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"I certainly wouldn't do this. It's not nice and people could take offence. " Sorry - was meant for flashing thread. | |||
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"Ok go on then I am in hit me with the best or worst I can take it I am a big person "I'd take off Not Meeting Now, Don't Ask, as it can appear unwelcoming. Also, pictures: Many of the pictures are of the same angle and I find many of the guys I speak to like to see a close up of the face. | |||
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"In "Needs more direction in terms of what you are looking for. A few more sentences in the profile body. Also, black and white pictures are very desensitizing and akin to Bebo days. Colour pictures work best. | |||
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"Ok go on then I am in hit me with the best or worst I can take it I am a big person I'd take off Not Meeting Now, Don't Ask, as it can appear unwelcoming. Also, pictures: Many of the pictures are of the same angle and I find many of the guys I speak to like to see a close up of the face."Text need updates I agree was written during the first lockdown and yes pics are off the same angle as my pics are all about the clothes not me Also I never post face pics not worth it | |||
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"I’m in. Be nice please " Too many mentions of things you don't like, lots of negatives but needs more positives in the profile text. Also, face pictures always make you stand out and look unique. | |||
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"Me too "On the whole not bad but be weary of taking pictures with the phone covering your face, as it looks like you are deliberately trying to hide something. | |||
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"Go on. Now to cower behind the settee as if Dr Who is on. " Profile text is ok apart from the "lurk in the shadows" part. Photographs need a lot of improvement, black and white and blurred out pictures don't add anything. | |||
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"In Needs more direction in terms of what you are looking for. A few more sentences in the profile body. Also, black and white pictures are very desensitizing and akin to Bebo days. Colour pictures work best."I like black and white ones . Thank you | |||
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"I’m in. Be nice please Too many mentions of things you don't like, lots of negatives but needs more positives in the profile text. Also, face pictures always make you stand out and look unique." Fair comments. Thank you | |||
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Fire away "Trying too hard to be humerous in profile text. Make it more about you and what you are looking for/what makes you tick. Again, black and white pictures are a big no-no. Colour works best. | |||
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"Go on then "Profile ok, needs more information on what your kinks and fetishes are in the profile text. Also the negative about abuse/blocks make it seem hostile. Pictures are ok, a good variety of different pictures which will save you time when things escalate to KIK as you won't get asked for lots of different angles. | |||
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"Go on. Now to cower behind the settee as if Dr Who is on. Profile text is ok apart from the "lurk in the shadows" part. Photographs need a lot of improvement, black and white and blurred out pictures don't add anything. " Text sorted. | |||
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"Go on then be interested to see "Pictures are very blurred and also don't demonstrate you both as a couple. The legal disclaimer on pictures takes up profile space that you could use to describe your fantasies! | |||
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"Yay, validation from strangers." Lose the text about Islamophobia, anti fax etc. It sounds very ranty. Sadly pictures in black and white, not appealing and don't stand out in a search result. | |||
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"Yay, validation from strangers. Lose the text about Islamophobia, anti fax etc. It sounds very ranty. Sadly pictures in black and white, not appealing and don't stand out in a search result." I appreciate this. I will change everything immediately if not sooner. | |||
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"I would like you to give me advice. "The pictures need to show you both together better and also variations of settings, not just on the bed, what about other rooms in the house, mix it up. | |||
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"I would like you to give me advice. The pictures need to show you both together better and also variations of settings, not just on the bed, what about other rooms in the house, mix it up."Thank you for taking the time. | |||
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"I’ve had one lot of profile advice already but more couldn’t hurt. Fire away! " I'd take off the part about vaccination. Pictures are good but you could also demonstrate action, toys or even real people would excite the mind. Also, Tgirls isn't spelt Tgurls | |||
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"Yay, validation from strangers. Lose the text about Islamophobia, anti fax etc. It sounds very ranty. Sadly pictures in black and white, not appealing and don't stand out in a search result. I appreciate this. I will change everything immediately if not sooner."  | |||
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"Please advise "Text content is not bad but photos as a plural does not have an apostrophe. You also need some public pictures. Looking at your profile all we can see is a shirt, mix it up. | |||
