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"Good luck op " Feel like I'm gonna need it.....lol | |||
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"Good luck op Feel like I'm gonna need it.....lol" I think you might lol | |||
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"Good luck op Feel like I'm gonna need it.....lol" I think you will | |||
"Good luck op Feel like I'm gonna need it.....lol I think you might lol" Cheeky.....lol | |||
"A positive is that you're articulate and clear about what you want "Thanks, I try my best, just like to know if there is anything I can improve on | |||
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"I’d take that shirt off for a start "Don't be so toffee-nosed. | |||
"I personally don't find the baseball cap on backwards particularly appealing, but if it reflects your personality, keep it. I think your profile is clear and articulate as to what you seek." Hey I was on holiday and enjoying the sun, when on holiday anything goes...lol | |||
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"Each to their own but it sounds like a cheesy advert for adultery lol..in my head was a voice over guy reading it out loud" Hey I am just trying to make it fun and easy....what would you change | |||
"Already men outnumber the women by many good. But you want to make the pool of women you are after even smaller - unhappily married women. Good luck!!! " Well I am who I am....gotta be me... Nice boobs by the way....x | |||
"Ok....so what are peoples thoughts....give it your best shot....." Truth. Your profile text; “Are you a woman” is your opening line, seriously? I get where you are coming from, like an advert right? But that pitch just doesn’t have enough spin on it. It’s a bit like saying. “Are you breathing”? Then you mention that maybe they aren’t being satisfied at home, are you implying that women are on here because of “issues”? not all married women on here are cheating because of “issues”, not all married people on here are cheating but your profile text is designed to belittle their partner and big yourself up. There is a market for that, the cuckold market, but it is small and based (on my understanding) around respect and fantasy, with elements of controlled humiliation, not out and out ridicule. Do you think you could change the “tone” of your text to something more relaxed or are you going for the Alpha/Bull thing? In which case keep as is. Your photos are plain and unimaginative. They certainly don’t exude the confidence of your text so there is a disparity, I read one thing, I see another. Now I’m confused. Do you think there are photos that you could take that match the tone of your profile, moody, dominant, alpha etc.? So a little critique and some thoughts to consider, as you asked. If you take offence, I apologise in advance, but you asked for a critique. | |||
"Each to their own but it sounds like a cheesy advert for adultery lol..in my head was a voice over guy reading it out loud Hey I am just trying to make it fun and easy....what would you change " Maybe word it to show what you can offer that particular niche... | |||
"Each to their own but it sounds like a cheesy advert for adultery lol..in my head was a voice over guy reading it out loud Hey I am just trying to make it fun and easy....what would you change Maybe word it to show what you can offer that particular niche..." Ok I like the feedback, never great with words but willing to try | |||
"Ok....so what are peoples thoughts....give it your best shot..... Truth. Your profile text; “Are you a woman” is your opening line, seriously? I get where you are coming from, like an advert right? But that pitch just doesn’t have enough spin on it. It’s a bit like saying. “Are you breathing”? Then you mention that maybe they aren’t being satisfied at home, are you implying that women are on here because of “issues”? not all married women on here are cheating because of “issues”, not all married people on here are cheating but your profile text is designed to belittle their partner and big yourself up. There is a market for that, the cuckold market, but it is small and based (on my understanding) around respect and fantasy, with elements of controlled humiliation, not out and out ridicule. Do you think you could change the “tone” of your text to something more relaxed or are you going for the Alpha/Bull thing? In which case keep as is. Your photos are plain and unimaginative. They certainly don’t exude the confidence of your text so there is a disparity, I read one thing, I see another. Now I’m confused. Do you think there are photos that you could take that match the tone of your profile, moody, dominant, alpha etc.? So a little critique and some thoughts to consider, as you asked. If you take offence, I apologise in advance, but you asked for a critique. " I really like the feedback and would happily change things, what exactly do you think to change in regards to pics and profile... All help appreciated | |||
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"Ok....so what are peoples thoughts....give it your best shot..... Truth. Your profile text; “Are you a woman” is your opening line, seriously? I get where you are coming from, like an advert right? But that pitch just doesn’t have enough spin on it. It’s a bit like saying. “Are you breathing”? Then you mention that maybe they aren’t being satisfied at home, are you implying that women are on here because of “issues”? not all married women on here are cheating because of “issues”, not all married people on here are cheating but your profile text is designed to belittle their partner and big yourself up. There is a market for that, the cuckold market, but it is small and based (on my understanding) around respect and fantasy, with elements of controlled humiliation, not out and out ridicule. Do you think you could change the “tone” of your text to something more relaxed or are you going for the Alpha/Bull thing? In which case keep as is. Your photos are plain and unimaginative. They certainly don’t exude the confidence of your text so there is a disparity, I read one thing, I see another. Now I’m confused. Do you think there are photos that you could take that match the tone of your profile, moody, dominant, alpha etc.? So a little critique and some thoughts to consider, as you asked. If you take offence, I apologise in advance, but you asked for a critique. " I think this is spot on. The photos and text are mis-matched. | |||
