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By *icketysplitsWoman
over a year ago
Way over Yonder, that's where I'm bound |
It's not the most positive profile I have read.
The SHOUTY CAPITALS would put me off.
However, I am female and not looking for women so I am sure there will be some men along shortly to tell you it's fantastic.
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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GUYS IF I DONT MAIL BACK STRAIGHT AWAY AFTER I HAVE READ MESSAGES ITS COZ IM PERVING OR IM IN CHAT ROOM OR IN WORK OR DOING HOUSE WORK OR IM BEING A MAM TO MY 4 year old son or IM in work where I work full time ...I KNOW ITS NOT MUCH BUT STOP FUCKING NAGGING PLEASE
I'd lose that, just say be patient lol oh and the bit about your partner not knowing your on here, men will use that as ammunition to piss you off when you reject them lol  |
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"Hi please would You take a look at my profile and give me your opinions ....and advise on how to improve thank you x"
As a single female you must get a ton of mail so why the need to improve it?
As a couple of pointers I would say lose the capital letters, as someone else said it looks shouty and aggressive.
2nd point is run a spell check on your profile text and eliminate the errors, some of the grammar police on here won't like it.  |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Why do people think that cap locks is shouting cap locks is cap locks just bigger than normal.....no Malas meant by it at all..I put what I have on my profile txt because I get so much aggressive abusive messages for not replying....but I am taking notes all in cap locks lol |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Why do people think that cap locks is shouting cap locks is cap locks just bigger than normal.....no Malas meant by it at all..I put what I have on my profile txt because I get so much aggressive abusive messages for not replying....but I am taking notes all in cap locks lol"
*text* sorry lmao couldn't help it |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"I would say check your spelling and use proper words rather than, for example, "av". another one from the spelling police  "
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Lol but to be honest I'm not here for my spelling also done pretty well for myself without having the degree in English grammer just u sex site not Oxford uni |
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By *icketysplitsWoman
over a year ago
Way over Yonder, that's where I'm bound |
"Why do people think that cap locks is shouting cap locks is cap locks just bigger than normal.....no Malas meant by it at all..I put what I have on my profile txt because I get so much aggressive abusive messages for not replying....but I am taking notes all in cap locks lol"
You can't shout or indicate force on the internet just with words. CAPS gives you that. If bold or italics or another colour was available people might use that to highlight difference in text. CAPS is the convention for shouting/force.
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"I would say check your spelling and use proper words rather than, for example, "av". another one from the spelling police .
Lol but to be honest I'm not here for my spelling also done pretty well for myself without having the degree in English grammer just u sex site not Oxford uni "
so its a 'take a look' thread asking for advice and opinions on the profile but not the spelling? |
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By *ee VianteWoman
over a year ago
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"I would say check your spelling and use proper words rather than, for example, "av". another one from the spelling police .
Lol but to be honest I'm not here for my spelling also done pretty well for myself without having the degree in English grammer just u sex site not Oxford uni "
That's up to you but you asked how to improve your profile. That would improve your profile.
What's the point of asking for suggestions if you're going to argue with them when they're given?
Plenty would argue with you that this is "just a sex site" too. |
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By *ee VianteWoman
over a year ago
Somewhere in North Norfolk |
"I would say check your spelling and use proper words rather than, for example, "av". another one from the spelling police .
Lol but to be honest I'm not here for my spelling also done pretty well for myself without having the degree in English grammer just u sex site not Oxford uni
so its a 'take a look' thread asking for advice and opinions on the profile but not the spelling?"
Nah, it's a look at me thread that doesn't really want comments on the profile at all. |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"I would say check your spelling and use proper words rather than, for example, "av". another one from the spelling police .
Lol but to be honest I'm not here for my spelling also done pretty well for myself without having the degree in English grammer just u sex site not Oxford uni
That's up to you but you asked how to improve your profile. That would improve your profile.
What's the point of asking for suggestions if you're going to argue with them when they're given?
Plenty would argue with you that this is "just a sex site" too."
Who's arguing Hun Im not.....so I just don't get my say is that what u mean |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"The difference between a man asking for profile advice and a woman asking for profile advice is... she's got tits and a fanny.
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bouncing tits for that one |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"The difference between a man asking for profile advice and a woman asking for profile advice is... she's got tits and a fanny.
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That's right and as well women are sought after lol. |
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By *ee VianteWoman
over a year ago
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"The difference between a man asking for profile advice and a woman asking for profile advice is... she's got tits and a fanny.
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And I said what I often say to men, i.e. check your spelling and English.
And I got the usual defensive, "it's only a sex site".
Maybe not completely different after all. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"I would say check your spelling and use proper words rather than, for example, "av". another one from the spelling police .
Lol but to be honest I'm not here for my spelling also done pretty well for myself without having the degree in English grammer just u sex site not Oxford uni
That's up to you but you asked how to improve your profile. That would improve your profile.
What's the point of asking for suggestions if you're going to argue with them when they're given?
Plenty would argue with you that this is "just a sex site" too.
Who's arguing Hun Im not.....so I just don't get my say is that what u mean"
Mispelling and using the word Hun.......that's one way to rattle plenty of cages on here |
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By *icketysplitsWoman
over a year ago
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"The difference between a man asking for profile advice and a woman asking for profile advice is... she's got tits and a fanny.
