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"C'mon dude...that's a clear banter..but..haha..good one I respect good humour  "
Just a laugh innit!
On second thoughts it looks too big even for an elephant 
You might need to scrap the zoo idea n head for deep sea world to get jiggy with Shamu!  |
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It's not bad. I would certainly drop the "I don't bite" cheese line. Naffest line on Fab and about as original as a cock shot. Perhaps rephrase your last line; it could be just me, but I do find something particularly unappealing about the phrase 'eating pussy'. All in all, not a bad effort. Good luck and happy swinging. |
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By *rueone71 OP Man
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"It's not bad. I would certainly drop the "I don't bite" cheese line. Naffest line on Fab and about as original as a cock shot. Perhaps rephrase your last line; it could be just me, but I do find something particularly unappealing about the phrase 'eating pussy'. All in all, not a bad effort. Good luck and happy swinging. "
Thanks..all on board |
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You have 2 verifications so maybe you should drop asking if people are real on here...
also if you are using a 'but' you don't need commas... it just reads funny to me..
Finally, maybe lose a few face pics (can't believe I said that!) and show a bit more variety.. |
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By *rueone71 OP Man
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"You have 2 verifications so maybe you should drop asking if people are real on here...
also if you are using a 'but' you don't need commas... it just reads funny to me..
Finally, maybe lose a few face pics (can't believe I said that!) and show a bit more variety.. "
Thank you. Well..but not sure..Lol. Let me think on this xxxx |
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"You have 2 verifications so maybe you should drop asking if people are real on here...
also if you are using a 'but' you don't need commas... it just reads funny to me..
Finally, maybe lose a few face pics (can't believe I said that!) and show a bit more variety..
Thank you. Well..but not sure..Lol. Let me think on this xxxx"
Trust me, it's a grammatical nightmare  |
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