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"Go on then Profile ok, needs more information on what your kinks and fetishes are in the profile text. Also the negative about abuse/blocks make it seem hostile. Pictures are ok, a good variety of different pictures which will save you time when things escalate to KIK as you won't get asked for lots of different angles."Thank you | |||
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"Profile Advice Comment below and I will give you honest and frank advice on your profile." Could be interesting, ours is due a rewrite. Mr Hayes | |||
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"Go on then..." Profile needs a nickname, not just initials. A good variety of pictures but colour stands out better in the galleries and will get you more fabs and messages. Also, now you have a partner, you can include him in some of your pictures, as guys often ask for pics with other people when things escalate to KIK. | |||
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"Profile Advice Comment below and I will give you honest and frank advice on your profile." I'm kind of frightened to ask, but it's best to grit my teeth and see if it could be better | |||
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"Profile Advice Comment below and I will give you honest and frank advice on your profile." Give it to me  xx | |||
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"Go on then…" profile gives a good idea of what you are looking for. Avoid text abbreviations and also self deprecation. You need more public pictures as the profile stubs at the bottom. | |||
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"I’ve had one lot of profile advice already but more couldn’t hurt. Fire away! I'd take off the part about vaccination. Pictures are good but you could also demonstrate action, toys or even real people would excite the mind. Also, Tgirls isn't spelt Tgurls" Ta! | |||
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"Go on then "Profile text is good, no areas for improvement there. A good variety of pictures but avoid black and white, pictures in saunas with bright lights behind, as this distorts the picture. Avoid cartoons as well, as it doesn't say anything about you and looks like lazy profile filling. | |||
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"Profile Advice Comment below and I will give you honest and frank advice on your profile. Could be interesting, ours is due a rewrite. Mr Hayes " I'd take off the rant about people not reading the profile, as those that don't read won't read it anyway and it makes the text look overwhelming to read. Although a wide variety of pictures, many of them have edited borders/black and white/dimmed/blurred and most people won't bother to click or like them. | |||
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Not updated much since joining tbh. So probably needs a Rewrite. Which will likely never happen as nobody reads it anyway and only respond to the photos  | |||
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"Profile Advice Comment below and I will give you honest and frank advice on your profile. I'm kind of frightened to ask, but it's best to grit my teeth and see if it could be better " The profile text is far too long and starts off with a private "in" joke which excludes the reader. We don't need an explanation of what hetero flexible etc means as Fab has a glossary. In terms of pictures, my only criticism is the masked picture, it's not good, and could be associated with robbers/muggers. | |||
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"Oh why not "You fail to mention your love of berets in your profile | |||
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"Profile Advice Comment below and I will give you honest and frank advice on your profile. Give it to me xx"Avoid swearing in profile text. Pictures a good variety but some are too dark, and your profile picture is dark which doesn't stand out, pick a brighter one to use as your profile picture. | |||
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"Tell me how to get people interested in me "Lose the self deprecation in the text (the part about being ugly). The pictures are a good variety but one is just a cropped version of an existing picture. Round off the text of your profile with a verb prompt, e.g. "Send me a message and let's get the ball rolling". | |||
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"Have I been missed? I’m confused which doesn’t take much on a Friday "The pictures are far too dark and cartoon like, is this a video game or a hook up site? The text in the profile needs condensing, lose the philosophical parts and save them for the pillow talk. | |||
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"Tell me how to get people interested in me Lose the self deprecation in the text (the part about being ugly). The pictures are a good variety but one is just a cropped version of an existing picture. Round off the text of your profile with a verb prompt, e.g. "Send me a message and let's get the ball rolling"." | |||
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"Oh why not "The swearing in the profile text can be off putting to some. A good amount of public pictures but black and white do not stand out, it's a swinger's site not a photography diploma. Otherwise good profile but round it off with a motivational sentence "Give me a message and let's get the party started". | |||
