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By *uzy444 OP Woman
over a year ago
in the suffolk countryside |
ok so you are all sexy and kinky so and sos so i want to pick your conceptual ideas..
some of you have liked my stories here but i want to develop the scenes into something with a plot..i find scenes easy to write but not
the structure of how people could meet realistically,
how kink etc gets introduced,
the purpose of the whole story..
the deeper psychology behind the
characters
so this tuesday, if you are inspired or bored, please offer your inspired suggestions on this thread and be my storytime collective muse...
thank you
s x |
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over a year ago
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"I like vampires 
I like clowns
Actually clowns are quite scaryi dont find them erotic at all"
Not in the same league as nuns,i really need to stop watching german porn |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"I like vampires
I like clowns
Actually clowns are quite scaryi dont find them erotic at all
Not in the same league as nuns,i really need to stop watching german porn"
Clowns & nuns, seriously wtf!!  |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"I like vampires
I like clowns
Actually clowns are quite scaryi dont find them erotic at all
Not in the same league as nuns,i really need to stop watching german porn
Clowns & nuns, seriously wtf!! "
I know i think i need help |
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By *uzy444 OP Woman
over a year ago
in the suffolk countryside |
"I like vampires
I like clowns
Actually clowns are quite scaryi dont find them erotic at all
Not in the same league as nuns,i really need to stop watching german porn
Clowns & nuns, seriously wtf!!
I know i think i need help "
well its hardly the basis for a widely appealing erotc novel..more like horror comic strip material |
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By *uzy444 OP Woman
over a year ago
in the suffolk countryside |
"I like vampires
I like clowns
Actually clowns are quite scaryi dont find them erotic at all
Like the idea of vampires, that could be interesting "
most humans are parasites.. |
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By *uzy444 OP Woman
over a year ago
in the suffolk countryside |
"I like vampires
I like clowns
Actually clowns are quite scaryi dont find them erotic at all
Not in the same league as nuns,i really need to stop watching german porn"
i bet youve got sound of music on dvd havent you?..come on admit it |
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By *uzy444 OP Woman
over a year ago
in the suffolk countryside |
"I like medical fantasies
cool
any realistic suggestions where the two medical fantasy fanatics would meet?
In the morgue, it's quiet in there, x"
you are a seriously troubled lot |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"I like vampires
I like clowns
Actually clowns are quite scaryi dont find them erotic at all
Not in the same league as nuns,i really need to stop watching german porn
Clowns & nuns, seriously wtf!!
I know i think i need help well its hardly the basis for a widely appealing erotc novel..more like horror comic strip material "
Hmmm i dont know,a load of nuns sucking clowns off |
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By *uzy444 OP Woman
over a year ago
in the suffolk countryside |
"I like vampires
I like clowns
Actually clowns are quite scaryi dont find them erotic at all
Not in the same league as nuns,i really need to stop watching german porn
Clowns & nuns, seriously wtf!!
I know i think i need help well its hardly the basis for a widely appealing erotc novel..more like horror comic strip material
Hmmm i dont know,a load of nuns sucking clowns off "
its that the nilla world |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"I like vampires
I like clowns
Actually clowns are quite scaryi dont find them erotic at all
Not in the same league as nuns,i really need to stop watching german porn
Clowns & nuns, seriously wtf!!
I know i think i need help well its hardly the basis for a widely appealing erotc novel..more like horror comic strip material
Hmmm i dont know,a load of nuns sucking clowns off "
Oh and bu the way the collective noun for nuns is a "superfluity of nuns" |
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By *uzy444 OP Woman
over a year ago
in the suffolk countryside |
"I like vampires
I like clowns
Actually clowns are quite scaryi dont find them erotic at all
Not in the same league as nuns,i really need to stop watching german porn
Clowns & nuns, seriously wtf!!
I know i think i need help well its hardly the basis for a widely appealing erotc novel..more like horror comic strip material
Hmmm i dont know,a load of nuns sucking clowns off
Oh and bu the way the collective noun for nuns is a "superfluity of nuns""
as if i give a flying fuck
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By *uzy444 OP Woman
over a year ago
in the suffolk countryside |
"The story of what happened in kinkys fab bdsm club  "
nothing happened they all got pissed which isnt ethical in BDSM you would all in a proper establishment been asked to leave |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"I like vampires
I like clowns
Actually clowns are quite scaryi dont find them erotic at all
Not in the same league as nuns,i really need to stop watching german porn
Clowns & nuns, seriously wtf!!
