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"As someone who does read peoples profiles and does get a little peeved when people don't read ours..I will happily put ours forward. I have my big girl pants on. Eve. X" The problem with yours is you haven't got a veri from me | |||
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"As someone who does read peoples profiles and does get a little peeved when people don't read ours..I will happily put ours forward. I have my big girl pants on. Eve. X" Clear, to the point, you come across as friendly and engaging.... But, please spell faeces correctly x | |||
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"As someone who does read peoples profiles and does get a little peeved when people don't read ours..I will happily put ours forward. I have my big girl pants on. Eve. X Clear, to the point, you come across as friendly and engaging.... But, please spell faeces correctly x" Thanks doll! I hadn't noticed my spelling mistake, I feel silly now ha ha. Glad you approve. Eve. X | |||
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"As someone who does read peoples profiles and does get a little peeved when people don't read ours..I will happily put ours forward. I have my big girl pants on. Eve. X" fantastic profile, good pictures, profile text clear concise but long enough to spark and mansion interest and amunition for usefull convo, FAQ helpful filter. | |||
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"We would love some advice! Xx" concise. unclear as to what your like and dislikes are bit then they maybe from desine, the writing is freight and not passive aggressive. written filters clearly shown. photos artistic. | |||
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"As someone who does read peoples profiles and does get a little peeved when people don't read ours..I will happily put ours forward. I have my big girl pants on. Eve. X" One of the better couples profiles with pictures of you both. Well written. Maybe you could be more succinct? 8.5/10 | |||
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"Please feel free. Always nice to know what people think." extreamly clear, some basic understanding of what turns you on. like/dislikes, dos and donts. | |||
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"Ooh yes please. Any comments on our profile gratefully received. I know it's very long .... Sally " Good profile, nice pictures with you both, very detailed but far to long. You could cut that in half and have a much better impact 7/10 | |||
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"We would love some advice! Xx" Good profile, lovely pictures of you both, well written. The only criticism is the put xx into the subject box to prove you've read type line has always been a little of putting to me. 8.5/10 | |||
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" very detailed but far to long. You could cut that in half and have a much better impact 7/10" Thanks for the advice. I will look at reducing the text. Sally | |||
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"I know ours needs a bit of work but, go ahead. " You said it, a bit of work will make your profile more appealing. Maybe a little more imagination on your pictures and slightly more text? 5/10 | |||
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"Ooh yes please. Any comments on our profile gratefully received. I know it's very long .... Sally " As a giver of great profile advice to others I'd expect yours to be nothing short of exemplary, and I've not been disappointed!! It IS very long but it's also very clear and lays out in detail who you both are and what you're looking for and more importantly can offer. Gets an A* from me | |||
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"We are in - with trepidation lol" No pictures of him, some duplication and I'd put the first paragraph further down, better not to start the text on a negative, the second paragraph is much more upbeat. Small changes will make this a good profile 6/10. | |||
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"As someone who does read peoples profiles and does get a little peeved when people don't read ours..I will happily put ours forward. I have my big girl pants on. Eve. X" Yours is hard to read, simply due to that profile pic is highly distracting, to both myself looking at such an awesome bum and wiggles looking at a well formed back. Xx | |||
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" Gets an A* from me " Wow thanks Gemini Man | |||
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"We would love some advice! Xx" No advice needed - good, clear and concise profile blurb, good selection of profile pics of both of you. Another A* from me | |||
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"Quietly puts hand up and steps forward...... " Better pictures required and a bolder more confident approach to how you've written your profile. You're basically a fem half of a couple wanting couples and guys, your inbox should be full 4.5/10. | |||
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"Angiebu - on a couples profile I like to see a pic or two of you both together. Sally P.S I have the same quilt cover!" Thanks, will get some done. Good taste. X | |||
