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By *dventurous bi OP Man over a year ago

tesside

I have plans for you

i will touch you with tender intent

kiss you with passion

caress you

undress you slowly

teasing your body as it is revealed

I have plans

i will kiss you

on your neck and on your breasts

soft kisses

gentle kisses

you will urge me to do more

beg me

but I will ignore those pleas

I have plans

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By *ea wangMan over a year ago

scunthorpe

Ah u meant poem

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By *omtom7Man over a year ago

Tralee

Once your happy with it

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By *annSummersMan over a year ago

Glasgow

I’d remove the first kiss you with passion if you then say your kisses are tender only a few lines later.

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

I mean, it's ok

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

As a pome it lacks the fleshy outer and tough seeded central core, so I’ll give it 0/10.

But as a poem it’s ok. Mid. 5/10

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By *dventurous bi OP Man over a year ago

tesside

All fair comment

Thanks, I’ll get me coat

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By *TG3Man over a year ago

Dorchester

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"All fair comment

Thanks, I’ll get me coat

It's a better poem than I could ever do!!

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