I know i think i need help well its hardly the basis for a widely appealing erotc novel..more like horror comic strip material
Hmmm i dont know,a load of nuns sucking clowns off
Oh and bu the way the collective noun for nuns is a "superfluity of nuns"as if i give a flying fuck
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You need to be spanked suzi |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"cant two people just meet in the local pool/sauna/ chat over a magazine article whilst sitting on a long train journey - ok im way too shallow  "
Hahaha how cute |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"I like medical fantasies
cool
any realistic suggestions where the two medical fantasy fanatics would meet?"
A Dr stumbles across a person who has been knocked out, with a bomb strapped to their genitals, specific instructions are left by some mysterious person which states the person must achieve an orgasm every 30 minutes or the bomb will explode. If they tell anyone, call the police, or one leaves the other, the bomb will explode.
If they try to remove the bomb, it will explode.
To complicate matters even more, you could add in the orgasm must be achieved in certain areas of the city as detailed by the culprit.
Like porn version of speed maybe?
Not that I've spent time thinking about this at all......  |
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By *uzy444 OP Woman
over a year ago
in the suffolk countryside |
"I like vampires
I like clowns
Actually clowns are quite scaryi dont find them erotic at all
Not in the same league as nuns,i really need to stop watching german porn
Clowns & nuns, seriously wtf!!
I know i think i need help well its hardly the basis for a widely appealing erotc novel..more like horror comic strip material
Hmmm i dont know,a load of nuns sucking clowns off
Oh and bu the way the collective noun for nuns is a "superfluity of nuns"as if i give a flying fuck
You need to be spanked suzi"
probably its been far too long and i find unrealistic fantasy a complete turnoff..no better than a 50 shades spin off.. |
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"cant two people just meet in the local pool/sauna/ chat over a magazine article whilst sitting on a long train journey - ok im way too shallow
Hahaha how cute"
fk off |
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By *uzy444 OP Woman
over a year ago
in the suffolk countryside |
"cant two people just meet in the local pool/sauna/ chat over a magazine article whilst sitting on a long train journey - ok im way too shallow "
ahh the voice of reality..thankyou thankyou..
so all i need is background of what they were doing..why there..how get talking etc..
who are they as people?
ps im glad theres a sane one in here xx |
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"cant two people just meet in the local pool/sauna/ chat over a magazine article whilst sitting on a long train journey - ok im way too shallow
Hahaha how cute
fk off "
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By *uzy444 OP Woman
over a year ago
in the suffolk countryside |
"I like medical fantasies
cool
any realistic suggestions where the two medical fantasy fanatics would meet?
A Dr stumbles across a person who has been knocked out, with a bomb strapped to their genitals, specific instructions are left by some mysterious person which states the person must achieve an orgasm every 30 minutes or the bomb will explode. If they tell anyone, call the police, or one leaves the other, the bomb will explode.
If they try to remove the bomb, it will explode.
To complicate matters even more, you could add in the orgasm must be achieved in certain areas of the city as detailed by the culprit.
Like porn version of speed maybe?
Not that I've spent time thinking about this at all...... "
that is a scene..not a novel plit,,but at least you can string a story together to make sense..thankyou for your contribution x |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"cant two people just meet in the local pool/sauna/ chat over a magazine article whilst sitting on a long train journey - ok im way too shallow ahh the voice of reality..thankyou thankyou..
so all i need is background of what they were doing..why there..how get talking etc..
who are they as people?
ps im glad theres a sane one in here xx"
see Rossi - reality required - maybe onto a convention of a kind - if you want to mix in medievil, medical or supernatural
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By *uzy444 OP Woman
over a year ago
in the suffolk countryside |
"cant two people just meet in the local pool/sauna/ chat over a magazine article whilst sitting on a long train journey - ok im way too shallow ahh the voice of reality..thankyou thankyou..
so all i need is background of what they were doing..why there..how get talking etc..
who are they as people?
ps im glad theres a sane one in here xx
see Rossi - reality required - maybe onto a convention of a kind - if you want to mix in medievil, medical or supernatural
"
believability is essential for any good story, it allows for the unknown to happen without the reader disengaging..like the psychology of pace and lead... |
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"cant two people just meet in the local pool/sauna/ chat over a magazine article whilst sitting on a long train journey - ok im way too shallow ahh the voice of reality..thankyou thankyou..
so all i need is background of what they were doing..why there..how get talking etc..
who are they as people?
ps im glad theres a sane one in here xx
see Rossi - reality required - maybe onto a convention of a kind - if you want to mix in medievil, medical or supernatural
believability is essential for any good story, it allows for the unknown to happen without the reader disengaging..like the psychology of pace and lead..."