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"I know ours needs a bit of work but, go ahead. You said it, a bit of work will make your profile more appealing. Maybe a little more imagination on your pictures and slightly more text? 5/10" Thanks, I will have a look at it and do some re wording x | |||
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"I know ours needs a bit of work but, go ahead. " Profile blurb covers the basics but could maybe be expanded a little to make it stand out from other similar ones. Was also a little confused by the mention of a solo profile for P - does it mean he plays alone with permission? Might want to clarify that a little. Pics could be better to be honest - classic single male mistake of a cock pic. Perhaps some shots using a timer of both of you. A steady B from me for this one. | |||
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"Go on then... we're in " I like it. Lots of detail on what you want and like so can tell if we would be a good match. It's a bit long but prefer that to too short (our is also rather long so can't really complain!) We are in too | |||
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"As if anyone is gonna knock a couples profile. Couples will rate it 10/10 Single females 10/10 Single guys. 10/10 " Read the thread. | |||
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"As if anyone is gonna knock a couples profile. Couples will rate it 10/10 Single females 10/10 Single guys. 10/10 Read the thread." I meant the forum regular couples | |||
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"In for a penny...... Be kind..... Please.... M " You start your profile with lots of negatives, it suggests that you're negative people. It's also much longer than it needs to be...could be a very good profile 5/10. | |||
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"Go on, the feed back will be interesting." Good profile, could do with a more imaginative picture of him and trimming down on the text. If you've blocked messages from single guys then you don't have to tell them that....they won't be able to message you 6.5/10. Ps. Leave your religion out of it | |||
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"As if anyone is gonna knock a couples profile. Couples will rate it 10/10 Single females 10/10 Single guys. 10/10 Read the thread. I meant the forum regular couples " Are to too cowardly to be honest? They might respect you more. | |||
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"Ooo we're game for this! I think ours may be a tad tooooo long!! " Good profile, good pictures of you both but you start the text with a negative! That turns an 8/10 into a 7.5 for me. | |||
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"In for a penny...... Be kind..... Please.... M You start your profile with lots of negatives, it suggests that you're negative people. It's also much longer than it needs to be...could be a very good profile 5/10." What could we do to improve it? Maybe just make it 2 sentences and 1 picture? | |||
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"As if anyone is gonna knock a couples profile. Couples will rate it 10/10 Single females 10/10 Single guys. 10/10 Read the thread. I meant the forum regular couples Are to too cowardly to be honest? They might respect you more." No I have no desire to meet any forum regulars so it don't matter how there profile comes across to me | |||
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"I think I may have missed some, I'll be back in half an hour to do some more." Yes us... But I'm used to being ignored on the forums | |||
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"As someone who does read peoples profiles and does get a little peeved when people don't read ours..I will happily put ours forward. I have my big girl pants on. Eve. X" I currently have no pants on but i say hey ho have a look at ours and say what you see You may notice a distinct lack of public photos for which i make no apologies... Always happy to attach a magic one to any messages received. Mrs WD40 | |||
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"In for a penny...... Be kind..... Please.... M You start your profile with lots of negatives, it suggests that you're negative people. It's also much longer than it needs to be...could be a very good profile 5/10. What could we do to improve it? Maybe just make it 2 sentences and 1 picture? " | |||
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"I think I may have missed some, I'll be back in half an hour to do some more." Yes you missed us. We will await your review. | |||
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"Please feel free. Always nice to know what people think. extreamly clear, some basic understanding of what turns you on. like/dislikes, dos and donts. " Thankyou. | |||
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"Ooo we're game for this! I think ours may be a tad tooooo long!! Good profile, good pictures of you both but you start the text with a negative! That turns an 8/10 into a 7.5 for me." Thank you! Had a little swop round now x | |||
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"I think I may have missed some, I'll be back in half an hour to do some more. Yes us... But I'm used to being ignored on the forums " We ignore the fuck out of each other.. | |||
