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So, just seeing a lot of people on the threads asking for advice on their profiles, we ran a thread like this a while back and it helped us and others streamline our profiles and make them more appealing. Just list a few positive and a few negative points about the profile above you. Remember honesty is a must. Oh and remember to start with the name of the profile you're referring to, if this thread gets too popular it just becomes a frenzy nobody can understand. The template to follow is below. Happy fabbing.
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"I'm in . Please don't be to harsh 
Lol don't mate someone will find fault even if it was perfect"
lol I know mate. I am thick skinned. Or is that just thick ?  |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"I'm in . Please don't be to harsh
Lol don't mate someone will find fault even if it was perfect lol I know mate. I am thick skinned. Or is that just thick ? "
No comment  |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Toshn
Pos
Stated your preferences.
Good condition considering age.
Cons
Bathroom photos, IKEA sell full length mirrors for £15."
haha like it. Thank you x |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"I'm in . Please don't be to harsh
Lol don't mate someone will find fault even if it was perfect lol I know mate. I am thick skinned. Or is that just thick ?
No comment "
Cheers mate |
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"I'm in . Please don't be to harsh
Lol don't mate someone will find fault even if it was perfect lol I know mate. I am thick skinned. Or is that just thick ?
No comment Jo and nicks profile. Great pics , great text. But ain't got a clue what they are looking for
LMFAO maybe we should draw a few pics lol haha yeah , gives us a clue "
Quite fit for an old git but profile needs some dribbling cum shots and a few impaled ladies arses to be really appealing!
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Frisky_Mare
Pos -
Great detail on your profile and expectations
Great figure and look very tidy
Neg -
Sounds somewhat confrontational
More sexy body shots, the ones you have already are damn right sexy. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Beemcpl
Pro: a damn good profile to be fair. Well laid out, clear needs and offers. Well verified!
Con: no kissing..... Must admit I like that, but personal preferences prevail...so fair play |
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By *ady LickWoman
over a year ago
Northampton Somewhere |
Cinnamonandginger
Pros - A good selection of pics of both of you, makes a change! You definitely know what you are looking for.
Cons - Comes across a little bossy perhaps....but that's not really a bad thing |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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" Gimme 2 minutes I will add some!
I'm sure you have more sexual desires than just rimming "
I give a slight hint to them when I mention I like doing things whilst they sleep. It's a tricky one to explain!
Things that I get turned on by are a bit odd and would come later on.
I like guys talking to me, I have a gift that makes people want to talk to me about everything I don't even know how but people just spill all their personal problems out, people that work on checkouts will talk to me and keep talking, even mothers down the school who I don't know that well will talk to me then just keep talking, I give good advice and look like I listen intently! With guys they will talk and talk and then talk about any issues or problems that they have, anything that makes them feel upset or deep rooted insecurities they just spill everything, if I see a guy getting visibly upset or distressed it makes me soaking! I like to comfort them when they feel vulnerable, I'll start sucking their dick or sticking my tit in their mouth. It lulls them into a false sense of security and creates a closeness and a sort of bond which leads to the sex being intense, they tell me all this shit that they've probably never talked about and creates trust which leads to my next thing the sleeping! I like to suck dick and tongue fuck arse holes whilst they sleep, like to sit on their face and fuck their nose and chin then put my fanny over their mouth so I can look down and watch them struggling to breath, they always wake up and have sleepy disorientated sex which again is nice and intense.
So, my sexual desires are quite strange and are not the sort of things that I could advertise on my profile  |
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" Gimme 2 minutes I will add some!
I'm sure you have more sexual desires than just rimming
I give a slight hint to them when I mention I like doing things whilst they sleep. It's a tricky one to explain!
Things that I get turned on by are a bit odd and would come later on.
I like guys talking to me, I have a gift that makes people want to talk to me about everything I don't even know how but people just spill all their personal problems out, people that work on checkouts will talk to me and keep talking, even mothers down the school who I don't know that well will talk to me then just keep talking, I give good advice and look like I listen intently! With guys they will talk and talk and then talk about any issues or problems that they have, anything that makes them feel upset or deep rooted insecurities they just spill everything, if I see a guy getting visibly upset or distressed it makes me soaking! I like to comfort them when they feel vulnerable, I'll start sucking their dick or sticking my tit in their mouth. It lulls them into a false sense of security and creates a closeness and a sort of bond which leads to the sex being intense, they tell me all this shit that they've probably never talked about and creates trust which leads to my next thing the sleeping! I like to suck dick and tongue fuck arse holes whilst they sleep, like to sit on their face and fuck their nose and chin then put my fanny over their mouth so I can look down and watch them struggling to breath, they always wake up and have sleepy disorientated sex which again is nice and intense.
So, my sexual desires are quite strange and are not the sort of things that I could advertise on my profile "
Just post 'em on the forums Athena, no-one will notice  |
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Brightonsteve..
Pros:
Inventive photos! Definitely a flair for the erotic there!
Easy read blurb.. and with some wry humour thrown in.
Cons:
The blurb is a bit confusing from the context of having two profiles.. it can appear as untrustworthy as you redirect people somewhere else after setting them up. Suspect that's not what you intended however.
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"Brightonsteve..
Pros:
Inventive photos! Definitely a flair for the erotic there!
Easy read blurb.. and with some wry humour thrown in.
Cons:
The blurb is a bit confusing from the
context of having two profiles.. it can
appear as untrustworthy as you redirect
people somewhere else after setting
them up. Suspect that's not what you
intended however.
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I didn't think of that! I only have one profile but two sets of wording - this one and I've saved in a word document, the long one. Thanks. That was useful. Your profile is good. |
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By *ady LickWoman
over a year ago
Northampton Somewhere |
"Well I did a critique...... Can someone rip mine to bits ...or otherwise!"
Well I was overlooked to 
Pros - Good breakdown of what you want/don't want etc.
Cons - Too many cock and fucking pics for my liking. Your text us good but just a little long winded.
Well you did ask.... |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Over all great profile write up .
Less cock.and sex pictures, tease and tempt people with glimpses of what may be
Good luck.
I hope that wasn't for me...lol "
your profile is delish Lady x
and OP had another look and yes your profile and pictures are just spot on well done  |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Over all great profile write up .
Less cock.and sex pictures, tease and tempt people with glimpses of what may be
Good luck.
I hope that wasn't for me...lol
your profile is delish Lady x
and OP had another look and yes your profile and pictures are just spot on well done "
For me your profile is too wordy. I think a balance needs to be struck between giving the information and feel you need and trying not to make it too long and leave a little mystery.
I like profiles that give me something to talk about we may have in common (I saw once that a young woman on here loves game of thronea, I'm a massive fan... Conversation started) |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Over all great profile write up .
Less cock.and sex pictures, tease and tempt people with glimpses of what may be
Good luck.
I hope that wasn't for me...lol "
Think it was for me.... But I don't tend to take pics unless I'm having fun. And half of them have been taken by others lol.... |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Im out. Why set yourself up more failure 
The last sentence doesn't make sense. Doesn't work for me anyway. "
Brightonsteve:
Pros:Decent pics
Negative:Having to ask for his proper profile is annoying!!
But he is a lovely man, so I forgive him |
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