"I have just updated our profile but I am dyslexic would someone mind proof reading it for me please  "
Read the whole lot. This sentence is a bit shaky!
"and a huge lover of Anal both giving and or rare occasion receiving."
I know what you mean but its not worded correctly.
That's the only problem I found.
By the way, thats an excellent profile. Probably the best I've ever read infact. You both sound really interesting actually. Your wife/gf is nice looking too. If only you were closer!
Manchester would have been ideal.
Good luck mate. |
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By *ee VianteWoman
over a year ago
Somewhere in North Norfolk |
"Read the whole lot. This sentence is a bit shaky!
"and a huge lover of Anal both giving and or rare occasion receiving."
I know what you mean but its not worded correctly."
Change "or" to "on" and it makes sense.
I'd add a comma after anal and make the capital A lower case, if I were being picky. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"I have just updated our profile but I am dyslexic would someone mind proof reading it for me please "
Very wel written, dyslexic or not, Good profile, good job. x |
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"Dyslexic my arse lol well done (wishing there was a clapping icon) good ruse to get people to read your profile  "
I am Dyslexic for real,I type things in word first for the spell check then copy over here. It tends to be punctuation I get wrong, or the wrong word in the wrong place |
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By *icketysplitsWoman
over a year ago
Way over Yonder, that's where I'm bound |
"Dyslexic my arse lol well done (wishing there was a clapping icon) good ruse to get people to read your profile
I am Dyslexic for real,I type things in word first for the spell check then copy over here. It tends to be punctuation I get wrong, or the wrong word in the wrong place"
Thank you for the effort. You manage your dyslexia using the tools available and present yourself well.
You two sound absolutely lovely and a pleasure to be with. |
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"Thank you for the effort. You manage your dyslexia using the tools available and present yourself well.
You two sound absolutely lovely and a pleasure to be with."
Thank you for your kind words, i hope people begin to realise this.  |
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