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"I think I may have missed some, I'll be back in half an hour to do some more. Yes us... But I'm used to being ignored on the forums We ignore the fuck out of each other.. " Best offer I've had all week | |||
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"We are in be nice " Yours looks great you state what you want some great pics and Veri's | |||
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"In for a penny...... Be kind..... Please.... M You start your profile with lots of negatives, it suggests that you're negative people. It's also much longer than it needs to be...could be a very good profile 5/10. What could we do to improve it? Maybe just make it 2 sentences and 1 picture? " No, look at some of the profiles that scored higher than you and honestly compare with your own. None of the profiles are bad, it just that with a few small tweaks some could come across better. | |||
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"I know ours needs a bit of work but, go ahead. Profile blurb covers the basics but could maybe be expanded a little to make it stand out from other similar ones. Was also a little confused by the mention of a solo profile for P - does it mean he plays alone with permission? Might want to clarify that a little. Pics could be better to be honest - classic single male mistake of a cock pic. Perhaps some shots using a timer of both of you. A steady B from me for this one." Thanks, have reworded it. Just have to sort some new pics out. | |||
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"As if anyone is gonna knock a couples profile. Couples will rate it 10/10 Single females 10/10 Single guys. 10/10 Read the thread. I meant the forum regular couples Are to too cowardly to be honest? They might respect you more. No I have no desire to meet any forum regulars so it don't matter how there profile comes across to me " This is not about meeting it's about some honest feedback to couples for a change. I don't think any will take it personally, but there's a reason why some do better than others. | |||
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"I think I may have missed some, I'll be back in half an hour to do some more. Yes us... But I'm used to being ignored on the forums " Good profile, good pictures. Use your filters to block single guys then you can drop the line in capitals saying no single guys and the paragraph about sky remotes. That would change my 7/10 into an 8. | |||
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"I think I may have missed some, I'll be back in half an hour to do some more. Yes us... But I'm used to being ignored on the forums Good profile, good pictures. Use your filters to block single guys then you can drop the line in capitals saying no single guys and the paragraph about sky remotes. That would change my 7/10 into an 8." If you'd have rated when I first posted you'd have noticed I have stated not everyone gets my sense of humour. Even with filters in place we still get single men messaging. However thank you for your feed back. | |||
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"Still waiting xx" Both in pictures, no negativity, seem approachable possibly an 8/10. | |||
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"I think I may have missed some, I'll be back in half an hour to do some more. Yes us... But I'm used to being ignored on the forums Good profile, good pictures. Use your filters to block single guys then you can drop the line in capitals saying no single guys and the paragraph about sky remotes. That would change my 7/10 into an 8. If you'd have rated when I first posted you'd have noticed I have stated not everyone gets my sense of humour. Even with filters in place we still get single men messaging. However thank you for your feed back. " I think it's a good profile I just think that if you block single guys then they can't message you, it works. | |||
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"Ooo we're game for this! I think ours may be a tad tooooo long!! Good profile, good pictures of you both but you start the text with a negative! That turns an 8/10 into a 7.5 for me. Thank you! Had a little swop round now x" Solid 8 now for me. | |||
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"We are in......." I think a LOT of people will struggle to get past the first 3 lines of your text. That's gonna put a lot of people off. Mind you I'm a bit funny like that. | |||
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"We are in....... I think a LOT of people will struggle to get past the first 3 lines of your text. That's gonna put a lot of people off. Mind you I'm a bit funny like that." Sorry also just realised you were joking. See I didn't get past the first 3 lines. | |||
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"How's our profile " Good pictures of you both, maybe too little text, but it's positive 7/10 | |||
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"We are in....... I think a LOT of people will struggle to get past the first 3 lines of your text. That's gonna put a lot of people off. Mind you I'm a bit funny like that. Sorry also just realised you were joking. See I didn't get past the first 3 lines. " lol that's the point if people don't read our profile properly then we'd rather they not contact us, hence the first paragraph.... | |||