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i want an 'in your face' emote haha |
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By *uzy444 OP Woman
over a year ago
in the suffolk countryside |
"cant two people just meet in the local pool/sauna/ chat over a magazine article whilst sitting on a long train journey - ok im way too shallow ahh the voice of reality..thankyou thankyou..
so all i need is background of what they were doing..why there..how get talking etc..
who are they as people?
ps im glad theres a sane one in here xx
see Rossi - reality required - maybe onto a convention of a kind - if you want to mix in medievil, medical or supernatural
believability is essential for any good story, it allows for the unknown to happen without the reader disengaging..like the psychology of pace and lead...]
i want an 'in your face' emote haha"
you liked unicorn hotel right?
did you fill out the gaps of the plot with that story..ive always thought about changing that into a novel..or expanding it..i just need a reason why she would do it or how it would come about and of course a conclusion to the story that makes sense |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"cant two people just meet in the local pool/sauna/ chat over a magazine article whilst sitting on a long train journey - ok im way too shallow ahh the voice of reality..thankyou thankyou..
so all i need is background of what they were doing..why there..how get talking etc..
who are they as people?
ps im glad theres a sane one in here xx
see Rossi - reality required - maybe onto a convention of a kind - if you want to mix in medievil, medical or supernatural
believability is essential for any good story, it allows for the unknown to happen without the reader disengaging..like the psychology of pace and lead...]
i want an 'in your face' emote haha
you liked unicorn hotel right?
did you fill out the gaps of the plot with that story..ive always thought about changing that into a novel..or expanding it..i just need a reason why she would do it or how it would come about and of course a conclusion to the story that makes sense"
i loved that - i will re read it and ponder - but not just now got a pile of ladies to abuse soon |
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By *uzy444 OP Woman
over a year ago
in the suffolk countryside |
"cant two people just meet in the local pool/sauna/ chat over a magazine article whilst sitting on a long train journey - ok im way too shallow ahh the voice of reality..thankyou thankyou..
so all i need is background of what they were doing..why there..how get talking etc..
who are they as people?
ps im glad theres a sane one in here xx
see Rossi - reality required - maybe onto a convention of a kind - if you want to mix in medievil, medical or supernatural
believability is essential for any good story, it allows for the unknown to happen without the reader disengaging..like the psychology of pace and lead...]
i want an 'in your face' emote haha
you liked unicorn hotel right?
did you fill out the gaps of the plot with that story..ive always thought about changing that into a novel..or expanding it..i just need a reason why she would do it or how it would come about and of course a conclusion to the story that makes sense
i loved that - i will re read it and ponder - but not just now got a pile of ladies to abuse soon "
im going to sulk because im not able to come out and play..the one good thing is that i found 4 shortcake biscuits in my cupboard the kids didnt find..and have demolished them..seriously though have a wonderful time..wish i was there xx |
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By *uzy444 OP Woman
over a year ago
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"If i could come up with a plot I'd be Writing my own novel not giving away my ideas "
fair enough,,some people are concept people and dont like writing though. im not nicking peoples ideas im asking for suggestive inspiration i can run with x |
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"cant two people just meet in the local pool/sauna/ chat over a magazine article whilst sitting on a long train journey - ok im way too shallow ahh the voice of reality..thankyou thankyou..
so all i need is background of what they were doing..why there..how get talking etc..
who are they as people?
ps im glad theres a sane one in here xx
see Rossi - reality required - maybe onto a convention of a kind - if you want to mix in medievil, medical or supernatural
believability is essential for any good story, it allows for the unknown to happen without the reader disengaging..like the psychology of pace and lead...]
i want an 'in your face' emote haha
you liked unicorn hotel right?
did you fill out the gaps of the plot with that story..ive always thought about changing that into a novel..or expanding it..i just need a reason why she would do it or how it would come about and of course a conclusion to the story that makes sense
i loved that - i will re read it and ponder - but not just now got a pile of ladies to abuse soon im going to sulk because im not able to come out and play..the one good thing is that i found 4 shortcake biscuits in my cupboard the kids didnt find..and have demolished them..seriously though have a wonderful time..wish i was there xx"
dont sulk -  i will have an orgasm or two on your behalf |
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By *uzy444 OP Woman
over a year ago
in the suffolk countryside |
"cant two people just meet in the local pool/sauna/ chat over a magazine article whilst sitting on a long train journey - ok im way too shallow ahh the voice of reality..thankyou thankyou..
so all i need is background of what they were doing..why there..how get talking etc..
who are they as people?
ps im glad theres a sane one in here xx
see Rossi - reality required - maybe onto a convention of a kind - if you want to mix in medievil, medical or supernatural
believability is essential for any good story, it allows for the unknown to happen without the reader disengaging..like the psychology of pace and lead...]
i want an 'in your face' emote haha
you liked unicorn hotel right?
