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I am debating with Mrs Raver about the length of our profile text. Seems to me to be equivalent to the works of Shakespeare - and who reads all of that without a few snores in between.
What do you lot think?
Mr Ranter |
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over a year ago
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I think a long profile can be good if well written and humorous. I don't like the ones that are like a diary:
1/2/12 went here and had fun thanks guys
2/2/12 went somewhere else and had a good time
etc
etc
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Gets a bit tiring. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Looks fine!
Although I'd ditch the '50 shades' reference in your update!!
Everyone seems to be jumping on the bandwagon there - profile names, updates, forum posts - and it's all a tad cringe worthy!!
Apart from that - looks good!!
Enjoy!! |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"believe me, that is short when compared to some peoples "
Yeah! I get finger ache scrolling through some people's profiles on my iPhone!
Mentioning no names! Cough! |
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"believe me, that is short when compared to some peoples
Yeah! I get finger ache scrolling through some people's profiles on my iPhone!
Mentioning no names! Cough! "
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Cough cough! |
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By *abioMan
over a year ago
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"I am debating with Mrs Raver about the length of our profile text. Seems to me to be equivalent to the works of Shakespeare - and who reads all of that without a few snores in between.
What do you lot think?
Mr Ranter "
I would say this.... if they can't be bothered to read thru the profile that you wrote... then they are probably not the type of people you would be interested in in the first place..... |
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"I am debating with Mrs Raver about the length of our profile text. Seems to me to be equivalent to the works of Shakespeare - and who reads all of that without a few snores in between.
What do you lot think?
Mr Ranter
I would say this.... if they can't be bothered to read thru the profile that you wrote... then they are probably not the type of people you would be interested in in the first place....."
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As I have put in mine, it is that long for a reason. |
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By *odareyouMan
over a year ago
not far from iceland,,,,,, tescos is nearer though :-) (near leeds) |
Being a bloke (I'm not into bragging ...ahem) mines bigger than yours though...
If it reflects you I'd keep it,
I tinker with mine all the time..
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By (user no longer on site)
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I tend to think that it depends upon who your preferred reader is - do you want someone who will take the time to read it and take an interest - or someone who doesn't care who or what you are so long as you're available? What sort of profile gets your attention?
The length is fine, but it's a bit dis-jointed - try linking the different lines as related subject - what you are looking for - and what your meet / accommodation preferences are... It would make it easier to read...
But above all - have fun!!!
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By (user no longer on site)
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I have been toying with the idea of trimming the number of words down in ours too.
I would rather it have as much information in as possible but it is starting to look a little like War and Peace |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"Being a bloke (I'm not into bragging ...ahem) mines bigger than yours though...
If it reflects you I'd keep it,
I tinker with mine all the time..
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I can imagine u do |
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Length of profile text was fine. I enjoy reading a profile.
I scrolled through a lot of pics of the fem though and failed to find a decent piccy of the male. |
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"I am debating with Mrs Raver about the length of our profile text. Seems to me to be equivalent to the works of Shakespeare - and who reads all of that without a few snores in between.
What do you lot think?
Mr Ranter
I would say this.... if they can't be bothered to read thru the profile that you wrote... then they are probably not the type of people you would be interested in in the first place....."
Spot on. The ONLY (and I do mean only...) criticism I would have is that it's all individual 'stand-alone' sentences instead of being laid out in paragraphs - hence it looks longer than it actually is. Other than that...... pity you're so far away......
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We have quite a comprehensive profile,yet time after time it is skipped in favour of the pictures....but the only folk we ever meet are the ones who do the research....almost a filter xx and we love to read a good profile... |
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"I am debating with Mrs Raver about the length of our profile text. Seems to me to be equivalent to the works of Shakespeare - and who reads all of that without a few snores in between.
What do you lot think?
Mr Ranter "
Hey Mr Rant - if you think yours is to long there is no hope for me lol |
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We are just in the middle of up dating our, we haven't gopt a problem with long profiles, I think someone has already said that it's down to the type of person you want to attract.
If somebody can't be bothered to read a full profile then is that really the person you want to be looking to meet?
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