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"We are in......." Good pictures, positive, and a bit of humour. 8.5/10. Maybe cut it down slightly, but I'm picking! | |||
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"How's our profile " Lovely, friendly profile and great pics. Sally | |||
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"When I started this thread I thought loads of guys would be on here giving feedback, I was clearly wrong and am struggling to keep up, come on guys pitch in! " We have a lot of patience and know you will review our profile at some point. | |||
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"We are in....... I think a LOT of people will struggle to get past the first 3 lines of your text. That's gonna put a lot of people off. Mind you I'm a bit funny like that. Sorry also just realised you were joking. See I didn't get past the first 3 lines. lol that's the point if people don't read our profile properly then we'd rather they not contact us, hence the first paragraph.... " Yeah sorry I clicked straight out as soon as I read the first 3 lines. | |||
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"Yes please, look forward to hearing people's views." Good profile, positive, imaginative pictures, could do with more of him? 7.5/10. | |||
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"When I started this thread I thought loads of guys would be on here giving feedback, I was clearly wrong and am struggling to keep up, come on guys pitch in! We have a lot of patience and know you will review our profile at some point." Good all round profile, solid 8/10. | |||
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"How's our profile Good pictures of you both, maybe too little text, but it's positive 7/10" Thank you, always hard to know what to write lol | |||
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"How's our profile Lovely, friendly profile and great pics. Sally" Thank you Sally | |||
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"When I started this thread I thought loads of guys would be on here giving feedback, I was clearly wrong and am struggling to keep up, come on guys pitch in! We have a lot of patience and know you will review our profile at some point. Good all round profile, solid 8/10." Thank you very much. | |||
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"Aye, why not, be interesting to see how this goes " Erm... hello? | |||
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"And having actually read the entire thread.....roast us baby! X" Good profile, good pictures of you both, well written, solid 8 maybe higher. | |||
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"Go for it... be brutal! Pete " Positive profile, great pictures of you both, well written. Solid 8.5 | |||
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"Go for it... be brutal! Pete Positive profile, great pictures of you both, well written. Solid 8.5" Thanks! We'll take that. Would be good to get your view on what a 10 would include? Pete | |||
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"Go for it... be brutal! Pete Positive profile, great pictures of you both, well written. Solid 8.5" Aww thanks Ruby x | |||
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"Dare I say it..we are in. We'd also appreciate feedback from other couples as we are hoping to move on from 3sums to 4sums. So any advice (aside from telling us to move to England ) that might help facilitate that faster would be welcome! x " Well written profile with good pictures but none of him and starts with a negative 7/10...just. | |||
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"In for a penny...... Be kind..... Please.... M You start your profile with lots of negatives, it suggests that you're negative people. It's also much longer than it needs to be...could be a very good profile 5/10. What could we do to improve it? Maybe just make it 2 sentences and 1 picture? No, look at some of the profiles that scored higher than you and honestly compare with your own. None of the profiles are bad, it just that with a few small tweaks some could come across better." Did you hear that whooshing noise? In fairness, and I suspect many if us are the same, we run our profiles the way we want to, we say what we want to say. If we all changed our profiles to the way you wanted us to, they wouldn't be our profiles, they'd be yours. And like I said, two sentences and one picture isn't exactly a profile. Interesting input though. Much appreciated. Thanks, but we'll leave our profile to say what we want it to. | |||
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"Can we critique your profile op? Ruby" Won't take long. ;-) | |||
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"In for a penny...... Be kind..... Please.... M You start your profile with lots of negatives, it suggests that you're negative people. It's also much longer than it needs to be...could be a very good profile 5/10. What could we do to improve it? Maybe just make it 2 sentences and 1 picture? No, look at some of the profiles that scored higher than you and honestly compare with your own. None of the profiles are bad, it just that with a few small tweaks some could come across better. Did you hear that whooshing noise? In fairness, and I suspect many if us are the same, we run our profiles the way we want to, we say what we want to say. If we all changed our profiles to the way you wanted us to, they wouldn't be our profiles, they'd be yours. And like I said, two sentences and one picture isn't exactly a profile. Interesting input though. Much appreciated. Thanks, but we'll leave our profile to say what we want it to. " Sorry if I've offended anyone. Nobody had to post on here asking for feedback, you asked for an opinion. Maybe I should stop this. As I said before, there are no bad profiles but some come across better than others. I wish you all well. | |||