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"I'm up for this " Oh dear oh dear! Profile text not complete and has been left like that. This sends out a message of broken promises. The pictures are good but the gallery needs extending. I think you need to go back and take some time to complement your profile. | |||
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"Oh why not The swearing in the profile text can be off putting to some. A good amount of public pictures but black and white do not stand out, it's a swinger's site not a photography diploma. Otherwise good profile but round it off with a motivational sentence "Give me a message and let's get the party started"."My most fabbed pic is black and white I like a little artistic flare - thanks for the comments xx | |||
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"Please advise Text content is not bad but photos as a plural does not have an apostrophe. You also need some public pictures. Looking at your profile all we can see is a shirt, mix it up."Thank you | |||
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"Gutted, I was skipped. I guess that’s it then "Lose the self deprecation in the profile description, you can't hit the curtain rail but talk about what you CAN do. A good amount of pictures but be careful about taking pictures from the same angles over and over. | |||
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"Have I been missed? I’m confused which doesn’t take much on a Friday The pictures are far too dark and cartoon like, is this a video game or a hook up site? The text in the profile needs condensing, lose the philosophical parts and save them for the pillow talk."Can you explain cartoon like? Or what cartoons you’ve been watching? | |||
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"Intriguing…" You can still discuss briefly your interests without spoiling the surprise. Let's hear a little about what you like about Same Room Swapping, for example. Again, black and white pictures are very dated and dull. | |||
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"Gutted, I was skipped. I guess that’s it then "Happy to help where op is slipping through the cracks Ur pics cut the tip of ur cock off this might send the wrong message that ur tipless, make sure the bell is on the knocker. Trim those finger nails back a tad, have a towel for the wet patches, and instead of licking their eyeballs offer to feed them cake seems to work here. So I’m lead to believe | |||
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" "Saying you take this site as a joke could be perceived as you taking arrangements to meet as a joke. Do be careful about too much information about your personal life e.g marriage. A good amount of pictures but save the drawings for your hobby time. | |||
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"Intriguing… You can still discuss briefly your interests without spoiling the surprise. Let's hear a little about what you like about Same Room Swapping, for example. Again, black and white pictures are very dated and dull." I like how when I swap Christmas presents in the same room I can watch their face when they open them. Like when I saw my brother in law open his Tom hardy calendar | |||
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"Interesting to see so I’m in….hi all xx" The profile text is generally ok but waffly in places. Especially the part about the pooch. The middle sentences can be combined to make a whole paragraph, as it all relates to what you are interested in. Pictures are generally good, except for the second one done (13th), magnifying glass needed to see you! | |||
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"Oh why not The swearing in the profile text can be off putting to some. A good amount of public pictures but black and white do not stand out, it's a swinger's site not a photography diploma. Otherwise good profile but round it off with a motivational sentence "Give me a message and let's get the party started".
My most fabbed pic is black and white I like a little artistic flare - thanks for the comments xx"That's because black and white photos rule and that's a fact
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"Interesting to see so I’m in….hi all xx The profile text is generally ok but waffly in places. Especially the part about the pooch. The middle sentences can be combined to make a whole paragraph, as it all relates to what you are interested in. Pictures are generally good, except for the second one done (13th), magnifying glass needed to see you!" I’ll take that, always happy to accept constructive criticism x | |||
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"What’s the warranty on the advice? Is it guaranteed success
Not updated much since joining tbh. So probably needs a Rewrite. Which will likely never happen as nobody reads it anyway and only respond to the photos "The profile picture should be a picture of you both together, the individual pictures of the man and woman feel very disconnected from what your text describes. I'd remove the Please Note section as it doesn't really add much and just takes up space. | |||
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" Saying you take this site as a joke could be perceived as you taking arrangements to meet as a joke. Do be careful about too much information about your personal life e.g marriage. A good amount of pictures but save the drawings for your hobby time."Amendments made. Ta. | |||
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"Oh why not The swearing in the profile text can be off putting to some. A good amount of public pictures but black and white do not stand out, it's a swinger's site not a photography diploma. Otherwise good profile but round it off with a motivational sentence "Give me a message and let's get the party started".