"I'm not your target, as I'm as half a couple, It would totally turn me off, the hunt to meet a married woman in secret. " So what would you suggest I change... I love sex... I love women... I love all types of women (age, size, etc)... What do you suggest I change | |||
"I'm not your target, as I'm as half a couple, It would totally turn me off, the hunt to meet a married woman in secret. So what would you suggest I change... I love sex... I love women... I love all types of women (age, size, etc)... What do you suggest I change " Nothing if it represents what you're looking for op It just won't appeal to many women who aren't looking to cheat | |||
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"Ok....so what are peoples thoughts....give it your best shot..... Truth. Your profile text; “Are you a woman” is your opening line, seriously? I get where you are coming from, like an advert right? But that pitch just doesn’t have enough spin on it. It’s a bit like saying. “Are you breathing”? Then you mention that maybe they aren’t being satisfied at home, are you implying that women are on here because of “issues”? not all married women on here are cheating because of “issues”, not all married people on here are cheating but your profile text is designed to belittle their partner and big yourself up. There is a market for that, the cuckold market, but it is small and based (on my understanding) around respect and fantasy, with elements of controlled humiliation, not out and out ridicule. Do you think you could change the “tone” of your text to something more relaxed or are you going for the Alpha/Bull thing? In which case keep as is. Your photos are plain and unimaginative. They certainly don’t exude the confidence of your text so there is a disparity, I read one thing, I see another. Now I’m confused. Do you think there are photos that you could take that match the tone of your profile, moody, dominant, alpha etc.? So a little critique and some thoughts to consider, as you asked. If you take offence, I apologise in advance, but you asked for a critique. I really like the feedback and would happily change things, what exactly do you think to change in regards to pics and profile... All help appreciated " Well as you have asked. There is a tonal issue. Your words don’t match your pic. So either take those photos and go down the bull/alpha tone. You might want to tone down the “I am the satisfaction king, greatest lover ever” bit, or not, it’s YOUR profile, you can be who you want. Or Match your text to your photos, I.e. I am an average guy doing average things, I have a thing for married women….. (note I am not saying you are average, this is by way of an example, please self-define) | |||
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"I'm not your target, as I'm as half a couple, It would totally turn me off, the hunt to meet a married woman in secret. So what would you suggest I change... I love sex... I love women... I love all types of women (age, size, etc)... What do you suggest I change Nothing if it represents what you're looking for op It just won't appeal to many women who aren't looking to cheat " Ok so I can look to change my profile in regards to softening it up and aiming it at women and couples who want fun and not so much towards cheating... What you think.? | |||
"Ok....so what are peoples thoughts....give it your best shot....." How many women here do you think are looking for a secret encounter? Divide that number by those who fancy you, are close enough etc etc etc and you'll come up with a very small number. | |||
"Ok....so what are peoples thoughts....give it your best shot..... Truth. Your profile text; “Are you a woman” is your opening line, seriously? I get where you are coming from, like an advert right? But that pitch just doesn’t have enough spin on it. It’s a bit like saying. “Are you breathing”? Then you mention that maybe they aren’t being satisfied at home, are you implying that women are on here because of “issues”? not all married women on here are cheating because of “issues”, not all married people on here are cheating but your profile text is designed to belittle their partner and big yourself up. There is a market for that, the cuckold market, but it is small and based (on my understanding) around respect and fantasy, with elements of controlled humiliation, not out and out ridicule. Do you think you could change the “tone” of your text to something more relaxed or are you going for the Alpha/Bull thing? In which case keep as is. Your photos are plain and unimaginative. They certainly don’t exude the confidence of your text so there is a disparity, I read one thing, I see another. Now I’m confused. Do you think there are photos that you could take that match the tone of your profile, moody, dominant, alpha etc.? So a little critique and some thoughts to consider, as you asked. If you take offence, I apologise in advance, but you asked for a critique. I really like the feedback and would happily change things, what exactly do you think to change in regards to pics and profile... All help appreciated Well as you have asked. There is a tonal issue. Your words don’t match your pic. So either take those photos and go down the bull/alpha tone. You might want to tone down the “I am the satisfaction king, greatest lover ever” bit, or not, it’s YOUR profile, you can be who you want. Or Match your text to your photos, I.e. I am an average guy doing average things, I have a thing for married women….. (note I am not saying you are average, this is by way of an example, please self-define) " I take it all on board and apprecate this as it is going to help me so much, this is what I am looking for in regards to help... Shame I can't message you privately for some advice on changes instead of here, but all the info you have given me helps. Reading your reply I think I should turn the dial down on my text.... | |||
