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Constructive criticism

By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

I havnt been active that much til now, so I was wondering what constructive criticism people may have upon my profile,...it would really help thank you

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Pics are good, but the bio would have me exiting stage right.

It doesn’t tell me anything about you.

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Your pics are all a bit samey and your text just baffled me, it has nothing about you?

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By *nabelle21Woman over a year ago

B38

I've only got as far as your pics.

Just when this heat had died down, your pics raised the temp right back up.

Going back in...just in the name of constructive criticism you understand

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

It's like the script for a TV advert for an expensive ice cream

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By *ussieChrisMan over a year ago

Walsall

Ok I'm in, any suggestions for mine ladies and couple preferably as that's my 'target audience' but any welcome.

Sorry to jump on your thread here mate.

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By *nabelle21Woman over a year ago

B38

Youe bio doesn't do it for me. A teaser yes...works but that was just too long.

It all felt a bit random

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

I appreciate my profile says little about me, I was going for a different angle, I will certainly have to have a re-think, I was just going for a profile that may stand out by being different

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Awful pics...too ripped and chiselled...wheres the chunk? The moobs? No chance with the ladies with THAT body...good luck x

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Ok I'm in, any suggestions for mine ladies and couple preferably as that's my 'target audience' but any welcome.

Sorry to jump on your thread here mate."

You need to start your own thread

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By *ussieChrisMan over a year ago

Walsall

"Ok I'm in, any suggestions for mine ladies and couple preferably as that's my 'target audience' but any welcome.

Sorry to jump on your thread here mate.

You need to start your own thread

I think i will ... will tag you in it to Hippy, be the 1st to reply :P

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By *adyJayneWoman over a year ago

Burnleyish (She/They)

"I havnt been active that much til now, so I was wondering what constructive criticism people may have upon my profile,...it would really help thank you"

You call yourself fetish, give the dictionary definition...

But then go on to describe something pretty un-fetishy about someone called Emma Louise...

You'd be much better using your profile to let people know about you and who you are, what you're looking for and what you have to offer.

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By *annaBeStrongMan over a year ago

wokingham

Your profile doesn’t meet the recommended standard of using text to tell an entire website based around swinging every details of your life

And since we all know it’s impossible to learn about anyone unless it’s in their bio, it’s a big no from me

Now for the genuine advice.

Profile is fine. Bio doesn’t really matter as much as the forum will make you believe. Have good pics is number one. Yours are decent, but a lot of the same and a few pics make it look like your tensing so hard it feels awkward

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By *risxbrisxMan over a year ago

Bristol

Profile is hidden so kinda useless in this context

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By *etcplCouple over a year ago

Gapping Fanny

Photos of men holding belts just boggle my mind.

They are all a bit samey.

I could get no sense of who you are as a person from your bio or photos, other than someone who likes to hold belts.