did you fill out the gaps of the plot with that story..ive always thought about changing that into a novel..or expanding it..i just need a reason why she would do it or how it would come about and of course a conclusion to the story that makes sense
i loved that - i will re read it and ponder - but not just now got a pile of ladies to abuse soon im going to sulk because im not able to come out and play..the one good thing is that i found 4 shortcake biscuits in my cupboard the kids didnt find..and have demolished them..seriously though have a wonderful time..wish i was there xx
dont sulk - i will have an orgasm or two on your behalf "
hahaha go for it...and thanks very thoughtful of you xxxx |
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"If i could come up with a plot I'd be Writing my own novel not giving away my ideas fair enough,,some people are concept people and dont like writing though. im not nicking peoples ideas im asking for suggestive inspiration i can run with x"
It was meant in a jokey way...o wasn't suggesting you were stealing ideas x |
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"cant two people just meet in the local pool/sauna/ chat over a magazine article whilst sitting on a long train journey - ok im way too shallow ahh the voice of reality..thankyou thankyou..
so all i need is background of what they were doing..why there..how get talking etc..
who are they as people?
ps im glad theres a sane one in here xx
see Rossi - reality required - maybe onto a convention of a kind - if you want to mix in medievil, medical or supernatural
believability is essential for any good story, it allows for the unknown to happen without the reader disengaging..like the psychology of pace and lead...]
i want an 'in your face' emote haha
you liked unicorn hotel right?
did you fill out the gaps of the plot with that story..ive always thought about changing that into a novel..or expanding it..i just need a reason why she would do it or how it would come about and of course a conclusion to the story that makes sense
i loved that - i will re read it and ponder - but not just now got a pile of ladies to abuse soon im going to sulk because im not able to come out and play..the one good thing is that i found 4 shortcake biscuits in my cupboard the kids didnt find..and have demolished them..seriously though have a wonderful time..wish i was there xx
dont sulk - i will have an orgasm or two on your behalf
hahaha go for it...and thanks very thoughtful of you xxxx"
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By *uzy444 OP Woman
over a year ago
in the suffolk countryside |
"cant two people just meet in the local pool/sauna/ chat over a magazine article whilst sitting on a long train journey - ok im way too shallow ahh the voice of reality..thankyou thankyou..
so all i need is background of what they were doing..why there..how get talking etc..
who are they as people?
ps im glad theres a sane one in here xx
see Rossi - reality required - maybe onto a convention of a kind - if you want to mix in medievil, medical or supernatural
believability is essential for any good story, it allows for the unknown to happen without the reader disengaging..like the psychology of pace and lead...]
i want an 'in your face' emote haha
you liked unicorn hotel right?
did you fill out the gaps of the plot with that story..ive always thought about changing that into a novel..or expanding it..i just need a reason why she would do it or how it would come about and of course a conclusion to the story that makes sense
i loved that - i will re read it and ponder - but not just now got a pile of ladies to abuse soon im going to sulk because im not able to come out and play..the one good thing is that i found 4 shortcake biscuits in my cupboard the kids didnt find..and have demolished them..seriously though have a wonderful time..wish i was there xx
dont sulk - i will have an orgasm or two on your behalf
hahaha go for it...and thanks very thoughtful of you xxxx
you know it "
minx..im saving petrol money as we speak x |
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"ok so you are all sexy and kinky so and sos so i want to pick your conceptual ideas..
some of you have liked my stories here but i want to develop the scenes into something with a plot..i find scenes easy to write but not
the structure of how people could meet realistically,
how kink etc gets introduced,
the purpose of the whole story..
the deeper psychology behind the
characters
so this tuesday, if you are inspired or bored, please offer your inspired suggestions on this thread and be my storytime collective muse...
thank you
s x"
I've got a couple of rolepaly scripts from something ago. Maybe you could find something in there to help you. Mail me if interested. |
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By *uzy444 OP Woman
over a year ago
in the suffolk countryside |
"ok so you are all sexy and kinky so and sos so i want to pick your conceptual ideas..
some of you have liked my stories here but i want to develop the scenes into something with a plot..i find scenes easy to write but not
the structure of how people could meet realistically,
how kink etc gets introduced,
the purpose of the whole story..
the deeper psychology behind the
characters
so this tuesday, if you are inspired or bored, please offer your inspired suggestions on this thread and be my storytime collective muse...
thank you
s x
I've got a couple of rolepaly scripts from something ago. Maybe you could find something in there to help you. Mail me if interested. "
as i said scning isnt a problem its more the real situations that would realistically work to continue into an erotic/ kink novel x |
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"cant two people just meet in the local pool/sauna/ chat over a magazine article whilst sitting on a long train journey - ok im way too shallow ahh the voice of reality..thankyou thankyou..