My most fabbed pic is black and white I like a little artistic flare - thanks for the comments xx
That's because black and white photos rule and that's a fact
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"I definitely need advice " Avoid text speach such as "njoy". A good variety of pictures, no room for improvement there. Try and marry the pieces of information in your text in to paragraphs, pick out pieces of information that are related and join them together, it's a long way to the bottom of the text! | |||
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"Do me
C"The profile text needs expanding. I can see a lingerie fetish, so talk about it in the text. There is a reason Ann Summers is so successful. Black and white profile pictures don't stand out on a search result form. | |||
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C The profile text needs expanding. I can see a lingerie fetish, so talk about it in the text. There is a reason Ann Summers is so successful. Black and white profile pictures don't stand out on a search result form."Thank you | |||
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"I’m in for some friendly advice " You need a nickname for people to remember you by, something that will stick in their head and make them want to message you, rather than simply 'g'. The profile text needs expanding, talk about your fetishes and fantasies. You need more pictures and ones that are closer to the camera. | |||
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"Oh why not The swearing in the profile text can be off putting to some. A good amount of public pictures but black and white do not stand out, it's a swinger's site not a photography diploma. Otherwise good profile but round it off with a motivational sentence "Give me a message and let's get the party started".
My most fabbed pic is black and white I like a little artistic flare - thanks for the comments xx
That's because black and white photos rule and that's a fact
I’d agree can’t deny Robert Mappelthorpe was a a visionary"I agree | |||
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"I could use a spruce up, and always happy to take advice, so let me know...(but be kind!)" Most of the text is good but cut out the disclaimer of excuses at the bottom. Pictures wise, I'm guessing no privacy concerns so a face pic to go with the body would attract more interest. Black and white pics don't spark interest. | |||
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"Go on then, let's hear what you think. Cheers, Gbat " The text is generally ok but cut out the explanations of what your statistics mean at the bottom. I.e. location. In terms of pictures, if you are not willing to show your face, it is better to crop it out, rather than blur and smudge. | |||
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"I’m in….I’m thick skinned "Let's lose the part about the senior moment and trim the page up to there and it should be fine in terms of text. In terms of pictures, all are black and white which makes them look ambiguous and also, as a couples profile, you both should appear in at least some pictures of the gallery. Try taking pictures in different settings as the feedback that many Fab users give is that they look for creativity. | |||
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"The text is generally ok but cut out the explanations of what your statistics mean at the bottom. I.e. location. In terms of pictures, if you are not willing to show your face, it is better to crop it out, rather than blur and smudge." Thanks for taking the time, cheers, Gbat | |||
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"I might regret this.. I’m in xxxx " The profile text is too practically-orientated e.g. speak on WhatsApp. Readers want to hear about fetishes, interests, they want to know what happens when they message or meet you. To take the pictures to the next level, include more of you as a couple. | |||
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"I might regret this.. I’m in xxxx The profile text is too practically-orientated e.g. speak on WhatsApp. Readers want to hear about fetishes, interests, they want to know what happens when they message or meet you. To take the pictures to the next level, include more of you as a couple." Thank you, it’s supposed to be a single profile but admin changed it as I mentioned Hubby being present on occasion, only I play xx I change the write up a lot thanks for the advice xx | |||
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"I’m in….I’m thick skinned Let's lose the part about the senior moment and trim the page up to there and it should be fine in terms of text. In terms of pictures, all are black and white which makes them look ambiguous and also, as a couples profile, you both should appear in at least some pictures of the gallery. Try taking pictures in different settings as the feedback that many Fab users give is that they look for creativity." usually, the straight blokes aren’t too fussed on seeing Mr x | |||
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"Why not, let's see your thoughts. Mrs" The information about friend requests and no single males can be skipped out , this can be read in your statistics and gives a negative vibe in your profile text. Your profile picture would be so much better if you used the original version, it's difficult to see the details on many pictures, as so dark. Also, make your friends list public and verifications public, these reassure people that you are genuine. | |||
