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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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So I’m looking for tips and advice on how I can improve my profile to try and stand out more so any constructive criticism or suggestions on pics bio etc would be great
Out of 1-10 what would you say it is currently and how can I improve thanks |
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Hey bud ill throw some tips your way(based off the writing)
-add some specifics about what you are looking for... kinks, interests anything that lets someone go ... oh he's into that is he... what a saucy fella.
I love you've been open and have boundaries... perhaps elaborate on what you are not looking for as well.. people might get confused and 999/1000 times they won't bother messaging after that.
Organise this all into something easy to read and digestable, and as a tip. People tend to like socials first to see if you click. Make sure you mention thats okay (if it is indeed okay)... Good luck my friend.
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By (user no longer on site) OP
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"Hey bud ill throw some tips your way(based off the writing)
-add some specifics about what you are looking for... kinks, interests anything that lets someone go ... oh he's into that is he... what a saucy fella.
I love you've been open and have boundaries... perhaps elaborate on what you are not looking for as well.. people might get confused and 999/1000 times they won't bother messaging after that.
Organise this all into something easy to read and digestable, and as a tip. People tend to like socials first to see if you click. Make sure you mention thats okay (if it is indeed okay)... Good luck my friend.
Happy fabbing. "
Ok thanks for the feedback I’ll make a note of it appreciate it ![](/icons/s/biggrin.gif) |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Pics I would say are a 10
Would be your text would give it a 1
You say you don’t want to chat and waste each others time
But you haven’t included anything your looking for other than a quick fuck
You have literally conducted your self as we would need to waste each others time to know if we’re compatible or not
As you haven’t really told us anything other than looking for nsa sex or soicals
Yes my profile is a wall off text
But if you look at the lay out
It literally cuts down on 90% off bs that would be asked in messages before hand |
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I'm guessing that it's 4/10 of what your profile could be, rather than 4/10 of the best profile ever.
I like your direct talking style. You could potentially reduce the volume of text on what you're not after. And instead emphasise the positives of what you'd be offering.
Some of your pics are great. Some a bit samey.
You've done really well OP. It's tough for you single men. Good luck! X |
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Good profile, if humour is your thing I reckon you could jazz it up a little and make it a little more fun.
It’s quite forward that if someone isn’t looking to have sex then they’re wasting your time. I don’t think that’s how you meant it at all, but it could be read that way.
10/10 for not having the silly disclaimer. |
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Hey OP like your pics, just agree you need to pad your text out with a bit more info. Your age will naturally rule you out for a lot of people but there are plenty of younger people here too. Best advice for new people is to get to know some folks on the forum and via socials organised through here and read the profile before you send a message good luck |
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