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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Its come to light that people are complaining about messages i.e one liners.. which would you prefer?
for example:
Message one:
Hey Sexy Fancy A Shag Here's My Cock. How About Goberling On That?
Message two:
Hello Dave & Rose,
I gave your profile a read and i'd like to get to know you both, either on a friends basis or maybe something else?
Either way i'm happy to talk and get to know you both.
All the best
Andy....
The messages were examples..
apart from the second one.. it is one i have sent.. i have just changed the names.
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Er... neither actually. The first one doesn't appeal to me (but I can't speak for Perky..... lol!) on a purely grammatical basis, and the second, whilst much better, says one thing but doesn't show that its true.
To what am I referring?????
The line in it which says 'I've read your profile....' Now if you had a couple of extra lines talking about something which is mentioned in our profile - now that would be impressive and.... GUARANTEED to get a reply 
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Er... neither actually. The first one doesn't appeal to me (but I can't speak for Perky..... lol!) on a purely grammatical basis, and the second, whilst much better, says one thing but doesn't show that its true.
To what am I referring?????
The line in it which says 'I've read your profile....' Now if you had a couple of extra lines talking about something which is mentioned in our profile - now that would be impressive and.... GUARANTEED to get a reply
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Had to take details out becaause it was a message i sent to someone it didnt want ruin there privacy.. but i do mention stuff on there profiles. plus i also put a comment about a pic.. i.e Nice tattoo or who did your pics there really good.. all depending on the profile.. |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Honestly???
They both just sound like copy n paste's and neither would grab my attention
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Had to remove certain stuff due to privacy issues.. wouldn't be fair mentioning stuff that's on someone else's profile. All messages i send are unique |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Er... neither actually. The first one doesn't appeal to me (but I can't speak for Perky..... lol!) on a purely grammatical basis, and the second, whilst much better, says one thing but doesn't show that its true.
To what am I referring?????
The line in it which says 'I've read your profile....' Now if you had a couple of extra lines talking about something which is mentioned in our profile - now that would be impressive and.... GUARANTEED to get a reply
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The second one for me....  (Perky) |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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How about :
Hi Barry and Frieda,
I noticed your profile and must say that I like what you say and your pictures are really good.
I'd like to get to know you and hopefully meet socially with a view to arranging something more intimate.
In the mean time, how about getting ur laughing gear round this beauty ? (attach cock pic here)
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By *phroditeWoman
over a year ago
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"How about :
Hi Barry and Frieda,
I noticed your profile and must say that I like what you say and your pictures are really good.
I'd like to get to know you and hopefully meet socially with a view to arranging something more intimate.
In the mean time, how about getting ur laughing gear round this beauty ? (attach cock pic here)
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I like that. I can imagine myself receiving this message and wondering where the beast is! |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
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"How about :
Hi Barry and Frieda,
I noticed your profile and must say that I like what you say and your pictures are really good.
I'd like to get to know you and hopefully meet socially with a view to arranging something more intimate.
In the mean time, how about getting ur laughing gear round this beauty ? (attach cock pic here)
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This made me laugh! Lol!
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"How about :
Hi Barry and Frieda,
I noticed your profile and must say that I like what you say and your pictures are really good.
I'd like to get to know you and hopefully meet socially with a view to arranging something more intimate.
In the mean time, how about getting ur laughing gear round this beauty ? (attach cock pic here)
I like that. I can imagine myself receiving this message and wondering where the beast is! "
Yeah that would work for me too. Especially if you don't actually attach the cock pic! Leave them wanting more.
Sounds like you're already doing it right if you're commenting about actual things in their profile. |
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