so all i need is background of what they were doing..why there..how get talking etc..
who are they as people?
ps im glad theres a sane one in here xx
see Rossi - reality required - maybe onto a convention of a kind - if you want to mix in medievil, medical or supernatural
believability is essential for any good story, it allows for the unknown to happen without the reader disengaging..like the psychology of pace and lead...]
i want an 'in your face' emote haha
you liked unicorn hotel right?
did you fill out the gaps of the plot with that story..ive always thought about changing that into a novel..or expanding it..i just need a reason why she would do it or how it would come about and of course a conclusion to the story that makes sense
i loved that - i will re read it and ponder - but not just now got a pile of ladies to abuse soon im going to sulk because im not able to come out and play..the one good thing is that i found 4 shortcake biscuits in my cupboard the kids didnt find..and have demolished them..seriously though have a wonderful time..wish i was there xx
dont sulk - i will have an orgasm or two on your behalf
hahaha go for it...and thanks very thoughtful of you xxxx
you know it minx..im saving petrol money as we speak x"
atta girl
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By *uzy444 OP Woman
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in the suffolk countryside |
"cant two people just meet in the local pool/sauna/ chat over a magazine article whilst sitting on a long train journey - ok im way too shallow ahh the voice of reality..thankyou thankyou..
so all i need is background of what they were doing..why there..how get talking etc..
who are they as people?
ps im glad theres a sane one in here xx
see Rossi - reality required - maybe onto a convention of a kind - if you want to mix in medievil, medical or supernatural
believability is essential for any good story, it allows for the unknown to happen without the reader disengaging..like the psychology of pace and lead...]
i want an 'in your face' emote haha
you liked unicorn hotel right?
did you fill out the gaps of the plot with that story..ive always thought about changing that into a novel..or expanding it..i just need a reason why she would do it or how it would come about and of course a conclusion to the story that makes sense
i loved that - i will re read it and ponder - but not just now got a pile of ladies to abuse soon im going to sulk because im not able to come out and play..the one good thing is that i found 4 shortcake biscuits in my cupboard the kids didnt find..and have demolished them..seriously though have a wonderful time..wish i was there xx
dont sulk - i will have an orgasm or two on your behalf
hahaha go for it...and thanks very thoughtful of you xxxx
you know it minx..im saving petrol money as we speak x
atta girl
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sweet do you go to chams i cant remember? x |
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"cant two people just meet in the local pool/sauna/ chat over a magazine article whilst sitting on a long train journey - ok im way too shallow ahh the voice of reality..thankyou thankyou..
so all i need is background of what they were doing..why there..how get talking etc..
who are they as people?
ps im glad theres a sane one in here xx
see Rossi - reality required - maybe onto a convention of a kind - if you want to mix in medievil, medical or supernatural
believability is essential for any good story, it allows for the unknown to happen without the reader disengaging..like the psychology of pace and lead...]
i want an 'in your face' emote haha
you liked unicorn hotel right?
did you fill out the gaps of the plot with that story..ive always thought about changing that into a novel..or expanding it..i just need a reason why she would do it or how it would come about and of course a conclusion to the story that makes sense
i loved that - i will re read it and ponder - but not just now got a pile of ladies to abuse soon im going to sulk because im not able to come out and play..the one good thing is that i found 4 shortcake biscuits in my cupboard the kids didnt find..and have demolished them..seriously though have a wonderful time..wish i was there xx
dont sulk - i will have an orgasm or two on your behalf
hahaha go for it...and thanks very thoughtful of you xxxx
you know it minx..im saving petrol money as we speak x
atta girl
sweet do you go to chams i cant remember? x"
its on our to go to places - but its further afield so we are hoping to go with friends for a weekend and meet some folk there - its been over a year in planning hahah |
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By *uzy444 OP Woman
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"cant two people just meet in the local pool/sauna/ chat over a magazine article whilst sitting on a long train journey - ok im way too shallow ahh the voice of reality..thankyou thankyou..
so all i need is background of what they were doing..why there..how get talking etc..
who are they as people?
ps im glad theres a sane one in here xx
see Rossi - reality required - maybe onto a convention of a kind - if you want to mix in medievil, medical or supernatural
believability is essential for any good story, it allows for the unknown to happen without the reader disengaging..like the psychology of pace and lead...]
i want an 'in your face' emote haha
you liked unicorn hotel right?