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"Why not, let's see your thoughts. Mrs The information about friend requests and no single males can be skipped out , this can be read in your statistics and gives a negative vibe in your profile text. Your profile picture would be so much better if you used the original version, it's difficult to see the details on many pictures, as so dark. Also, make your friends list public and verifications public, these reassure people that you are genuine." Thank you, but no public friends or veris, it's definitely not needed, I like to keep some privacy and 3 in meet we're definitely genuine. Thank you | |||
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"I'd like to know how mine comes across. " I think you could elaborate more in your profile text on your dominant kinks. One or two more public pictures too. Give yourself a nick name rather than just M to stand out. | |||
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"In for a penny…x" A good range of pictures but the profile text needs expanding. What are you looking for, what are you looking to do? | |||
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"We’ll be keen on your views
K"The profile text is well written and just about the right amount. Pictures wise, there is a good range. Difficult to fault your profile really. | |||
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"Curious "The text is ok, but needs more elaboration in terms of fetishes/swinging interests. The blank profile comment comes across as hostile. Pictures wise, I think a face picture would be a good addition, especially as it can almost be seen in one of the pics anyway. | |||
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"How can I get less views?" The profile needs more elaboration. You need to sell yourself. Talk about your strong sexual points. The pictures are ok but the close up of your forehead doesn't bring anything to your profile. | |||
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"How can I get less views? The profile needs more elaboration. You need to sell yourself. Talk about your strong sexual points. The pictures are ok but the close up of your forehead doesn't bring anything to your profile." I said less views | |||
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"I'd appreciate any feedback!" Your profile doesn't tell me anything about you other than that you are poly and you don't bite. What is your experience, what are your ambitions from this site? Get them written on your profile. Pictures wise, I think you need to think about where you are aiming the camera, one picture is mainly of the floor behind you and the other one you aren't even looking at the camera. | |||
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"[Removed by poster at 25/03/22 20:02:58]" Starting the profile text by self deprecating is not good. You need to sell yourself. I don't see much in your profile text that relates to the act of swinging. This would be a good way to fill out your profile text. Pictures wise, it's a black and white picture which doesn't really show you as a whole. It needs more pictures and colour pictures. | |||
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"Happy to be critiqued..I think " Can't view your profile, so can't give a critique. | |||
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"I certainly wouldn't do this. It's not nice and people could take offence. Sorry - was meant for flashing thread."  | |||
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"Gutted, I was skipped. I guess that’s it then Lose the self deprecation in the profile description, you can't hit the curtain rail but talk about what you CAN do. A good amount of pictures but be careful about taking pictures from the same angles over and over."Thank you. I will take your comments onboard. Hopefully I’ll see more vagina now | |||
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"This like having your homework marked "I don't think the middle aged comment is necessary in your profile text. Also, the pictures are mainly of your clothes and...you can't swing with am outfit. The focus needs to be on you. | |||
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"I’m definitely in!" Jack. I'm going to be blunt here, people don't want to hear about what a great time you had with a previous sexual partner, they want to hear about what a great time THEY could have with you. Picture wise, it's mainly focused on your torso and in some pictures, that is covered with clothing. You are modelling yourself, not the clothing, this isn't a clothing catalogue! | |||
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"Dare I ask? be gentle please "Profile text wise, I think it is generally ok, there is a description of what you are looking for. I would cut out the bit about body age and being in fifties, sell yourself to the users. Pictures wise, there is a good variety in terms of TYPES of pictures but the black and white edit drowms them out on some of them. | |||
