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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Here I done a little bit of work to my bio. Fingers crossed that it's actually pretty decent. Spent a brave while on it to be honest so if I could get a rating between 1-10 and if possible a little constructive criticism if needs be folks. Cheers and thankyou! |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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It’s got lots of grammatical errors which some people get put off by.
A lot of it could be condensed.
The first sentence doesn’t make sense to me. What’s an inspiring motivation for great sex? |
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The fact that you’re showing your face and you have written a profile text, should always be recognised. Too many guys can’t be arsed, so we’ll done Op. 
I won’t give you a mark out of ten, we are not at School. But it’s ok and hopefully you’ll get some interest.
Good luck Op  |
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over a year ago
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10/10 for effort, but like with all profiles we can all do with a little improving on one thing or another...!
my only advise to you would be, for you to just be yourself and honest with whomever you connect with when conversing... |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
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"It’s got lots of grammatical errors which some people get put off by.
A lot of it could be condensed.
The first sentence doesn’t make sense to me. What’s an inspiring motivation for great sex? "
What I mean by that is that I'm motivated to want to give and recieve great sex. I'll probably need to rewrite that one cheers! |
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