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By *Starlord69X OP   Man  over a year ago

Plymouth

Hey fellow fabbers, just wondering if anyone would like to look at my profile and offer any constructive criticism, don't worry I'm thick skinned.

I'm just wondering if there's anything putting women off, I appreciate I'm one of probably 40,000 men messaging women at any one time, however I can barely get any responses. I have had a lot of experience at clubs and with my partner, but solo very little is there something I could do to jazz up my profile a bit?

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

More talc

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

Are you always that smiley?

Can’t we see one where it looks like you lost a fifty and found a fiver !

Might make me feel more comfy and you a bit more serious.

Just kidding OP

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By *Starlord69X OP   Man  over a year ago

Plymouth

And I'll say it before someone else does I've tried but I can't

'get better looking'

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By *inger_SnapWoman  over a year ago

Hampshire/Dorset

You've got a girlfriend.

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By *ex HolesMan  over a year ago

Up North

You look like David Harbour so you’ll be fine dude

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By *offiaCoolWoman  over a year ago

Kidsgrove

You say you have a girlfriend and play as a couple. If you have a couple's profile on here, maybe mention your couples username so people can check out you are not playing away. I am not saying playing away is wrong, just to give people who are interested clarification of your situation/claim.

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By *inister_SpinsterWoman  over a year ago

Manchester(ish).

It's a decent profile.

Includes pics, text, and veris.

Good Luck with your search OP.

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

I find your language a bit “childish”

If you have a girlfriend and you play together get a couples account and reference it in your single account

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By *RANDMRSJAECouple  over a year ago

chester


"More talc "

Had no clue what you meant but now I can’t stop bloody laughing

Yes, is talc an aphrodisiac??

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

Not keen on the talc picture, and as others have said maybe add your couples profile name, otherwise a good profile

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By *Starlord69X OP   Man  over a year ago

Plymouth

Ok thank you I will make the changes the ladies have suggested thanks

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago


"Hey fellow fabbers, just wondering if anyone would like to look at my profile and offer any constructive criticism, don't worry I'm thick skinned.

I'm just wondering if there's anything putting women off, I appreciate I'm one of probably 40,000 men messaging women at any one time, however I can barely get any responses. I have had a lot of experience at clubs and with my partner, but solo very little is there something I could do to jazz up my profile a bit? "

You are too hot, your pics make me smile and the talc makes me want to ride you like you've been very bad indeed.

Probably the girlfriend putting people off. Bin her.

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

You’re a good looking chap and well verified on your own and with your other half so you’re doing ok tbf.

The one thing that instantly stood out to me was the initial “I’m basically a twat” opener, I know it’s just a bit of light-hearted self depreciation but not all women will like that (I’m guessing? It stood out a bit for me anyway)

Good luck fella

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By *affeine DuskMan  over a year ago

Caerphilly

Good profile, good pics. Sounds like a human being.

Top job all over, fella. I'd change nothing.

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By *Starlord69X OP   Man  over a year ago

Plymouth

Thank you guys I really appreciate the feedback, I've added our couples profile on as people have suggested, I may tweak the write up as well cheers guys

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By *Starlord69X OP   Man  over a year ago

Plymouth


"Hey fellow fabbers, just wondering if anyone would like to look at my profile and offer any constructive criticism, don't worry I'm thick skinned.

I'm just wondering if there's anything putting women off, I appreciate I'm one of probably 40,000 men messaging women at any one time, however I can barely get any responses. I have had a lot of experience at clubs and with my partner, but solo very little is there something I could do to jazz up my profile a bit?

You are too hot, your pics make me smile and the talc makes me want to ride you like you've been very bad indeed.

Probably the girlfriend putting people off. Bin her. "

Properly made me laugh out loud this comment

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By *ittleMyWoman  over a year ago

Stockport


"Hey fellow fabbers, just wondering if anyone would like to look at my profile and offer any constructive criticism, don't worry I'm thick skinned.

I'm just wondering if there's anything putting women off, I appreciate I'm one of probably 40,000 men messaging women at any one time, however I can barely get any responses. I have had a lot of experience at clubs and with my partner, but solo very little is there something I could do to jazz up my profile a bit? "

Okay, from the top, "Horny Twat" - we all love horny, someone who describes themselves as a twat not so much.

Photos: what's with the talc? Unless it's powder to kill body lice?

You're a good looking bloke, nice smile, great teeth. No dick pics - bonus points

As others have said, the main issue is the partner thing, particularly without having a couples profile. Every credit for mentioning it, but it will put a fair amount of solo women off.

Other than that, tip top!

I hope the feedback is beneficial

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