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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

Let's review each others profiles, critique them openly and in good taste and in respect to make them better!

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By *oconut2Woman over a year ago

Nether regions of the back of beyond

Good profile and perfect spelling too, you will go far my boy lol

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By *rightonsteveMan over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!

"Good profile and perfect spelling too, you will go far my boy lol

Very clear and well thought out.

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By *ola.Woman over a year ago

Just where I need to be.

"Good profile and perfect spelling too, you will go far my boy lol

Very clear and well thought out.

Very concise profile and appears to like sheep.

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Good profile and perfect spelling too, you will go far my boy lol

Very clear and well thought out.

A bit sheepish if you ask me lol

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Good profile and perfect spelling too, you will go far my boy lol

Very clear and well thought out.

A bit sheepish if you ask me lol

Powerful beard pics well done!!!

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By *adybee77Woman over a year ago

MAMOBA, miles and miles of bugger all (Aberdeenshire)

"Good profile and perfect spelling too, you will go far my boy lol

Very clear and well thought out.

Very concise profile and appears to like sheep.

WOW! great pictures and good text, well done!

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By *MP3Man over a year ago

Between Scylla and Charybdis

"Good profile and perfect spelling too, you will go far my boy lol

Very clear and well thought out.

Very concise profile and appears to like sheep.

Who doesn't?

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Good profile and perfect spelling too, you will go far my boy lol

Very clear and well thought out.

Very concise profile and appears to like sheep.

The boots do it for me!!

And you make a great witch too

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Is anyone honestly gonna say......'shit profile'

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Feel free to critique mine

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Noadonis. That's a difficult profile to criticise. I even looked to see if you'd put the silly disclaimer. Maybe a torso pic too many, but good wordage and certainly very interesting.

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Is anyone honestly gonna say......'shit profile'

gawd i wouldnt dare -

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Good profile and perfect spelling too, you will go far my boy lol

Very clear and well thought out.

Very concise profile and appears to like sheep.

Fabbed

Oh wrong thread

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

"Good profile and perfect spelling too, you will go far my boy lol

I should hope so, I'm a teacher lol!

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Good profile and perfect spelling too, you will go far my boy lol

Very clear and well thought out.

Very concise profile and appears to like sheep.

WOW! great pictures and good text, well done!"

Great text and pics, I'll even forgive the liverpool shirt

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By *inaTitzTV/TS over a year ago

Titz Towers, North Notts

A Naughty Twosome - perhaps a bit long and no pics of hubby's bum

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By *adybee77Woman over a year ago

MAMOBA, miles and miles of bugger all (Aberdeenshire)

"Is anyone honestly gonna say......'shit profile'

Great profile, shit location.... Relocate

Can we get Phil And Kirstie to do a location, location, location with swinging club and sexy females on hand as a pre-requisite?

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By *isscheekychopsWoman over a year ago

The land of grey peas and bacon

Scrum ermmmm a very good sentence

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"A Naughty Twosome - perhaps a bit long and no pics of hubby's bum

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just for you, I might find something to oblige, ya perv

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By *ola.Woman over a year ago

Just where I need to be.

"Is anyone honestly gonna say......'shit profile'

Sorry great pics and informative profile

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Good profile and perfect spelling too, you will go far my boy lol

Very clear and well thought out.

Very concise profile and appears to like sheep.

WOW! great pictures and good text, well done!

Great text and pics, I'll even forgive the liverpool shirt

Nice quads.

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Is anyone honestly gonna say......'shit profile'

Take a look at mine

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By *igeiaWoman over a year ago

Bristol

"Is anyone honestly gonna say......'shit profile'

Take a look at mine "

Succinct.

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Great profile, shit location.... Relocate "

Ditto........meet ya halfway then? We'll all move.......

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Good profile and perfect spelling too, you will go far my boy lol

Very clear and well thought out.

Very concise profile and appears to like sheep.

WOW! great pictures and good text, well done!

Great text and pics, I'll even forgive the liverpool shirt

Nice quads.

