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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Evening ladies and gents
So had a revamp of my profile over the past 4 weeks which has created more traffic, engagaement with profiles and essential further meets..
I am wondering if there is anything currently missing from there at the minute or more imporantly if there is anything within the profile that would instantly put someone off?
Be great to hear some honest opinions on a side note to this I am also comfortable enough to receive the other type of opinion were people use this type of post to make them feel better about them selves with unproductive comments so yeah you do you if that is why your commenting haha I know what I am here for
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By *humper.Man
over a year ago
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See if I can string a setnece together this time...
It does read a bit like a CV.
Always weirds me out when guys in their 40's are looking for teens though, but, maybe that's just because my daughter is one.
On the plus side at least you've clearly gave it some thought, it's not full of dick pics, veried and its got good grammar.
It's better than most that look for advice on these threads.
Probably better taking note if women and couples responses though, that is what you're looking for... but you did ask. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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It’s well written, bit long though. No dick pics is a good start. Clearly working as you been verified twice from it. But…
I get zero sense of your personality on it. Too keen to be inoffensive and a bit too eager to please.
And 40s interested in women half your age or even less? That’s just a bit icky. |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Thanks for the input, I am not looking for the teen adventure so certainly be changing that one, I think that is just a genuine error and forgetting to change which is why I am glad you pointed that one out!
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"How would you suggest I reduce it?"
You don’t need to reduce it necessarily but if it’s long make it worth reading. Show your personality.
I just read Thumpers on here and it’s a good example of getting it right (mines a bit shit but it doesn’t really matter so much as I’m not a core audience for this site). |
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I agree with the others that have said the bios to long, I haven't read it all but what I have read, reads like you feel like your better than other people on here, your writing what you think people want to here, it's a lot of words but says nothing
Positives I like the pics but I personally feel one dick pic won't harm a profile so I'd like to have seen one of those too |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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On a site such as this, I think it can be quite difficult to write about yourself in the attempt to impress the lovely ladies here.
I find it best to keep to specifics, but couldn't help but add a little humour to mine.
If it works for you and you get results, then you don't need to change anything |
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