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" Sorry if I've offended anyone. Nobody had to post on here asking for feedback, you asked for an opinion. Maybe I should stop this. " No you don't need to stop. Baffles me why they gave you a response like that, because as you said..they did ask. Nobody put a gun to their head mate. | |||
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"Can we critique your profile op? Ruby" Thank you Ruby but the truth is that I've chopped my profile right down and hidden my pictures because I only meet regulars now. I guess I'm one of the single guys who's done well on here. Again sorry to anyone who's taken this thread the wrong way. | |||
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" Sorry if I've offended anyone. Nobody had to post on here asking for feedback, you asked for an opinion. Maybe I should stop this. No you don't need to stop. Baffles me why they gave you a response like that, because as you said..they did ask. Nobody put a gun to their head mate. " It was clear what your thread was about OP - obviously it is your opinion and obviously a couple can run their profile as they wish. Don't apologise because people are bitching about a post they asked for. | |||
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"Aye, why not, be interesting to see how this goes Erm... hello? " Am I typing in white lol? | |||
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" Sorry if I've offended anyone. Nobody had to post on here asking for feedback, you asked for an opinion. Maybe I should stop this. No you don't need to stop. Baffles me why they gave you a response like that, because as you said..they did ask. Nobody put a gun to their head mate. It was clear what your thread was about OP - obviously it is your opinion and obviously a couple can run their profile as they wish. Don't apologise because people are bitching about a post they asked for." | |||
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"Aye, why not, be interesting to see how this goes Erm... hello? Am I typing in white lol? " Did someone say something | |||
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"Sure, counts us in. Profile is pretty bare and I know I need pics of the husband added too! " Defo, is never engage with someone with no male pics, would you?? Ruby | |||
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"In for a penny...... Be kind..... Please.... M You start your profile with lots of negatives, it suggests that you're negative people. It's also much longer than it needs to be...could be a very good profile 5/10. What could we do to improve it? Maybe just make it 2 sentences and 1 picture? No, look at some of the profiles that scored higher than you and honestly compare with your own. None of the profiles are bad, it just that with a few small tweaks some could come across better. Did you hear that whooshing noise? In fairness, and I suspect many if us are the same, we run our profiles the way we want to, we say what we want to say. If we all changed our profiles to the way you wanted us to, they wouldn't be our profiles, they'd be yours. And like I said, two sentences and one picture isn't exactly a profile. Interesting input though. Much appreciated. Thanks, but we'll leave our profile to say what we want it to. Sorry if I've offended anyone. Nobody had to post on here asking for feedback, you asked for an opinion. Maybe I should stop this. As I said before, there are no bad profiles but some come across better than others. I wish you all well." No offence taken at all. Really. Keep going. Please, don't let our feedback of your feedback stop you. We have broad shoulders. | |||
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"We like constructive criticism " Maybe as many others a pic or two of him? | |||
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"We like constructive criticism Maybe as many others a pic or two of him?" True though at present were going down the hotwife/cuckold route so only looking for guys. | |||
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"Okay then. Be interesting to know what the singles and couples think of ours." Perhaps a bit more on what type of couples you would like to meet? Other than that, pretty good | |||
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"Go on then we have never had any feedback on profile before" Too many pics of the fem, id dump all the ones where you're not smiling. Imo | |||
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"Well only assumption is ours is perfect lol" It's pretty good! Says what you expect form anyone contacting but maybe if you're wanting couples there should be some pics of Mr? (I have no interest in them and would gladly look at more pics of Mrs! ) | |||
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"Well only assumption is ours is perfect lol" Same here lol! | |||