Ta, still working on them

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By *oconut2Woman over a year ago

Nether regions of the back of beyond

"Feel free to critique mine "

Good profile text but a couple of your pics are too dark x

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Feel free to critique mine "

For Red Scorpio

Good narrative in the right tone, makes you sound approachable. Also honest in what you want without sounding demanding or diva like, as some do. Photos a little dark for my liking otherwise very good

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By *oconut2Woman over a year ago

Nether regions of the back of beyond

"Is anyone honestly gonna say......'shit profile'

Take a look at mine "

Profile text is shit lol but the b/w pics are good

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By *adybee77Woman over a year ago

MAMOBA, miles and miles of bugger all (Aberdeenshire)

Great profile, shit location.... Relocate

Ditto........meet ya halfway then? We'll all move.......

and then we'll make the world move??? (cheesy chat up line, couldn't resist)

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Is anyone honestly gonna say......'shit profile'

Take a look at mine

Succinct.

That's what you can expect from me sexually

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Is anyone honestly gonna say......'shit profile'

Take a look at mine

Profile text is shit lol but the b/w pics are good

Pics are shit but the profile text sets a challenge for those wanting to try

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Mr Beans and Coconut, thank you yes some are a bit dark. Not easy to take sometimes

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

Think we all need to start putting which profile we are critiquing!

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Mr Beans and Coconut, thank you yes some are a bit dark. Not easy to take sometimes "

Red ..... Too many donts ... Much rather see positive Doooossss x

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

This thread must be popular it's moving so fast!

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Go on. .. be brutal!!

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By *rightonsteveMan over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!

The sheep pic will soon be gone. Pretend it already has.

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Go on. .. be brutal!!"

you are meant to give to recieve my lovely

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By *rladytoyMan over a year ago

bournemouth

"Is anyone honestly gonna say......'shit profile'

Haha not me

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"The sheep pic will soon be gone. Pretend it already has."

Booo more sheep pics!!!!!!

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Go on. .. be brutal!!"

Erm,spank you with my hair brush.....x

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By *rightonsteveMan over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!

"Go on. .. be brutal!!"

Short and to the point. Like a dagger.

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"This thread must be popular it's moving so fast!"

Good concise profile x

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By *bi HaiveMan over a year ago
Forum Mod

Cheeseville, Somerset

"Go on. .. be brutal!!

Short and to the point. Like a dagger. "

A bit short.

A tad ghey.

Baaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Go on. .. be brutal!!

Short and to the point. Like a dagger. "

A dagger? Its not been called that before... more like a thumb tack lol

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Go on. .. be brutal!!

Erm,spank you with my hair brush.....x"

Ooerr!! Lol

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

xMissJx - straight to the point - easy to read and got a sense of your personality coming through.....more pics maybe?

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By *rightonsteveMan over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!

"Go on. .. be brutal!!

Short and to the point. Like a dagger.

A bit short.

A tad ghey.

Baaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!

Yawnsville, Alabama. I read it now I'm asleep. I'm sleep-critiqueing.

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Obi, yours is to long and to informative.x

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By *rightonsteveMan over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!

"Obi, yours is to long and to informative.x"

I think yours is just the right length

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Obi, yours is to long and to informative.x"

Yours makes you too much an O brother where are thou fan lol

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

Ladybe77 - I felt like I was being shouted at when I started to read yours! Maybe start softer and then state what your not looking for?

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Too easy, no challenge....

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Obi, yours is to long and to informative.x

Yours makes you too much an O brother where are thou fan lol"

I am! And I use Dapperdan!

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By *rladytoyMan over a year ago

bournemouth

So having read all of the profiles, to the letter.

'Fancy a fuck'

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

"Too easy, no challenge...."

In what way? Please explain with more detail!

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Obi, yours is to long and to informative.x

Yours makes you too much an O brother where are thou fan lol

I am! And I use Dapperdan!"

I would give you some but the only I can find is 2 weeks away...

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Ahem

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Obi, yours is to long and to informative.x

Yours makes you too much an O brother where are thou fan lol

I am! And I use Dapperdan!

I would give you some but the only I can find is 2 weeks away..."

Just uploaded my proof..enjoy!

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Mr Beans and Coconut, thank you yes some are a bit dark. Not easy to take sometimes

Red ..... Too many donts ... Much rather see positive Doooossss x"

I have two donts. No cock pics and no footie fans.

Miss JJ. No public pics. I won't say more

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Ahem"

Not enough BMW references.

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Has anyone fallen out yet

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Has anyone fallen out yet

Not Yet!!

