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By *dam246 OP Man
over a year ago
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Go check my music video out guys and let me know what u think
U might wana forward it to where I come into the video (1:10)
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=PVHVTSnUdyY
If the link don't work
Type in " dil cheez FT rah" on youtube |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Too much black space in a lot of shots, could have done with some extra backlight or detailing, even something as simple as a starcloth, soft in the background to break up the black and give the subject more separation.
The car looks like its been shoehorned in to add some 'cool' and does nothing for the production.
I found the shots of the female a bit repetitive and ideally it needs a much wider range of locations/looks to help drive it along as i found the track pretty dull.
Overall the lighting is pretty good as is the cine work (i'm guessing 5D mk3 or C300 running L glass or a set of primes?)
No idea what the budget and timescale was so i can only base it on the end product. |
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