"Ok....so what are peoples thoughts....give it your best shot..... Truth. Your profile text; “Are you a woman” is your opening line, seriously? I get where you are coming from, like an advert right? But that pitch just doesn’t have enough spin on it. It’s a bit like saying. “Are you breathing”? Then you mention that maybe they aren’t being satisfied at home, are you implying that women are on here because of “issues”? not all married women on here are cheating because of “issues”, not all married people on here are cheating but your profile text is designed to belittle their partner and big yourself up. There is a market for that, the cuckold market, but it is small and based (on my understanding) around respect and fantasy, with elements of controlled humiliation, not out and out ridicule. Do you think you could change the “tone” of your text to something more relaxed or are you going for the Alpha/Bull thing? In which case keep as is. Your photos are plain and unimaginative. They certainly don’t exude the confidence of your text so there is a disparity, I read one thing, I see another. Now I’m confused. Do you think there are photos that you could take that match the tone of your profile, moody, dominant, alpha etc.? So a little critique and some thoughts to consider, as you asked. If you take offence, I apologise in advance, but you asked for a critique. I really like the feedback and would happily change things, what exactly do you think to change in regards to pics and profile... All help appreciated Well as you have asked. There is a tonal issue. Your words don’t match your pic. So either take those photos and go down the bull/alpha tone. You might want to tone down the “I am the satisfaction king, greatest lover ever” bit, or not, it’s YOUR profile, you can be who you want. Or Match your text to your photos, I.e. I am an average guy doing average things, I have a thing for married women….. (note I am not saying you are average, this is by way of an example, please self-define) I take it all on board and apprecate this as it is going to help me so much, this is what I am looking for in regards to help... Shame I can't message you privately for some advice on changes instead of here, but all the info you have given me helps. Reading your reply I think I should turn the dial down on my text...." Nonono. That’s not what I am saying, what I am saying is “represent your style”. You have a niche, if that profile text is honestly how you feel then that’s good. That’s honesty. Just perhaps demonstrate that in your pics etc. | |||
"OP, I think your profile is fine. You stated what you want and I'd put a small bet you get a response from a few women who read this thread that fit your criteria. As 'look at me' threads go, I think this is a good one. Frank" I wasn't aiming for look at me....but now you mention it I can see where you are coming from.... | |||
"Ok....so what are peoples thoughts....give it your best shot..... Truth. Your profile text; “Are you a woman” is your opening line, seriously? I get where you are coming from, like an advert right? But that pitch just doesn’t have enough spin on it. It’s a bit like saying. “Are you breathing”? Then you mention that maybe they aren’t being satisfied at home, are you implying that women are on here because of “issues”? not all married women on here are cheating because of “issues”, not all married people on here are cheating but your profile text is designed to belittle their partner and big yourself up. There is a market for that, the cuckold market, but it is small and based (on my understanding) around respect and fantasy, with elements of controlled humiliation, not out and out ridicule. Do you think you could change the “tone” of your text to something more relaxed or are you going for the Alpha/Bull thing? In which case keep as is. Your photos are plain and unimaginative. They certainly don’t exude the confidence of your text so there is a disparity, I read one thing, I see another. Now I’m confused. Do you think there are photos that you could take that match the tone of your profile, moody, dominant, alpha etc.? So a little critique and some thoughts to consider, as you asked. If you take offence, I apologise in advance, but you asked for a critique. I really like the feedback and would happily change things, what exactly do you think to change in regards to pics and profile... All help appreciated Well as you have asked. There is a tonal issue. Your words don’t match your pic. So either take those photos and go down the bull/alpha tone. You might want to tone down the “I am the satisfaction king, greatest lover ever” bit, or not, it’s YOUR profile, you can be who you want. Or Match your text to your photos, I.e. I am an average guy doing average things, I have a thing for married women….. (note I am not saying you are average, this is by way of an example, please self-define) I take it all on board and apprecate this as it is going to help me so much, this is what I am looking for in regards to help... Shame I can't message you privately for some advice on changes instead of here, but all the info you have given me helps. Reading your reply I think I should turn the dial down on my text.... Nonono. That’s not what I am saying, what I am saying is “represent your style”. You have a niche, if that profile text is honestly how you feel then that’s good. That’s honesty. Just perhaps demonstrate that in your pics etc. " How......? I ain't great at this really..... | |||