did you fill out the gaps of the plot with that story..ive always thought about changing that into a novel..or expanding it..i just need a reason why she would do it or how it would come about and of course a conclusion to the story that makes sense
i loved that - i will re read it and ponder - but not just now got a pile of ladies to abuse soon im going to sulk because im not able to come out and play..the one good thing is that i found 4 shortcake biscuits in my cupboard the kids didnt find..and have demolished them..seriously though have a wonderful time..wish i was there xx
dont sulk - i will have an orgasm or two on your behalf
hahaha go for it...and thanks very thoughtful of you xxxx
you know it minx..im saving petrol money as we speak x
atta girl
sweet do you go to chams i cant remember? x
its on our to go to places - but its further afield so we are hoping to go with friends for a weekend and meet some folk there - its been over a year in planning hahah "
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Howsabout a scenario where the attempt to return an item that has been left behind at say, a coffee shop table as they vacate their seat for you?...
Perhaps a diary/notepad with notations on a novel that they are writing (possibly an erotic novel ?) Which you happen to have a look through whilst endeavouring to return it?...
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"Howsabout a scenario where the attempt to return an item that has been left behind at say, a coffee shop table as they vacate their seat for you?...
Perhaps a diary/notepad with notations on a novel that they are writing (possibly an erotic novel ?) Which you happen to have a look through whilst endeavouring to return it?...
Just an idea though "
yay a man with an imagination...thankyou hunni...maybe it includes his BDSM checklist..maybe he left it there on purpose...cool...add if you can xx |
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"yay a man with an imagination...thankyou hunni...maybe it includes his BDSM checklist..maybe he left it there on purpose...cool...add if you can xx"
Or an ongoing exchange takes place as each day he gives up his seat and she gives the notes back with her added ideas/desires?
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"yay a man with an imagination...thankyou hunni...maybe it includes his BDSM checklist..maybe he left it there on purpose...cool...add if you can xx
Or an ongoing exchange takes place as each day he gives up his seat and she gives the notes back with her added ideas/desires?
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Maybe leading on from notes to actual full descriptions and explicitly described scenes which blatantly have each other featuring in them?
Just an idea xx |
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"yay a man with an imagination...thankyou hunni...maybe it includes his BDSM checklist..maybe he left it there on purpose...cool...add if you can xx
Or an ongoing exchange takes place as each day he gives up his seat and she gives the notes back with her added ideas/desires?
Maybe leading on from notes to actual full descriptions and explicitly described scenes which blatantly have each other featuring in them?
Just an idea xx"
max imum flirt potential here |
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"I'm currently reading The BFG. I'm no good to you "
brill book me and my daughter going to see it at cinema next week - shes 22 im 54 both gonna act like 10 yr olds |
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"I'm currently reading The BFG. I'm no good to you
brill book me and my daughter going to see it at cinema next week - shes 22 im 54 both gonna act like 10 yr olds "
I'm excited too. Though it will take some getting used to that The BFG isn't voiced by David Jason. |
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By *uzy444 OP Woman
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"yay a man with an imagination...thankyou hunni...maybe it includes his BDSM checklist..maybe he left it there on purpose...cool...add if you can xx
Or an ongoing exchange takes place as each day he gives up his seat and she gives the notes back with her added ideas/desires?
Maybe leading on from notes to actual full descriptions and explicitly described scenes which blatantly have each other featuring in them?
Just an idea xx
max imum flirt potential here"
hey im useless at flirting in real life...dont you feel this is a bit 'online'?..maybe one exchange when she gets the book back to him he manages to send her something offering he a rendezvous...or something?? |
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"yay a man with an imagination...thankyou hunni...maybe it includes his BDSM checklist..maybe he left it there on purpose...cool...add if you can xx
Or an ongoing exchange takes place as each day he gives up his seat and she gives the notes back with her added ideas/desires?
Maybe leading on from notes to actual full descriptions and explicitly described scenes which blatantly have each other featuring in them?
Just an idea xx
max imum flirt potential herehey im useless at flirting in real life...dont you feel this is a bit 'online'?..maybe one exchange when she gets the book back to him he manages to send her something offering he a rendezvous...or something??"
maybe the old fashioned left bundle of notes - well one manilla folders worth that the finder reads and wonders about - is it research - is it blog - is it story hmmmmm- do they poo poo the stuff they had to nosily read or were they fk yeah i need this in my life |
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"yay a man with an imagination...thankyou hunni...maybe it includes his BDSM checklist..maybe he left it there on purpose...cool...add if you can xx
Or an ongoing exchange takes place as each day he gives up his seat and she gives the notes back with her added ideas/desires?
Maybe leading on from notes to actual full descriptions and explicitly described scenes which blatantly have each other featuring in them?