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"Dare I ask? be gentle please Profile text wise, I think it is generally ok, there is a description of what you are looking for. I would cut out the bit about body age and being in fifties, sell yourself to the users. Pictures wise, there is a good variety in terms of TYPES of pictures but the black and white edit drowms them out on some of them."Thank you  | |||
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"Happy to be critiqued..I think Can't view your profile, so can't give a critique." That’s odd, feel free to try now | |||
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Thanks OP! x | |||
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"How can I get less views?" ....by hiding your profile DrFeelGood.  | |||
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"I’m definitely in! Jack. I'm going to be blunt here, people don't want to hear about what a great time you had with a previous sexual partner, they want to hear about what a great time THEY could have with you. Picture wise, it's mainly focused on your torso and in some pictures, that is covered with clothing. You are modelling yourself, not the clothing, this isn't a clothing catalogue!" Blunt is good Lisa! I’m in your debt, and now I’m also in the nude. | |||
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"Umm, it’s gone a bit quiet …" I'll do you.....gorgeous. The end x | |||
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"Umm, it’s gone a bit quiet …" My profile must be top tier | |||
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"Umm, it’s gone a bit quiet …" Might be a good thing | |||
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"Umm, it’s gone a bit quiet … I'll do you.....gorgeous. The end x"Aww, you | |||
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"Clearly we’re flawless, we ‘late to the party ones’ "I survived virtually unscathed x | |||
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"I'm pretty happy with mine, but would be interested in a different opinion!" See, you're all gorgeous so I can't find a fault with anyone x | |||
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"I'm pretty happy with mine, but would be interested in a different opinion!" OK there's a lot to read, but the summary is yummy! Does that suffice | |||
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"I'm pretty happy with mine, but would be interested in a different opinion! OK there's a lot to read, but the summary is yummy! Does that suffice "Thanks lovely! | |||
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"I'm pretty happy with mine, but would be interested in a different opinion! OK there's a lot to read, but the summary is yummy! Does that suffice
Thanks lovely!"Your welcome On another note after listening to SM don't you forget about me, on a you tube loop for the last hour ans a half..... I think we've been forgotten | |||
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"I'm pretty happy with mine, but would be interested in a different opinion! OK there's a lot to read, but the summary is yummy! Does that suffice
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Your welcome
On another note after listening to SM don't you forget about me, on a you tube loop for the last hour ans a half..... I think we've been forgotten "Yes, it looks that way!! Perhaps Lisa needed a stiff drink & a break from screen time | |||
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"I'm pretty happy with mine, but would be interested in a different opinion! OK there's a lot to read, but the summary is yummy! Does that suffice
Thanks lovely!
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On another note after listening to SM don't you forget about me, on a you tube loop for the last hour ans a half..... I think we've been forgotten
Yes, it looks that way!! Perhaps Lisa needed a stiff drink & a break from screen time "Yep can't be easy being a modern day just Joan, agony aunt | |||
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"Like the twist of asking to critique rather than the usual 'please help' that thread always becomes unfriendly and fab territoral . the difference in thread atmosphere, positive and word i never use on fab... 'happy'. Hope dont mind, I liked the pics, very clockwork orange. No need to critique mine thanks, it's flaws, lack of punctuation on profile and obvious school boy mistakes im cool with" 
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"In for a penny…x A good range of pictures but the profile text needs expanding. What are you looking for, what are you looking to do? " Thanks - will duly consider. | |||
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"Profile Advice Comment below and I will give you honest and frank advice on your profile. I'm kind of frightened to ask, but it's best to grit my teeth and see if it could be better The profile text is far too long and starts off with a private "in" joke which excludes the reader. We don't need an explanation of what hetero flexible etc means as Fab has a glossary. In terms of pictures, my only criticism is the masked picture, it's not good, and could be associated with robbers/muggers." Thanks, I'll bear this in mind and do a rewrite soon | |||
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