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By *ipsTeaserCouple over a year ago

here and there, thereabouts

Critique away..was going to have a look at people's but a fog of tiredness decended so I am being lazy instead

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Ahem

Not enough BMW references."

Lol. I drive an E36 M3 evo in cosmos black

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

It's a great big love-fest. We need a giant inflatable bed, lots of oil in it to make it slippery, add a heap of nekkid bodies. Woohoo!!!!!!!

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Mr Beans and Coconut, thank you yes some are a bit dark. Not easy to take sometimes

Red ..... Too many donts ... Much rather see positive Doooossss x

I have two donts. No cock pics and no footie fans.

Miss JJ. No public pics. I won't say more "

I have one rule, never meet without a cock pic.

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Ahem

Not enough BMW references.

Lol. I drive an E36 M3 evo in cosmos black

I know. Shame it's a four door.

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Has anyone fallen out yet

Not Yet!! "

Watch N see lol

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Critique away..was going to have a look at people's but a fog of tiredness decended so I am being lazy instead

To long, to negative.

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By *uggarbunnyWoman over a year ago

Doncaster

Not sure if I dare open mine up for criticism. .

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By *igeiaWoman over a year ago

Bristol

"Obi, yours is to long and to informative.x

Yours makes you too much an O brother where are thou fan lol

I am! And I use Dapperdan!

I would give you some but the only I can find is 2 weeks away...

Just uploaded my proof..enjoy!"

And it's water based. Handy.

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Has anyone fallen out yet

Not Yet!!

Watch N see lol"

I could have easily!!

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Obi, yours is to long and to informative.x

Yours makes you too much an O brother where are thou fan lol

I am! And I use Dapperdan!

I would give you some but the only I can find is 2 weeks away...

Just uploaded my proof..enjoy!

And it's water based. Handy.

That's the best bit! A miracle in a can!

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Mr Beans and Coconut, thank you yes some are a bit dark. Not easy to take sometimes

Red ..... Too many donts ... Much rather see positive Doooossss x

I have two donts. No cock pics and no footie fans.

Miss JJ. No public pics. I won't say more

I have one rule, never meet without a cock pic."

There are usually public cock pics available. I meet the man not their cock

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By *ipsTeaserCouple over a year ago

here and there, thereabouts

"Critique away..was going to have a look at people's but a fog of tiredness decended so I am being lazy instead

To long, to negative."

I see long.. But thats kinda through neccessity. But out of curiosity, why too negative?

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By *o30Woman over a year ago

Lincoln

Very clear & to the point profile Red

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Mr Beans and Coconut, thank you yes some are a bit dark. Not easy to take sometimes

Red ..... Too many donts ... Much rather see positive Doooossss x

I have two donts. No cock pics and no footie fans.

Miss JJ. No public pics. I won't say more

I have one rule, never meet without a cock pic.

There are usually public cock pics available. I meet the man not their cock "

I'd have thought being married you'd just be looking at getting extra cock and not to worried about personality. sounds dangerous, but each to their own.

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

"Very clear & to the point profile Red "

Agree! Very honest and clear

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Not sure if I dare open mine up for criticism. .

I'm like that

Should I go for it?

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Mines shit

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Critique away..was going to have a look at people's but a fog of tiredness decended so I am being lazy instead

To long, to negative.

I see long.. But thats kinda through neccessity. But out of curiosity, why too negative? "

To many don'ts and no's.

You don't need them, just treat people on a case by case basis.

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By *ipsTeaserCouple over a year ago

here and there, thereabouts

We tried that when we started and since am generally polite and try to reply to mail I spent a large portion of time sending thanks but no thanks messages and then having guys trying to convince us why they were perfect for us.

It seemed easier on all to specify don'ts on the profile to reduce wasting time on both sides.

I take on board what you say, but don't think I'd remove anything atm as it's all pertinent to us.

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By *ipsTeaserCouple over a year ago

here and there, thereabouts

"Mines shit

I thought it was pretty good actually.

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

I know my profile blurb is pretty crap and samey but the spelling iz awsum n grate witch iz veree impotant on heer i herd

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"We tried that when we started and since am generally polite and try to reply to mail I spent a large portion of time sending thanks but no thanks messages and then having guys trying to convince us why they were perfect for us.

It seemed easier on all to specify don'ts on the profile to reduce wasting time on both sides.

