the pics are great to be honest, so maybe look at redoing them, there’s a lot of negativity in your profile text, you don’t explain much on what’s on offer and you seem to be far too busy to arrange a meet, maybe stick to clubs as you’re quite successful there   |
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It is very hard to see you in the profile pic !
There is an age discrepancy on your profile. I suggest not starting the text with "I am a 51 year old straight man looking to meet women" as you will need to keep amending your age. Also, we have already seen you are a straight man looking to meet women so it's unnecessary.
Maybe start with the fact that you are a lorry driver and all over the country ? |
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"It is very hard to see you in the profile pic !
There is an age discrepancy on your profile. I suggest not starting the text with "I am a 51 year old straight man looking to meet women" as you will need to keep amending your age. Also, we have already seen you are a straight man looking to meet women so it's unnecessary.
Maybe start with the fact that you are a lorry driver and all over the country ?"
Thanx will amend |
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We would look for a bit more personality in a profile, like a bit of humour, opinions or general banter. We look for people we can have conversations with so we want people who have something to say and would be enjoyable to talk to. I'm not getting that vibe from your profile.
I also suggest showing yourself dressed nicely in more interesting locations than on your house. Go outside on a sunny day for good light. Present yourself the best way you can, which includes the backdrop.
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"Could I get some feedback on how to improve my profile thanx"
Is there an important piece of information that you've left out?
Keep your profile as it is. It reflects you. |
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"It is very hard to see you in the profile pic !
There is an age discrepancy on your profile. I suggest not starting the text with "I am a 51 year old straight man looking to meet women" as you will need to keep amending your age. Also, we have already seen you are a straight man looking to meet women so it's unnecessary.
Maybe start with the fact that you are a lorry driver and all over the country ?"
So can meet anywhere.... Yes love that angle  |
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"Maybe take out the bit about being straight but like watching rocky horror
you've put you are straight anyway so you don't need to mention it again"
Mentioning it again makes you more straight. I saw a profile where someone was 1001% straight. Impressive. |
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