've seen a lot worse but have also seen a lot better - it's fairly generic and not unlike a lot of other single guy profiles. You need to try and write something that gets across some of your personality and that will make people sit up and want to find out more.
Might also help to break it down into paragraphs rather than just one continuous block of text as you have it now.
Pics are ok and kudos for being brave enough to post face pics (and avoiding the ubiquitous cock shot) - maybe add to that with some body shots?
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