I take on board what you say, but don't think I'd remove anything atm as it's all pertinent to us."

On my other profile I just "no thanks" and block easy. But please don't take my advice........I'm drinking shhhhh, don't tell

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By *rladytoyMan over a year ago

bournemouth

I'm pretty happy with mine

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By *o30Woman over a year ago

Lincoln

"Mines shit

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mine to

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Fuck it, go on give me your worse, I'm a big girl I can take it

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Mines shit

However nobody will honestly tell you that.

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Fuck it, go on give me your worse, I'm a big girl I can take it

I bet you can.

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Mines shit

All I'd say is if you want to go to a club, go to a club.

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Jim yours is to long and to try hard. You can do better.

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

"Mines shit

Yours is clear!

If I was to be really picky all I'd do is put speech marks round the NO!

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Lola, it's hard to improve on perfection

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Much much to long.

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Feel free to critique mine

For Red Scorpio

Mr beans brother.....

No sorry I didn't get past the pictures I best go back and read this time

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Too easy, no challenge....

In what way? Please explain with more detail!

Forgot to add, you care what others think too much!!!

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Mines shit

I've seen a lot worse profiles.

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

shoot...

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By *ipsTeaserCouple over a year ago

here and there, thereabouts

It seemed easier on all to specify don'ts on the profile to reduce wasting time on both sides.

I take on board what you say, but don't think I'd remove anything atm as it's all pertinent to us.

On my other profile I just "no thanks" and block easy. But please don't take my advice........I'm drinking shhhhh, don't tell

I realise I don't have issues with long profiles if they say what the person is or isn't wanting clearly..I think that I'd still stick with ours mostly as it is as its true to our do's/don'ts.

Hmm...depends, what you drinking & will you share?

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

"shoot..."

I'd probably add first that you are looking for BI males at the start to make it clearer.

Also maybe add information about yourselves.

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Gone on then, tell us how ours needs improving

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"shoot...

I'd probably add first that you are looking for BI males at the start to make it clearer.

Also maybe add information about yourselves."
could maybe rewrite and trim it down a bit, but just our opinion. Otherwise content is good just needs to be a bit sharper. Could do with a bit of humour as well

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"shoot...

I'd probably add first that you are looking for BI males at the start to make it clearer.

Also maybe add information about yourselves.could maybe rewrite and trim it down a bit, but just our opinion. Otherwise content is good just needs to be a bit sharper. Could do with a bit of humour as well"
this was for easy e

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Gone on then, tell us how ours needs improving

xx"

Clear, very concise, nice variety of pics, looks pretty good to me!

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Gone on then, tell us how ours needs improving

Clear, very concise, nice variety of pics, looks pretty good to me!

An instant feel for your personality and humour, lot's of photos. I really can't fault it, giddy kipper, I've been warned.

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By *onny bigMan over a year ago

london harrow

Every one feel free to critique

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"shoot...

I'd probably add first that you are looking for BI males at the start to make it clearer.

Also maybe add information about yourselves."

How's that? And what sort of information? Hobbies and interests?

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By *inaTitzTV/TS over a year ago

Titz Towers, North Notts

Salisbury Couple - a bit too short a profile for me, but still does what it needs to do.

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Salisbury Couple - a bit too short a profile for me, but still does what it needs to do.

I see you like a long one....

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Salisbury Couple - a bit too short a profile for me, but still does what it needs to do.

I see you like a long one...."

I noticed that.

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Gone on then, tell us how ours needs improving

Clear, very concise, nice variety of pics, looks pretty good to me!

An instant feel for your personality and humour, lot's of photos. I really can't fault it, giddy kipper, I've been warned."

Ha thankyou. Love your profile, hamish or is it amish? Makes me smile, which is always good, upstanding Er I meant outstanding pics. The only thing... You don't seem like a jim!

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Every one feel free to critique

Doesn't have mentality of 14 year old but has five smiley faces within text

Why note that you're from London? A default setting will state where you're from at top of page.

Check some spelling and you're quoting Dita Von Teese not Don.

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Great photos..

You filled out your profile too, that's refreshing...

No text speak either... Winner!

(ErectJim)

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Gone on then, tell us how ours needs improving

Clear, very concise, nice variety of pics, looks pretty good to me!

