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Any suggestions on improving my profile xx
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By *isaB45Woman
over a year ago
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Loose the dodgy photos... especially the one with the gun. How, exactly, is a woman going to find that safe or attractive.
Your profile headline and blurb makes you sound like an immature youth, trying to imitate a gangsta. It is also littered with spelling, grammar and punctuation errors. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Loose the dodgy photos... especially the one with the gun. How, exactly, is a woman going to find that safe or attractive.
Your profile headline and blurb makes you sound like an immature youth, trying to imitate a gangsta. It is also littered with spelling, grammar and punctuation errors."
Apart from that it's fine.  xxx |
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"Loose the dodgy photos... especially the one with the gun. How, exactly, is a woman going to find that safe or attractive.
Your profile headline and blurb makes you sound like an immature youth, trying to imitate a gangsta. It is also littered with spelling, grammar and punctuation errors.
Apart from that it's fine. xxx"
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Agree with what has been said already. I would suggest a complete profile re-write. It is unimaginative and it's never good to try and slag off other single men to big yourself up. Focus on what you can offer instead of bringing others down. |
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