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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago

Just updated my profile and I'm not a great proof reader, would anyone like to do the honours for me?

Also, tell me if it's shit please?

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By *rightonsteveMan  over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!

There's a few errors but nothing too bad and it's quite interestingly written.

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago


"There's a few errors but nothing too bad and it's quite interestingly written. "

Point out the errors?!

thank you!

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By *rightonsteveMan  over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!

Commas hither and thither and a dichotomy in the first sentence.

Don't sweat it. 2 meets in 4 weeks = sex until you're 82.

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

big letters are fine to use

rudey words are ok too

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago


"Commas hither and thither and a dichotomy in the first sentence.

Don't sweat it. 2 meets in 4 weeks = sex until you're 82. "

The dichotomy is intentional but that's just because I'm a bit of a twat.

I like you, you're a cool guy...

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago


"big letters are fine to use

rudey words are ok too"

I was doing my best to try emphasise maturity and humour and trying to avoid vulgarity because that detracts from the maturity.

Don't get me wrong, I am a mouthy little prick and a dirty little bastard. But I just want to ensure that number is something that is overlooked.

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By *rightonsteveMan  over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!


"Commas hither and thither and a dichotomy in the first sentence.

Don't sweat it. 2 meets in 4 weeks = sex until you're 82.

The dichotomy is intentional but that's just because I'm a bit of a twat.

I like you, you're a cool guy..."

If I had a hat, I'd doff it. It's fine, just join in on here and we all know you're a dirty little sod cos you're on here and shagging people in a sex club

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By *inxy777Woman  over a year ago

essex

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