An instant feel for your personality and humour, lot's of photos. I really can't fault it, giddy kipper, I've been warned.

Ha thankyou. Love your profile, hamish or is it amish? Makes me smile, which is always good, upstanding Er I meant outstanding pics. The only thing... You don't seem like a jim!

Haha, you're absolutely right, nobody calls me Jim. I just thought it scanned better than erectjames. Good luck with your unicorn hunt.

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Critique away

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By *ltravioletWoman over a year ago

In amongst the Unicorns & fairy dust

"Feel free to critique mine "
it's just a shame your not looking for single females

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Very clear & to the point profile Red "

Thank you

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"xMissJx - straight to the point - easy to read and got a sense of your personality coming through.....more pics maybe?"

ah thank you

i have more than enough pictures to send privately to the right people.

My modesty doesn't decieve me x

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Very clear & to the point profile Red

Agree! Very honest and clear

Thank you

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By *oxy_minxWoman over a year ago

Scotland - Aberdeen

Jesus, I read the first one and mine will never get read lol I'll knock myself out in the morning x

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Mr Beans and Coconut, thank you yes some are a bit dark. Not easy to take sometimes

Red ..... Too many donts ... Much rather see positive Doooossss x

I have two donts. No cock pics and no footie fans.

Miss JJ. No public pics. I won't say more "

Not Miss JJ...... I wouldn't say more either.

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Mr Beans and Coconut, thank you yes some are a bit dark. Not easy to take sometimes

Red ..... Too many donts ... Much rather see positive Doooossss x

I have two donts. No cock pics and no footie fans.

Miss JJ. No public pics. I won't say more

I have one rule, never meet without a cock pic.

There are usually public cock pics available. I meet the man not their cock

I'd have thought being married you'd just be looking at getting extra cock and not to worried about personality. sounds dangerous, but each to their own."

Bit harsh but I did ask for comments. Personality and connection is first for me. I'm not here to gain notches just to meet some decent people and hopefully get some sex too

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Personally love a good cock picture..... All good n well having a pretty face awesome personality.... I wanna know what i'm climbing on

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Oh, please feel free to critique mine.

Be gentle

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Miss J. Can't see any pics? Profile is good. Xx

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Miss J. Can't see any pics? Profile is good. Xx"

Lol, i don't have public pictures. Refuse to. Too many weirdos about and i find if i dont have pics they dont skip my profile and ask politely if i do

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

Miss C - good profile, but maybe merge your updates into your text, so they don't seem like add-ons.

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Miss C - good profile, but maybe merge your updates into your text, so they don't seem like add-ons."

Thank you. Noted. Xx

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Eazy E. Funny profile, genuine, warm and well written. Maybe more body photos

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Someone do me. Hard

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

"Miss C - good profile, but maybe merge your updates into your text, so they don't seem like add-ons.

Thank you. Noted. Xx"

No Problem!

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Go on then. I'll have a go.

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By *eanut Butter CupWoman over a year ago

B & M Bargains

"Go on then. I'll have a go. "

Tom Nook - like the text but not a fan of seeing lots of a woman in a single mans pics

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Go on then. I'll have a go. "

Witty profile. You come across polite too.

it's well written.

I love your photos, even the unicorn

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Thank you for the comments. I understand your perspective Rhia.

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Do me do me

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By *eanut Butter CupWoman over a year ago

B & M Bargains

"Thank you for the comments. I understand your perspective Rhia.

Saying that.. They are nice photos anyway, and I do like the humour in your profile!

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Dare you to try and be critical

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Do me do me

Tells me everything I need to know. Without wasting my short life!

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Dare you to try and be critical "

To long.

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Dare you to try and be critical "

Unnecessary use of capital letters

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By *ashes83Couple over a year ago

wirral

Have a look at ours, We can handle the brutal truth I think!

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Have a look at ours, We can handle the brutal truth I think!"

Useless spelling.

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Have a look at ours, We can handle the brutal truth I think!"

Ditch the legal guff at the end, it's totally meaningless and a waste of letters.

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Dare you to try and be critical

Unnecessary use of capital letters"

Petrichor, don't tuck that shirt into them jeans.

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By *ashes83Couple over a year ago

wirral

"Have a look at ours, We can handle the brutal truth I think!

Useless spelling."