And I said what I often say to men, i.e. check your spelling and English.
And I got the usual defensive, "it's only a sex site".
Maybe not completely different after all."
Perhaps not.
I give the same advice regardless of gender.
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"I would say check your spelling and use proper words rather than, for example, "av". another one from the spelling police .
Lol but to be honest I'm not here for my spelling also done pretty well for myself without having the degree in English grammer just u sex site not Oxford uni
so its a 'take a look' thread asking for advice and opinions on the profile but not the spelling?
Nah, it's a look at me thread that doesn't really want comments on the profile at all."
AWWW didn't have u Down as a biting type Hun just i asked bout actual profile not the spelling if that is the first thing a guy comments on then hesreally not for me |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Same advice as is give a guy asking.
Your profile text doesn't really say anything of substance just a list of negative stuff.
Tell people about you and about what you 'do' want rather than what you don't.
You are cute though so even if your profile was blank, I'd venture your inbox will meltdown soon enough.
I personally don't care about the spelling or grammar, I get the gist of what's said and you're here for a fuck not an English exam right? |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"I would say check your spelling and use proper words rather than, for example, "av". another one from the spelling police .
Lol but to be honest I'm not here for my spelling also done pretty well for myself without having the degree in English grammer just u sex site not Oxford uni
That's up to you but you asked how to improve your profile. That would improve your profile.
What's the point of asking for suggestions if you're going to argue with them when they're given?
Plenty would argue with you that this is "just a sex site" too.
Who's arguing Hun Im not.....so I just don't get my say is that what u mean
Mispelling and using the word Hun.......that's one way to rattle plenty of cages on here "
. I usually say sweet pea but thought better not as that would get back up lol |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"I would say check your spelling and use proper words rather than, for example, "av". another one from the spelling police .
Lol but to be honest I'm not here for my spelling also done pretty well for myself without having the degree in English grammer just u sex site not Oxford uni
so its a 'take a look' thread asking for advice and opinions on the profile but not the spelling?
Nah, it's a look at me thread that doesn't really want comments on the profile at all.
AWWW didn't have u Down as a biting type Hun just i asked bout actual profile not the spelling if that is the first thing a guy comments on then hesreally not for me"
I couldn't care less about spelling....
Fancy a shag  |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Same advice as is give a guy asking.
Your profile text doesn't really say anything of substance just a list of negative stuff.
Tell people about you and about what you 'do' want rather than what you don't.
You are cute though so even if your profile was blank, I'd venture your inbox will meltdown soon enough.
I personally don't care about the spelling or grammar, I get the gist of what's said and you're here for a fuck not an English exam right?"
Lmao correct x |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Thanks sweet pea"
Critical point of view I would say you could half your pictures as, although very nice, they are replicated some times.
I also agree with the caps but you could keep that is but reword it slightly as a warning to guys. |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"Same advice as is give a guy asking.
Your profile text doesn't really say anything of substance just a list of negative stuff.
Tell people about you and about what you 'do' want rather than what you don't.
You are cute though so even if your profile was blank, I'd venture your inbox will meltdown soon enough.
I personally don't care about the spelling or grammar, I get the gist of what's said and you're here for a fuck not an English exam right?
Lmao correct x"
In that case, just make your text a little more positive. And have fun fabbing |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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op on a serious level a lot find caps as a form of shouting, try the forum help threads and look at other female profiles for hints. not gold or silver as they can see you have peeked ha.. and pics well 6 should do the rest in friends as not everyone will have the latest phone |
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By *ee VianteWoman
over a year ago
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"op on a serious level a lot find caps as a form of shouting, try the forum help threads and look at other female profiles for hints. not gold or silver as they can see you have peeked ha.. and pics well 6 should do the rest in friends as not everyone will have the latest phone"
Why would gold and silver members care who looks?
Loads of women look at my profile.
I don't check my who looked list very often anyway. If they looked and didn't message or wink, they weren't what I'm looking for or weren't interested.
I usually only look when I'm counting silhouettes for the silhouette game. |
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By *icketysplitsWoman
over a year ago
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"????????"
OK, I've just worked out you are new to the forum.
Welcome aboard.
Using reply and quote helps to show which post you are answering, seeking clarification about.
There's a little search box on the left hand side which you can use to look up other threads about profile help, and many other things.
Have fun.
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Hi please would You take a look at my profile and give me your opinions ....and advise on how to improve thank you x"
From what I've seen of the site so far, you'd need no picture and just a full stop as description and you'd get hundreds of emails |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Hi please would You take a look at my profile and give me your opinions ....and advise on how to improve thank you x
From what I've seen of the site so far, you'd need no picture and just a full stop as description and you'd get hundreds of emails "
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Hi please would You take a look at my profile and give me your opinions ....and advise on how to improve thank you x"
Your profile says your looking for men and women but states your straight, maybe give that a tweek |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"i love cock and pussy ###############"
But your profile says bi hers doesn't lol
AND She just started another thread identical to this one! Maybe not enough advice on this one eeeeeesh ( reaches for paracetamol ) |
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