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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Im doing a piece of writing and im really struggling to describe the way nipples harden without sounding cliche.
Anyone got any ideas?
Thankyou in advance x  |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Good but not my style.
Try, like a bullet from a gun  "
Yeah I guess your user name indicates you prefer the more direct approach..... |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"Her nipples were that hard I could hang a wet duffle coat off them. "
You have a Duffle coat..... ?seriously ?.... OMG..... marmalade sandwich anyone ?.......
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"Her nipples were that hard I could hang a wet duffle coat off them.
You have a Duffle coat..... ?seriously ?.... OMG..... marmalade sandwich anyone ?.......
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They are the height of fashion in the great metropolis. It'll catch on up there in a few years. Then we'll be wearing Kagool's. |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"Her nipples were that hard I could hang a wet duffle coat off them.
You have a Duffle coat..... ?seriously ?.... OMG..... marmalade sandwich anyone ?.......
They are the height of fashion in the great metropolis. It'll catch on up there in a few years. Then we'll be wearing Kagool's. "
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By *andy_tomMan
over a year ago
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"Im doing a piece of writing and im really struggling to describe the way nipples harden without sounding cliche.
Anyone got any ideas?
Thankyou in advance x "
rolling ice cubes over them stiffens them up and makes them hard .  |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"responded in approval....
Good but not my style.
Try, like a bullet from a gun
Yeah I guess your user name indicates you prefer the more direct approach..... "
Lol I'm more than a username.
Like the unfurling of snowdrops as they seek the morning dew, eagerly awaiting its cold moist touch.
Then like shit off a shovel its over with in a flash.
I have hidden depths. |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"responded in approval....
Good but not my style.
Try, like a bullet from a gun
Yeah I guess your user name indicates you prefer the more direct approach.....
Lol I'm more than a username.
Like the unfurling of snowdrops as they seek the morning dew, eagerly awaiting its cold moist touch.
Then like shit off a shovel its over with in a flash.
I have hidden depths. "
lol..... |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
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"Im doing a piece of writing and im really struggling to describe the way nipples harden without sounding cliche.
Anyone got any ideas?
Thankyou in advance x
rolling ice cubes over them stiffens them up and makes them hard . "
To put it in context, ive just had my mouth round her nipple for the first time and it hardened like .......? |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"Im doing a piece of writing and im really struggling to describe the way nipples harden without sounding cliche.
Anyone got any ideas?
Thankyou in advance x
rolling ice cubes over them stiffens them up and makes them hard .
To put it in context, ive just had my mouth round her nipple for the first time and it hardened like .......?"
Jelly in the fridge ?
Dentures on a plate ?
Klingons on a hairy arse ?
I'm not good at this writing lark lol |
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