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Pictures are a bit boring.
Most of what you say is what you would expect any man to be, so it doesn’t really need saying. But one line ‘ I love to pleasure a woman in front of her man’ is interesting. I would rewrite the whole profile expanding & explaining that a bit creatively and work on your style of writing.
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"Pictures are a bit boring.
Most of what you say is what you would expect any man to be, so it doesn’t really need saying. But one line ‘ I love to pleasure a woman in front of her man’ is interesting. I would rewrite the whole profile expanding & explaining that a bit creatively and work on your style of writing.
Hope that helps "
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I guess it's safe. If it were paint it would be magnolia. I am probably one shade above. 'forest mushroom' or something.
Not a single sky remote or lynx can in site. Even I managed that. Today actually. Well not deodorant. I'm not that sophisticated.
Jazz it up a bit. Like the guy above said. We are all pretty much like you. |
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Your going to get a lot of different opinions OP.
If your are looking for advice on how to improve your bio then I can offer you the same advice I gave myself.
Edit.
Come back to your profile every couple of days and ask yourself if what you've written is generic, necessary, unique to you, memorable etc.
Set your own criteria based on the kind of people you want to attract.
The goal is to find compatible matches after all and the last thing you want is generic profile based on the widest consensus of opinions |
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By (user no longer on site) 40 weeks ago
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I agree with one of the posters above. The points you have are fine but maybe rewrite into paragraphs. Personally, I like a bit of humour in a profile, makes you stand out from the usual do's and dont's others have. Maybe a few more tasteful pics, the two you have are fine btw. Good luck  |
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I've read it.
Didn't like it.
Not liking it is not important to me.
Me not liking it is okay.
I'd love to have someone watch me type this.
I only eat apples on Sunday's and hope you do too.
Typing is great.
I like lots of keyboards and finding the right buttons is great fun.
I wash my screen on Wednesdays and expect your screen to be clean as well.
Dribble........ ( get rid of the name slobber ) |
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"I've read it.
Didn't like it.
Not liking it is not important to me.
Me not liking it is okay.
I'd love to have someone watch me type this.
I only eat apples on Sunday's and hope you do too.
Typing is great.
I like lots of keyboards and finding the right buttons is great fun.
I wash my screen on Wednesdays and expect your screen to be clean as well.
Dribble........ ( get rid of the name slobber ) "
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You’ve got fun in your tagline twice - having to say you are fun doesn’t exactly come across as fun 
You start your profile blurb with rampant and end with it too - it’s a bit 
Fun and rampant were not the words I was using when reading the blurb.
Sorry, it’s harsh…
Photos are fine.
If it reflects you OP then it’s all good
K |
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"You’ve got fun in your tagline twice - having to say you are fun doesn’t exactly come across as fun
You start your profile blurb with rampant and end with it too - it’s a bit
Fun and rampant were not the words I was using when reading the blurb.
Sorry, it’s harsh…
Photos are fine.
If it reflects you OP then it’s all good
K"
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By *ee VianteWoman 40 weeks ago
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I think it's pretty good, better than most.
I don't necessarily think exciting anyone should be what you're going for.
I'd say the aim is to say what you have to offer, what you're looking for and make your intended audience feel comfortable about the idea of meeting you. IMO, your profile does that.
You're never going to appeal to everyone, so don't try.
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"I think it's pretty good, better than most.
I don't necessarily think exciting anyone should be what you're going for.
I'd say the aim is to say what you have to offer, what you're looking for and make your intended audience feel comfortable about the idea of meeting you. IMO, your profile does that.
You're never going to appeal to everyone, so don't try.
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aww thank you for your feedback xxx |
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"Would it excite you if you read it? not particularly but if you get a twinge please be my guest 
Well I think you have your answer then "
However I don't believe a profile plays a huge part so wouldn't stress too much |
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"Would it excite you if you read it? not particularly but if you get a twinge please be my guest
Well I think you have your answer then
However I don't believe a profile plays a huge part so wouldn't stress too much"
I certainly won’t.
And many thanks for your feedback,it’s so much appreciated |
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By *ee VianteWoman 40 weeks ago
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"I think it's pretty good, better than most.
I don't necessarily think exciting anyone should be what you're going for.
I'd say the aim is to say what you have to offer, what you're looking for and make your intended audience feel comfortable about the idea of meeting you. IMO, your profile does that.
You're never going to appeal to everyone, so don't try.
aww thank you for your feedback xxx"
You're welcome and good luck.
Also, bear in mind when reading the advice men are giving you, that men and women often have very different perspectives and are looking for very different things from a profile.
Two of the biggest things for single women meeting new men are our safety, (something a surprising number of men don't understand), and feeling like a man will listen to us and prioritise our pleasure as much as his own. Oh, and being reliable, because a lot of guys seem to get excited about someone then have a wank and lose interest!
Addressing those factors is more important (IMO) than trying to excite us. |
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"I think it's pretty good, better than most.
I don't necessarily think exciting anyone should be what you're going for.
I'd say the aim is to say what you have to offer, what you're looking for and make your intended audience feel comfortable about the idea of meeting you. IMO, your profile does that.
You're never going to appeal to everyone, so don't try.
aww thank you for your feedback xxx
You're welcome and good luck.
Also, bear in mind when reading the advice men are giving you, that men and women often have very different perspectives and are looking for very different things from a profile.
Two of the biggest things for single women meeting new men are our safety, (something a surprising number of men don't understand), and feeling like a man will listen to us and prioritise our pleasure as much as his own. Oh, and being reliable, because a lot of guys seem to get excited about someone then have a wank and lose interest!
Addressing those factors is more important (IMO) than trying to excite us. "
you have a very good point there, and not just women I also prefer to meet socially first for my own safety  |
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