Just an idea xx
max imum flirt potential herehey im useless at flirting in real life...dont you feel this is a bit 'online'?..maybe one exchange when she gets the book back to him he manages to send her something offering he a rendezvous...or something??"
you flirt with those sexy eyes mrs x |
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"yay a man with an imagination...thankyou hunni...maybe it includes his BDSM checklist..maybe he left it there on purpose...cool...add if you can xx
Or an ongoing exchange takes place as each day he gives up his seat and she gives the notes back with her added ideas/desires?
Maybe leading on from notes to actual full descriptions and explicitly described scenes which blatantly have each other featuring in them?
Just an idea xx
max imum flirt potential herehey im useless at flirting in real life...dont you feel this is a bit 'online'?..maybe one exchange when she gets the book back to him he manages to send her something offering he a rendezvous...or something??
maybe the old fashioned left bundle of notes - well one manilla folders worth that the finder reads and wonders about - is it research - is it blog - is it story hmmmmm- do they poo poo the stuff they had to nosily read or were they fk yeah i need this in my life "
ok why would she read the stuff and why would she feel the need for it in her life...background character stuff ideas?? |
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"yay a man with an imagination...thankyou hunni...maybe it includes his BDSM checklist..maybe he left it there on purpose...cool...add if you can xx
Or an ongoing exchange takes place as each day he gives up his seat and she gives the notes back with her added ideas/desires?
Maybe leading on from notes to actual full descriptions and explicitly described scenes which blatantly have each other featuring in them?
Just an idea xx
max imum flirt potential herehey im useless at flirting in real life...dont you feel this is a bit 'online'?..maybe one exchange when she gets the book back to him he manages to send her something offering he a rendezvous...or something??
you flirt with those sexy eyes mrs x"
i do not!  well not on purpose anyway.. |
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"yay a man with an imagination...thankyou hunni...maybe it includes his BDSM checklist..maybe he left it there on purpose...cool...add if you can xx
Or an ongoing exchange takes place as each day he gives up his seat and she gives the notes back with her added ideas/desires?
Maybe leading on from notes to actual full descriptions and explicitly described scenes which blatantly have each other featuring in them?
Just an idea xx
max imum flirt potential herehey im useless at flirting in real life...dont you feel this is a bit 'online'?..maybe one exchange when she gets the book back to him he manages to send her something offering he a rendezvous...or something??
maybe the old fashioned left bundle of notes - well one manilla folders worth that the finder reads and wonders about - is it research - is it blog - is it story hmmmmm- do they poo poo the stuff they had to nosily read or were they fk yeah i need this in my life ok why would she read the stuff and why would she feel the need for it in her life...background character stuff ideas??"
depends what was in the folder - could be typed up notes - or could be scrapbook type ideas |
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"yay a man with an imagination...thankyou hunni...maybe it includes his BDSM checklist..maybe he left it there on purpose...cool...add if you can xx
Or an ongoing exchange takes place as each day he gives up his seat and she gives the notes back with her added ideas/desires?
Maybe leading on from notes to actual full descriptions and explicitly described scenes which blatantly have each other featuring in them?
Just an idea xx
max imum flirt potential herehey im useless at flirting in real life...dont you feel this is a bit 'online'?..maybe one exchange when she gets the book back to him he manages to send her something offering he a rendezvous...or something??
you flirt with those sexy eyes mrs x i do not! well not on purpose anyway.. "
oh you so do |
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"yay a man with an imagination...thankyou hunni...maybe it includes his BDSM checklist..maybe he left it there on purpose...cool...add if you can xx
Or an ongoing exchange takes place as each day he gives up his seat and she gives the notes back with her added ideas/desires?
Maybe leading on from notes to actual full descriptions and explicitly described scenes which blatantly have each other featuring in them?
Just an idea xx
max imum flirt potential herehey im useless at flirting in real life...dont you feel this is a bit 'online'?..maybe one exchange when she gets the book back to him he manages to send her something offering he a rendezvous...or something??"
Hehe! Well I guess it depends on whether you like the slow burn of escalating flirtation building up to the actual invitation of a meeeting, or want it to go straight to the bedroom!(or dungeon) lol |
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"yay a man with an imagination...thankyou hunni...maybe it includes his BDSM checklist..maybe he left it there on purpose...cool...add if you can xx
Or an ongoing exchange takes place as each day he gives up his seat and she gives the notes back with her added ideas/desires?
Maybe leading on from notes to actual full descriptions and explicitly described scenes which blatantly have each other featuring in them?
