Hi Guys and Gals,
Hope you are having a nice night?
So here I am just another single guy trying like all the others on here, to stand out from the crowd and promote and convey what I am like in a digital online format that quite frankly at my ripe old age is a new thing and a bit of learning curve in itself and not something I am accustomed to.
That said I am trying to improve and would welcome your feedback on my profile good or bad (as long as constructive) and yes I realise I need new photos but I'm not really into selfies of myself so looking for ideas, inspiration and feedback.
Thanks in advance,
Joe xx
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over a year ago
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I stopped reading after 4 paragraphs and realised there was still more! It reads like an essay. Short and sweet but informative is better. The reader needs to be drawn to you by the bio, and wants to chat to see if there's connection |
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I tried reading it and just started skimming. It's very long and comes across as a bit ...indecisive? Uncertain or lacking in confidence? Something like thst. |
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"I stopped reading after 4 paragraphs and realised there was still more! It reads like an essay. Short and sweet but informative is better. The reader needs to be drawn to you by the bio, and wants to chat to see if there's connection "
OK thanks ?? |
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over a year ago
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I think it looks ok. Your references make you seem like a decent guy which is a big help.
I would go though your bio and see if you can shorten it a little by changing the wording slightly |
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over a year ago
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Decent profile maybe get all the best bits and condense though  but saying that I’m not a profile king so you just keep being you and you will find the balance I always look at my profile and go hmmm is it any good :/ |
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"People asking you what your into is good means your profile is intriguing but also gets messages flowing "
True I guess. I have updated it now with all comments taken on board. Will continue to update as I go. Thanks all xx |
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