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By *an1978Woman 4 weeks ago
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Well that's a rarity.. I can't find anything to suggest to change.
We are not compatible,but your profile should help you find the ones that are.
Nice selection of pics, clear about what you want.
If Carlsberg wrote profiles...
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Thanks all so far.
It took ages to do our last one and I wanted to do a quick change up, something went wrong and bye bye bio! Doh!
So had to start from scratch again!
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It's a very good profile, good pics, and intelligent verification display (singles and couples, and no need for you to display all of them, which you haven't).
So my only "however" is the length of the bio, although I'm not your target paramour type so feel free to ignore.
I think it needs to lose a third of its volume, either by shorter sentences that say the same thing, putting a few "we will, we are, we do"s into the same sentence (cuts out a couple of words each time), and a couple of the smaller paragraphs could be blended into each other, which creates less scroll white space.
Keep paras - any unholy large chunk of text is horrible on the eye. Just use them a bit differently.
But if you can lose at least 25%, preferably 35% of the "bio space", then you have great pics that show you both off very well, great use of veris, and a quantity of text that would make it A++ as a profile.
Finally, remember that this is advice from my personal preferences. Many others may not see the volume of text as a bit too chunky.
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"It's chunky. Have a good edit of it.
You've removed the line about the only type of people you're interested in meeting.
Don't. You should include that. It's helpful.  "
What Meli said  .
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Reads ok to me, Mrs agrees with comments about the length but that doesn't put me off. What does put me off is the use of filters in the photos of Brunnete - I find them childish as best, completely turn-offs at worst. I much prefer to see what someone actually looks like and find a natural look far more attractive than someone who has clearly spent time and/or money trying to change themselves.
As an engineer, I'm ok with decimal inches and even happy to accept imperial not metric for cock measurements 
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I’m not on your radar, but for me, id ditch the paragraph about the negative experiences. Nobody needs to know about it really. You could always discuss that kind of think in person if you want to relay about past experience.
The dick dimensions are an odd one, I know you like a big one. But are you going to take a tape measure to each potential ‘candidate’ to confirm the requested? Most guys here measure by the Lynx can method and don’t have a clue .
Aside from that, I don’t mind the length. It’s another filter for you if people are out off by it.
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By *bi HaiveMan 4 weeks ago
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"Obviously it's a first rough up as takes days to finish up most times!
Will try to be a little bit more concise with it.
Cheers all
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Seems fine to me.
The length isn't an issue for those willing to read. Mines probably longer bet its just another filter - if people can'tbe arsed to read what youve written then that's a 'them' issue, not a 'you' issue. 🤷♂️
As for the 'privacy issue'? I saw your other post. At the end of the day anything posted publicly is just that - public. Even if you've blocked someone there's nothing stopping them creating a new profile and seeing anything not in friends only/private photos or videos. Always worth remembering.
At the end of the day if it gets you the interest you want then a profile is working. If not? Adjust, modify and play around til you get interest from those you seek. |
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"Obviously it's a first rough up as takes days to finish up most times!
Will try to be a little bit more concise with it.
Cheers all
Seems fine to me.
The length isn't an issue for those willing to read. Mines probably longer bet its just another filter - if people can'tbe arsed to read what youve written then that's a 'them' issue, not a 'you' issue. 🤷♂️
As for the 'privacy issue'? I saw your other post. At the end of the day anything posted publicly is just that - public. Even if you've blocked someone there's nothing stopping them creating a new profile and seeing anything not in friends only/private photos or videos. Always worth remembering.
At the end of the day if it gets you the interest you want then a profile is working. If not? Adjust, modify and play around til you get interest from those you seek. "
We get that about neew profiles however a block should be a block and at the very least people should be informed.
A lot of people will use a block feature to remove content from people that they know, because in this world we all know someone right?! It's really expected to fully block.
Anyway that's another topic 😀
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