Good bunch of pics.
I'd take out about being new and wanting people to take the lead etc. most people are here for some fun in their down time. They don't want to be teachers.
I'd also reword the part about your bi tendancies. Fun is fun reads as any pole/hole is a goal and I think it would put people off. They don't need to know if you're attracted to them really.
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By *TG3Man 36 weeks ago
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"Any thoughts on my profile? I’m really struggling with writing about myself just some feedback would be nice.
Thanks. "
Profile seems ok but we as guys are heavily outnumbering women and couples so you have to stand out, show your personality  and be patient |
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"All taken on board thank you. I will rewrite it over the next few days. Been patient is a problem.  "
You’ll have to make it not a problem.
People don’t appreciate the impatient around these parts. |
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By *ACOLCouple 35 weeks ago
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Sorry, maybe you mentioned this before, but when you say family and kids, that's it mean you are married.
If so, clarify on it, because I personally thought you were married, many don't like that.
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This time I read the words.
If this was my profile I'd work the pictures. The one in the CK pants, are they your work trousers? I don't understand the night time ones, I'd be looking for two new under the quilt shots in the morning one day assuming there's a window.
Do you need two purple? You're just showing me purple, I had to zoom in start looking around thinking what the fucks going on. I thought you were putting a purple filter over your pictures last time round. I see you have purple lighting in the room. At least one of those purples would have to go. If I kept one I'd want to tone it down.
Last thing I'd do is tell someone they're wearing the wrong thing btw. Nothing wrong with work trousers if that's what they are but next time you've got a brand new pair- boom take the pic.
I read the about you bit, there is some editing I would do immediately but I'll wait to see if we're still talking first.
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