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Ok I'm wanting people to come criticise my profile.
Woah woah woah brigades of all manners.......I'm not just on a "come look at my profile pleeeeeeaaaaase" case.i actually want to know what people think....have i made it too nice,not enough raunch.
It's hard to be honest but at the same time not scare the crap out of people.
All comments will be Grateley appreciated.i throw myself at your mercy lol |
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"Ok I'm wanting people to come criticise my profile.
Woah woah woah brigades of all manners.......I'm not just on a "come look at my profile pleeeeeeaaaaase" case.i actually want to know what people think....have i made it too nice,not enough raunch.
It's hard to be honest but at the same time not scare the crap out of people.
All comments will be Grateley appreciated.i throw myself at your mercy lol"
No comment from this nazi grammar. |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
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"Ok I'm wanting people to come criticise my profile.
Woah woah woah brigades of all manners.......I'm not just on a "come look at my profile pleeeeeeaaaaase" case.i actually want to know what people think....have i made it too nice,not enough raunch.
It's hard to be honest but at the same time not scare the crap out of people.
All comments will be Grateley appreciated.i throw myself at your mercy lol
No comment from this nazi grammar."
Yes my grammar may be abit squiffy,but after 5 cans of Stella my eyes gan a bit squiffy lol |
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"Ok I'm wanting people to come criticise my profile.
Woah woah woah brigades of all manners.......I'm not just on a "come look at my profile pleeeeeeaaaaase" case.i actually want to know what people think....have i made it too nice,not enough raunch.
It's hard to be honest but at the same time not scare the crap out of people.
All comments will be Grateley appreciated.i throw myself at your mercy lol
No comment from this nazi grammar."
Grammar nazi perhaps  |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
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"Ok I'm wanting people to come criticise my profile.
Woah woah woah brigades of all manners.......I'm not just on a "come look at my profile pleeeeeeaaaaase" case.i actually want to know what people think....have i made it too nice,not enough raunch.
It's hard to be honest but at the same time not scare the crap out of people.
All comments will be Grateley appreciated.i throw myself at your mercy lol
No comment from this nazi grammar.
Grammar nazi perhaps "
Lol yes I'm err getting the feeling I need to gan&check my grammar |
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"Where you say ....&....put some spaces in between the words and the & signs.. It makes my eyes go funny trying to read it like that!
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Nice one point noted |
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"Where you say ....&....put some spaces in between the words and the & signs.. It makes my eyes go funny trying to read it like that!
Nice one point noted"
And go and get a handful of apostrophes and commas ....
And deploy appropriately.
Not being arsey here, but the lack makes it difficult to read .
And you want people to read; you only have about half a second to grab attention. |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
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"Where you say ....&....put some spaces in between the words and the & signs.. It makes my eyes go funny trying to read it like that!
Nice one point noted
And go and get a handful of apostrophes and commas ....
And deploy appropriately.
Not being arsey here, but the lack makes it difficult to read .
And you want people to read; you only have about half a second to grab attention."
Hopefully appeased the grammar squad a little. |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"Where you say ....&....put some spaces in between the words and the & signs.. It makes my eyes go funny trying to read it like that!
Nice one point noted
And go and get a handful of apostrophes and commas ....
And deploy appropriately.
Not being arsey here, but the lack makes it difficult to read .
And you want people to read; you only have about half a second to grab attention.
Hopefully appeased the grammar squad a little. "
Not a lot.
In terms of content, too, it could be better.j |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
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"Where you say ....&....put some spaces in between the words and the & signs.. It makes my eyes go funny trying to read it like that!
Nice one point noted
And go and get a handful of apostrophes and commas ....
And deploy appropriately.
Not being arsey here, but the lack makes it difficult to read .
And you want people to read; you only have about half a second to grab attention.
Hopefully appeased the grammar squad a little.
Not a lot.
In terms of content, too, it could be better.j"
Well at least a try is better than nowt lol.Will try harder in the future.Thanks for the reply
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