Spell check it for me and I can copy and paste it back in

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By *eanut Butter CupWoman over a year ago

B & M Bargains

Someone do me please

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Have a look at ours, We can handle the brutal truth I think!

Useless spelling.

Spell check it for me and I can copy and paste it back in

Read your profile, useless spelling..

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

Scarletta - Ok here is my critique!

You prefer tall, well endowed men - height limits and penis size range - most men are hung up about their penis and most will think they are small despite the average being 5.5inches to 6.3inches, it'd probably be good to state your size preference.

Include some information about you - personality wise.

I'd also probably reword some of your dislikes so it doesn't seem like your shouting, maybe put them politely in a paragraph...

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Someone do me please

Yours is ok. If I was interested I would message you.

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Thanks E duly noted

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

I'll join.

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Pops head up above the wall......

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By *ashes83Couple over a year ago

wirral

"Have a look at ours, We can handle the brutal truth I think!

Ditch the legal guff at the end, it's totally meaningless and a waste of letters."

Thanks advice taken x

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

"Thanks E duly noted

I forgot to add that you have a lovely selection of photos available that scream 'come hither' - no wonder someone stole them from you!

Your also brutally honest, I admire that!

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Thanks E duly noted

I forgot to add that you have a lovely selection of photos available that scream 'come hither' - no wonder someone stole them from you!

Your also brutally honest, I admire that!

It's a trait that usually stands me in good stead but has also been detrimental at times. Thanks for your feedback Sir

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

That went well.

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By *inaTitzTV/TS over a year ago

Titz Towers, North Notts

SexyBrain - a good profile that does its' job. However, I think I'd go for more humour

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By *rightonsteveMan over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!

Tina: randomly funny which no doubt reflects your personality. A refreshing change from the many dire, dull and drone-like profiles that I've read.

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Tina: randomly funny which no doubt reflects your personality. A refreshing change from the many dire, dull and drone-like profiles that I've read. "

Best avatar I've ever seen. Very original.

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

"Tina: randomly funny which no doubt reflects your personality. A refreshing change from the many dire, dull and drone-like profiles that I've read.

Best avatar I've ever seen. Very original.

Funny profile! Very witty!

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Tina...I think that is so funny, a joy to read and made me chuckle...brightened my day that did

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Easy E

profile easy to read, gives all info I would need if I were to contact you.

Good photos - if only you were a little older

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By *omethingSoGoodAboutSofiaWoman over a year ago

Blackburn/Preston

"Let's review each others profiles, critique them openly and in good taste and in respect to make them better!"

I keep thinking mines a bit too long winded but every time I sit to shorten it, I struggle as I think it says everything I need to...I'm definitely up for some honest feedback on it and ready to put myself in your firing line! Go easy on me Eazy-E but only after a 1...2...3!

(I have a shitty juvenile sense of humour, haha!)

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

"Easy E

profile easy to read, gives all info I would need if I were to contact you.

Good photos - if only you were a little older

Cheers for the kind feedback! Indeed, if only I was older

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

"Let's review each others profiles, critique them openly and in good taste and in respect to make them better!

(I have a shitty juvenile sense of humour, haha!)

Ok, here we go....

Very informative profile and I like the pics - especially when you include your humour in them as to what your doing!

However, I would say there is a lot of text in your profile that I would maybe sort and manage under sub headings - it might make it easier for the reader to jump to a certain section as there is so much to read through!

Maybe headings like about me, what I'm looking for, what im not looking for etc.... it will probably make it more concise.

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By *rightonsteveMan over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!

Maybe I should use sub-headings. I hadn't thought of that.

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Kallie...straight forward and to the point, likes/dislikes and nice photos which are not over revealing.

I would

lol

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By *rightonsteveMan over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!

Styks: I'd add loads more in but as you've been here 4 months and had 6 veris, your profile is working fine as it is so don't change it.

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Maybe I should use sub-headings. I hadn't thought of that.

I'm going to do that too.

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Styks: I'd add loads more in but as you've been here 4 months and had 6 veris, your profile is working fine as it is so don't change it.

Cheers

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By *rightonsteveMan over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!

"Maybe I should use sub-headings. I hadn't thought of that.

I'm going to do that too. "

I think you should add some dashes for morse code. It will keep the non code reading riff-raff away and ensure you only attract Coded folk

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