Okay.
Because you asked for advice, not just because I'm a harsh bitch. Hopefully. Obviously this is all based on my own personal tastes, everyone is different.
Emojis over faces always seem childish and daft to me. There's no reason to not just crop the head out of the shot. On cropping, either tidy your room or crop that mess out. Preferably both. Photography is about composition and a focus, make it a deliberate piece not just a lazy snapshot.
The profile text doesn't say much of anything. Who are you. What do you want. What do you offer potential partners. That sort of thing is usually helpful to know. If someone leaves everything ambiguous and undefined I'll skip over them and move on to the people with enough detail on their profile to get an actual idea of compatibility instead of dragging it out of people who don't have it up front to learn of base incompatibilities later. |
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"Hi single lady's and couples
Plz have a look at my bio/pic and can you give me and advice. "
I see from your profile that you just want to meet single ladies and couples and understand you are asking for advice from them, although I think the single men would be able to give you just as good advice as us, maybe even better as they are more experienced in what works best for them. |
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By *vaRose43Woman 30 weeks ago
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"Well I've change my bio I think it's still shit but hopefully bitter.
Plz be kind lol "
Ok so the first thing that jumped out at me was “I like everyone and everyone is beautiful “.
To me that translates as “I’ll fuck anyone not fussy”
If that’s what you’re aiming for then leave it in. If not then maybe think about how you could phrase that slightly differently |
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It's worth being concise, so that you don't lose readers interest. For example, you say you're straight and then add 'so no bum fun'. That was unnecessary and perhaps the words could have been used to add something different that was positive. Assume your readers time is precious and that they will have other people to view too. |
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