Just an idea xx
max imum flirt potential herehey im useless at flirting in real life...dont you feel this is a bit 'online'?..maybe one exchange when she gets the book back to him he manages to send her something offering he a rendezvous...or something??
you flirt with those sexy eyes mrs x i do not! well not on purpose anyway..
oh you so do "
not consciously i dont |
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"yay a man with an imagination...thankyou hunni...maybe it includes his BDSM checklist..maybe he left it there on purpose...cool...add if you can xx
Or an ongoing exchange takes place as each day he gives up his seat and she gives the notes back with her added ideas/desires?
Maybe leading on from notes to actual full descriptions and explicitly described scenes which blatantly have each other featuring in them?
Just an idea xx
max imum flirt potential herehey im useless at flirting in real life...dont you feel this is a bit 'online'?..maybe one exchange when she gets the book back to him he manages to send her something offering he a rendezvous...or something??
Hehe! Well I guess it depends on whether you like the slow burn of escalating flirtation building up to the actual invitation of a meeeting, or want it to go straight to the bedroom!(or dungeon) lol "
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Getting back to the couple on train scenario...
One party, recently split from partner, sexless marriage....reading a magazine article on swinging!
The party opposite a seasoned swinger, just had a promising meet cancelled..
Party reading magazine 'This is silly/crazy!''
Other party 'Is it? Why?''
And of you go
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"Getting back to the couple on train scenario...
One party, recently split from partner, sexless marriage....reading a magazine article on swinging!
The party opposite a seasoned swinger, just had a promising meet cancelled..
Party reading magazine 'This is silly/crazy!''
Other party 'Is it? Why?''
And of you go
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highly unlikely..whats the ending she fucks him to death?? |
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Hehe! Well I guess it depends on whether you like the slow burn of escalating flirtation building up to the actual invitation of a meeeting, or want it to go straight to the bedroom!(or dungeon) lol a balance but there hasto be a purpose more than man wants woman...what could that be? "
I was kinda going for the original purpose to be the innocent return of the item left behind and then progress in to a fascination/obsession angle maybe, but considering that I hadn't had more than a moment to come up with the scenario after I read your thread, I'll admit that I didn't get much further in the advancement if this tale |
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Hehe! Well I guess it depends on whether you like the slow burn of escalating flirtation building up to the actual invitation of a meeeting, or want it to go straight to the bedroom!(or dungeon) lol a balance but there hasto be a purpose more than man wants woman...what could that be?
I was kinda going for the original purpose to be the innocent return of the item left behind and then progress in to a fascination/obsession angle maybe, but considering that I hadn't had more than a moment to come up with the scenario after I read your thread, I'll admit that I didn't get much further in the advancement if this tale "
ok so what would the last page say? x |
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" ok so what would the last page say? x "
The last page?... It would be an epilogue of sorts...
The aromas and aural company that the coffee shop provided her with daily were devoid of their usually welcome good morning kiss to her senses.
She realised that with the culmination of her quest of sorts that she would no longer look upon this small but meaningful part of her regimen with the same fondness.
At the threshold she remained, reluctant to go on with the ritual that had taken her to awakenings she did not know to be slumbering in her. Not because of an unwillingness to take them any further. But knowing now that he had been the trigger, and would always be remembered for that, yet no longer able to accompany her on the next steps of her meandering and now unquenchable thirst for exploration.
His back to her, sat at the same table as ever, she left him unaware of her presence and turned away, knowing that she would be writing her own next chapter.
Soooo that was a bit longer than I intended! Lol
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ok so what would the last page say? x
The last page?... It would be an epilogue of sorts...
The aromas and aural company that the coffee shop provided her with daily were devoid of their usually welcome good morning kiss to her senses.
She realised that with the culmination of her quest of sorts that she would no longer look upon this small but meaningful part of her regimen with the same fondness.
At the threshold she remained, reluctant to go on with the ritual that had taken her to awakenings she did not know to be slumbering in her. Not because of an unwillingness to take them any further. But knowing now that he had been the trigger, and would always be remembered for that, yet no longer able to accompany her on the next steps of her meandering and now unquenchable thirst for exploration.
His back to her, sat at the same table as ever, she left him unaware of her presence and turned away, knowing that she would be writing her own next chapter.
Soooo that was a bit longer than I intended! Lol
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wow you are an excellent muse and conceptualist sweet ..thankyou..so obviously a trilogy then?.. |
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A woman recently divorced needs to find extra income. Starts writing erotic short stories. Mainly based on her inner desires things she has only fantasised never explored.An editor reads them and it peaks his interest. He sees a woman that has hidden her sexuality deep inside. When she submits new stories they both reenact them. So can be visit to local club, introducing bondage. He guides her through new experiences. She in turn helps him release the darker needs in him.She realises that what she feels and her desires are not weird or unnatural but part of who she is.She isn't some naive innocent just someone who has never met right person to release herself to. |
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