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over a year ago
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yikes...... cant comment on the content as the large monosyllabic block of text made my eyes go 
Might be better to split it up into manageable size paragraphs to make it easier to read..
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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May want to just check the grammar content on it, your missing a few comas, spaces, capital letter for your name, bits like that.
May also want to consider swapping and for all the n's |
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