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Is my profile crap and have waffled to much ..help lol
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"Lots of typos in your profile text." thanks il go through it all again lol | |||
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"Yea it's rubbish x"lmfao I know il get it right x | |||
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"Yea it's rubbish x lmfao I know il get it right x"Nah, you probably wont | |||
"Acid Jazz "yeah mate I was djing in liverpool playing acid jazz | |||
"Yea it's rubbish x lmfao I know il get it right x
Nah, you probably wont"I know lol | |||
"it took so long to read it I forgot the question "I know I'm going to wipe it and start again some of the profiles are long but I read a few short profiles | |||
what I'm saying ia that to me the profile waffles on and I tuned out really, as a lot has nothing to do with swinging and what you can offer a lady or couple
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As others have said, I'd keep the text to the point:
What do I offer?
What do I want? | |||
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"I don't remember the acid jazz scene in the 90s, I must have been too young what I'm saying ia that to me the profile waffles on and I tuned out really, as a lot has nothing to do with swinging and what you can offer a lady or couple
"yes I've realised that ive waffled I will change my profile to a shorter version and state what I have to offer and the acid jazz scene was a mixture of soul rare groove funk and hip hop | |||
"Too many irrelevant words.... Perhaps better off just sticking with the sort of basic information needed to gauge sexual compatibility and mutual appeal... "thanks | |||
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 Ha ha. I just looked at my own. Ha ha.
Sort it out girl! | |||
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"I can tell you are a nice guy with nice buns
As others have said, I'd keep the text to the point:
What do I offer?
What do I want?"thanks much appreciated i shall take your advice | |||
"i liked the status update " thanks | |||
"Lose the Acid Jazz 90's dj stuff. How will that get you a meet? " will do mate I was just trying say a little about myself went to far | |||
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"Break it into smaller paragraphs " will do mate one of my bad traits can't stop talking shows in the way I write | |||
"Lose the Acid Jazz 90's dj stuff. How will that get you a meet? will do mate I was just trying say a little about myself went to far "went too far back | |||
"It is unreadable. Try a grammar and spelling checker." I know just read it I'm more creative than a writer thanks for your input | |||
"Lose the Acid Jazz 90's dj stuff. How will that get you a meet? will do mate I was just trying say a little about myself went to far went too far back "got it cheers | |||
"It is unreadable. Try a grammar and spelling checker. I know just read it I'm more creative than a writer thanks for your input "Try reading before you create? | |||
"It is unreadable. Try a grammar and spelling checker. I know just read it I'm more creative than a writer thanks for your input
Try reading before you create?"I've started writing my profile again .much appreciated for your input | |||