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"Ok....so what are peoples thoughts....give it your best shot..... Truth. Your profile text; “Are you a woman” is your opening line, seriously? I get where you are coming from, like an advert right? But that pitch just doesn’t have enough spin on it. It’s a bit like saying. “Are you breathing”? Then you mention that maybe they aren’t being satisfied at home, are you implying that women are on here because of “issues”? not all married women on here are cheating because of “issues”, not all married people on here are cheating but your profile text is designed to belittle their partner and big yourself up. There is a market for that, the cuckold market, but it is small and based (on my understanding) around respect and fantasy, with elements of controlled humiliation, not out and out ridicule. Do you think you could change the “tone” of your text to something more relaxed or are you going for the Alpha/Bull thing? In which case keep as is. Your photos are plain and unimaginative. They certainly don’t exude the confidence of your text so there is a disparity, I read one thing, I see another. Now I’m confused. Do you think there are photos that you could take that match the tone of your profile, moody, dominant, alpha etc.? So a little critique and some thoughts to consider, as you asked. If you take offence, I apologise in advance, but you asked for a critique. I really like the feedback and would happily change things, what exactly do you think to change in regards to pics and profile... All help appreciated Well as you have asked. There is a tonal issue. Your words don’t match your pic. So either take those photos and go down the bull/alpha tone. You might want to tone down the “I am the satisfaction king, greatest lover ever” bit, or not, it’s YOUR profile, you can be who you want. Or Match your text to your photos, I.e. I am an average guy doing average things, I have a thing for married women….. (note I am not saying you are average, this is by way of an example, please self-define) I take it all on board and apprecate this as it is going to help me so much, this is what I am looking for in regards to help... Shame I can't message you privately for some advice on changes instead of here, but all the info you have given me helps. Reading your reply I think I should turn the dial down on my text.... Nonono. That’s not what I am saying, what I am saying is “represent your style”. You have a niche, if that profile text is honestly how you feel then that’s good. That’s honesty. Just perhaps demonstrate that in your pics etc. How......? I ain't great at this really....." So look. Your profile text is aimed at people that aren’t getting enough at home right? That’s a niche. So I suspect the ladies don’t want to look at pictures of fellas that they have at home (let’s say unimaginative, a bit vanilla, a bit shy). So your pictures will need to exude confidence, be different from that which they snuggle up to most nights. | |||
"Ok....so what are peoples thoughts....give it your best shot..... Truth. Your profile text; “Are you a woman” is your opening line, seriously? I get where you are coming from, like an advert right? But that pitch just doesn’t have enough spin on it. It’s a bit like saying. “Are you breathing”? Then you mention that maybe they aren’t being satisfied at home, are you implying that women are on here because of “issues”? not all married women on here are cheating because of “issues”, not all married people on here are cheating but your profile text is designed to belittle their partner and big yourself up. There is a market for that, the cuckold market, but it is small and based (on my understanding) around respect and fantasy, with elements of controlled humiliation, not out and out ridicule. Do you think you could change the “tone” of your text to something more relaxed or are you going for the Alpha/Bull thing? In which case keep as is. Your photos are plain and unimaginative. They certainly don’t exude the confidence of your text so there is a disparity, I read one thing, I see another. Now I’m confused. Do you think there are photos that you could take that match the tone of your profile, moody, dominant, alpha etc.? So a little critique and some thoughts to consider, as you asked. If you take offence, I apologise in advance, but you asked for a critique. I really like the feedback and would happily change things, what exactly do you think to change in regards to pics and profile... All help appreciated Well as you have asked. There is a tonal issue. Your words don’t match your pic. So either take those photos and go down the bull/alpha tone. You might want to tone down the “I am the satisfaction king, greatest lover ever” bit, or not, it’s YOUR profile, you can be who you want. Or Match your text to your photos, I.e. I am an average guy doing average things, I have a thing for married women….. (note I am not saying you are average, this is by way of an example, please self-define) I take it all on board and apprecate this as it is going to help me so much, this is what I am looking for in regards to help... Shame I can't message you privately for some advice on changes instead of here, but all the info you have given me helps. Reading your reply I think I should turn the dial down on my text.... Nonono. That’s not what I am saying, what I am saying is “represent your style”. You have a niche, if that profile text is honestly how you feel then that’s good. That’s honesty. Just perhaps demonstrate that in your pics etc. How......? I ain't great at this really..... So look. Your profile text is aimed at people that aren’t getting enough at home right? That’s a niche. So I suspect the ladies don’t want to look at pictures of fellas that they have at home (let’s say unimaginative, a bit vanilla, a bit shy). So your pictures will need to exude confidence, be different from that which they snuggle up to most nights. " Right...nowcwe getting somewhere... How would you suggest I take pics like that....to exude confidence to women who want something different....? | |||
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"Dude really. You are 44 and you are talking the talk. Do you not know how to walk the walk? " By the looks of things then obviously not......lol | |||
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"I am not a fan of the white knight style saviour approach but each to their own. If you are going for the approach that loveless/sexless women should pick you over every other man in fab then you need to get rid of this part - "I am just an average guy who wants to show loving and pleasure to those ladies who are neglected in the sex department and give them the love and passion that the so need" Why would they pick an average guy? Nobody wants average. " Good feedback....I am considering changing the profile completely to include all women rather than a certain group | |||
