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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"What is a Haiku?
Does Haiku work in English?
Or is it just fun?
A three line poem
From the land of Rising Sun
5,7,5 sonnants
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Bending the rules there
But I will let you off it
As you have nice lips |
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"What is a Haiku?
Does Haiku work in English?
Or is it just fun?
A three line poem
From the land of Rising Sun
5,7,5 sonnants
"
First line has 5 consonants, second 7 and third 5, and I don't think it needs to rhyme.
This is a famous one. I think the consonants work in Japanese.
You only live twice;
Once when you’re born,
And once when you look death in the face.
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"What is a Haiku?
Does Haiku work in English?
Or is it just fun?
A three line poem
From the land of Rising Sun
5,7,5 sonnants
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So, five seven five.
Afraid yours is five eight six
So a slight fail there? |
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By *isaB45Woman
over a year ago
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"What is a Haiku?
Does Haiku work in English?
Or is it just fun?
A three line poem
From the land of Rising Sun
5,7,5 sonnants
Bending the rules there
But I will let you off it
As you have nice lips"
Bending, not broken
Thank you for the compliment
Have a kiss from me  |
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By *isaB45Woman
over a year ago
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"What is a Haiku?
Does Haiku work in English?
Or is it just fun?
A three line poem
From the land of Rising Sun
5,7,5 sonnants
So, five seven five.
Afraid yours is five eight six
So a slight fail there?"
It's 5 7 5! I counted on my fingers, too  |
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"What is a Haiku?
Does Haiku work in English?
Or is it just fun?
A three line poem
From the land of Rising Sun
5,7,5 sonnants
So, five seven five.
Afraid yours is five eight six
So a slight fail there?
It's 5 7 5! I counted on my fingers, too "
Middle one is 8 |
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By *isaB45Woman
over a year ago
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"What is a Haiku?
Does Haiku work in English?
Or is it just fun?
A three line poem
From the land of Rising Sun
5,7,5 sonnants
So, five seven five.
Afraid yours is five eight six
So a slight fail there?
It's 5 7 5! I counted on my fingers, too
Middle one is 8 "
Still only 7 according to my fingers |
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"What is a Haiku?
Does Haiku work in English?
Or is it just fun?
A three line poem
From the land of Rising Sun
5,7,5 sonnants
So, five seven five.
Afraid yours is five eight six
So a slight fail there?
It's 5 7 5! I counted on my fingers, too
Middle one is 8
Still only 7 according to my fingers "
How many fingers have you got?
From-the-land-of-the-ri-sing-sun |
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By *isaB45Woman
over a year ago
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"What is a Haiku?
Does Haiku work in English?
Or is it just fun?
A three line poem
From the land of Rising Sun
5,7,5 sonnants
So, five seven five.
Afraid yours is five eight six
So a slight fail there?
It's 5 7 5! I counted on my fingers, too
Middle one is 8
Still only 7 according to my fingers
How many fingers have you got?
From-the-land-of-the-ri-sing-sun "
Ha! She cried gladly!
From the Land of Rising Sun
You added a 'the! |
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"What is a Haiku?
Does Haiku work in English?
Or is it just fun?
A three line poem
From the land of Rising Sun
5,7,5 sonnants
So, five seven five.
Afraid yours is five eight six
So a slight fail there?
It's 5 7 5! I counted on my fingers, too
Middle one is 8
Still only 7 according to my fingers
How many fingers have you got?
From-the-land-of-the-ri-sing-sun
Ha! She cried gladly!
From the Land of Rising Sun
You added a 'the!"
Well bloody hell! You're right!
And THAT, folks, is how you make a right real dildo of yourself in the public forums. |
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