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"Well only assumption is ours is perfect lol It's pretty good! Says what you expect form anyone contacting but maybe if you're wanting couples there should be some pics of Mr? (I have no interest in them and would gladly look at more pics of Mrs! ) " It's impossible to get any pictures of me, L is an attention whore lol | |||
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"OP missed us, off to sulk Not fussed who does it S&H" Clear pictures of you both, no negativity, clear in what you're looking for and willing to do, a bit of humour, sold 8/10. | |||
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"Yes please may explain a few things " Well written, some humour and descriptive but lack of public pictures has a big effect on the score, something to hide? 5/10. | |||
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"OP missed us, off to sulk Not fussed who does it S&H" 9/10. Pretty straight forward. would be a 10/10 but you too far away | |||
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"Ahhh go on then, there's not much room left on this thread to be ripped apart " Pictures of you both, maybe a better body one of him would be more appealing to your target audience, clear descriptive of what you want and don't want, bit of humour 7.5/10. | |||
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"Well only assumption is ours is perfect lol It's pretty good! Says what you expect form anyone contacting but maybe if you're wanting couples there should be some pics of Mr? (I have no interest in them and would gladly look at more pics of Mrs! ) It's impossible to get any pictures of me, L is an attention whore lol" Well written profile, clear in what you want but no body pictures of Mr just looks like got something to hide or relying on Mrs for interest. What should be a solid 8+ is therefore a 7/10. | |||
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"Well only assumption is ours is perfect lol Same here lol! " Pictures of you both, friendly and welcoming, clear in what you're looking for, seem a fun couple but farrrr too long. I appreciate that you're promoting the odd event too but even without that you should cut it down....a lot 6.5/10. | |||
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"Think we were missed too. Feedback would be great. By anyone " With quote this time! A few less cock pics and not the ones with the aging grundies pulled to one side. Maybe more body shots of you both. Love the text part of your profile, not too long, clear and the right amount of humour. | |||
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"Go on then we have never had any feedback on profile before" Move your first paragraph further down because you've started on a negative, although you have a couple pictures of him they don't really show his body shape, is that appealing to your target. Consider filtering out single males and losing that line? Maybe 7.5/10 if you move the negative start down but better Mr pics needed. | |||
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"Okay then. Be interesting to know what the singles and couples think of ours." Chakalaka, good pictures of you both, well written positive profile, succinct and friendly 8.5/10. | |||
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"Ours is already perfect " It is a good profile actually. Well written, pictures of you both. Positive, succinct with a dash of humour 8.5/10. | |||
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"Would be grateful for constructive feedback " Better pictures of Mr required, hows a couple going to form any initial view based on that. Do you need the negativity in the middle of your profile? If you lighten it up a bit your profile will seem much more welcoming, you already have single guys filtered out 6.5/10. | |||
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"Yes please may explain a few things Well written, some humour and descriptive but lack of public pictures has a big effect on the score, something to hide? 5/10." Thank you, perceptive and spot on. | |||
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"Think we were missed too. Feedback would be great. By anyone " A well written profile spoilt by a lack of imagination with the Mr pictures. The pictures may stop some getting to the text. 6.5 or 7/10. Better pics would make it an 8. | |||
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"Would be grateful for constructive feedback Better pictures of Mr required, hows a couple going to form any initial view based on that. Do you need the negativity in the middle of your profile? If you lighten it up a bit your profile will seem much more welcoming, you already have single guys filtered out 6.5/10." Interesting point of view. Thanks for taking the time | |||
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"Still waiting OP." Sorry Clem, I'm not doing single profiles. | |||
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"Think we were missed too. Feedback would be great. By anyone With quote this time! A few less cock pics and not the ones with the aging grundies pulled to one side. Maybe more body shots of you both. Love the text part of your profile, not too long, clear and the right amount of humour." Thankyou and understood lol. Yeah the pants aren't the best idea | |||
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