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Well I’m not your target audience so I’m sure the ladies will provide better feedback but the thing that jumps out is that the blurb is a just a big solid block of text.
Maybe add some paragraphs etc to make it more visually attractive to read.
Good pics, I’m sure you’re popular with the ladies.
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By (user no longer on site) OP
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"Well I’m not your target audience so I’m sure the ladies will provide better feedback but the thing that jumps out is that the blurb is a just a big solid block of text.
Maybe add some paragraphs etc to make it more visually attractive to read.
Good pics, I’m sure you’re popular with the ladies.
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Fair, I guess it does read as matter of fact ,but that's my personality really |
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