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over a year ago
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I would spellcheck your bio and add paragraphs to make it easier to read.
Add some public pics so people get an idea of who they’re talking to.
Other than that you haven’t been here long and you’ve had meets so you’re not doing too bad. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"I would spellcheck your bio and add paragraphs to make it easier to read.
Add some public pics so people get an idea of who they’re talking to.
Other than that you haven’t been here long and you’ve had meets so you’re not doing too bad."
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"I would spellcheck your bio and add paragraphs to make it easier to read.
Add some public pics so people get an idea of who they’re talking to.
Other than that you haven’t been here long and you’ve had meets so you’re not doing too bad."
Took me two years to get a social meet lol |
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I've seen worse
Maybe a couple of extra images, I'd crop the head out tk rather than hide it with an emoji
The bio would read better if it was in paragraphs rather than one long block, also pop it through a spell checker - that's not a dig - my spelling/typing is awful - it'll just make it look/read better and only takes a few seconds
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As others have said...
Public photos - good ones and a variety
Paragraphs - I confess that I didn't even try reading it properly as it stands... blocks of text make my head hurt.
Spelling and grammar check
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Hey everyone could you take a look at my profile and give me some tips to make it better xx"
Proofread it for spelling mistakes. I'd also take off the part about "100% straight" as your profile stats already list that and it just sounds as though you are trying to convince yourself that you are. Also punctuation as well as spelling, "I'm" needs an apostrophe. I hope this helps.
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Sounds harsh maybe but…
You have a friend who’s willing to join you?
I find it hard enough to trust people on here for a meet let alone some random friend who for whatever reason isn’t on here. I need to build a connection with whoever I am going to be with and some random person who you vouch for wouldn’t be for me
But each to their own
So that would be an instant no from me.
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Wouldn’t mind some honest criticism myself..be kind 
Make your own thread  
Bog off
Everyone loves a bogoff
Ps I'd like some profile advice  "
Your profile text is a bit too self deprecating, especially the first sentences. Black and white and blurry pictures are difficult to see and look like stock images from Alamy. We all have a picture editor on our computer that can turn pictures black and white but it just resembles a Bebo account from 2009. I hope this helps. |
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"Wouldn’t mind some honest criticism myself..be kind
Make your own thread
Bog off
Everyone loves a bogoff
Ps I'd like some profile advice Your profile text is a bit too self deprecating, especially the first sentences. Black and white and blurry pictures are difficult to see and look like stock images from Alamy. We all have a picture editor on our computer that can turn pictures black and white but it just resembles a Bebo account from 2009. I hope this helps."
Not really as I've only had good feedback on my bio and photos |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"Wouldn’t mind some honest criticism myself..be kind
Make your own thread
Bog off
Everyone loves a bogoff
Ps I'd like some profile advice Your profile text is a bit too self deprecating, especially the first sentences. Black and white and blurry pictures are difficult to see and look like stock images from Alamy. We all have a picture editor on our computer that can turn pictures black and white but it just resembles a Bebo account from 2009. I hope this helps.
Not really as I've only had good feedback on my bio and photos "
Well you asked for advice.... |
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"Wouldn’t mind some honest criticism myself..be kind
Make your own thread
Bog off
Everyone loves a bogoff
Ps I'd like some profile advice Your profile text is a bit too self deprecating, especially the first sentences. Black and white and blurry pictures are difficult to see and look like stock images from Alamy. We all have a picture editor on our computer that can turn pictures black and white but it just resembles a Bebo account from 2009. I hope this helps.
Not really as I've only had good feedback on my bio and photos Well you asked for advice.... "
I was joking mind but thank you for the input |
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