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By *azzab88 OP   Man  over a year ago

glasgow

I've tried to give an accurate account of me, but think I may have gone too funny!! My first messages seem to go down well, reply/not deleted as I'm always quite respectful especially when it comes to couples. A few pointers wouldn't go a miss!

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

I like it !!!

Possibly 2 too many cock pics but im nit picking with that

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By *andVBCouple  over a year ago

Wrexham

It reads a little stream-of-consciousnessy. A sort of breathless haste.

Maybe just rearrange what you've got? Throw a little punctuation about?

(shrug emoticon)

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

To be honest ,I zoned out less than half way through,,,,

For my taste, there seems far too much preamble and general tittle tattle......

But good luck though,,,

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

It's fine, I didn't find it particularly funny but it's not a bad profile for a single guy on here

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

Some nice pics but trim some of the cock ones

Profile is a little wordy

I know ours is but maybe look at breaking your paragraphs down to make it an easier read.

Pleasantly written rather than choosing negatives or 'i will do this to you' kinda wording which I hate in guys profiles.

Overall, it's OK

Just remember though, the profile isn't everything. It's important but it may close more doors than it opens the more details you provide.

Personally I'd sooner have that rather than having hundreds of messages that don't carry any interest.

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By *azzab88 OP   Man  over a year ago

glasgow

Thanks people

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