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How does my profile come across
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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From a straight guy...your first pic is to blurry...I would lose it
Change your profile pic,maybe crop the one of full body? Your a run of the mill type guy? Big yourself up a bit more,sell yourself better |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Some punctuation might help but the structure, other than calling yourself average, is good.
Might be helpful to put in a picture of you smiling somewhere - you looked bored to death in some of them |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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You could trim the profile a bit - you've said a couple of things twice. For instance...
"I’m very open minded and open to most things", "I'm open to alot of things": alas this almost always translates as "timewaster" - you're better off saying what you're NOT interested in. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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How do you you know you have The highest level of hygene?
Do you really need to put that, isn't that standard?
Ditch the laying in bed pics.
They aren't cute. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"anyone interested to give me pointers for my profile please?"
Amend last 2 paragraphs, spelling etc, take out pic with the other dude
The rest reads nice though |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"anyone interested to give me pointers for my profile please?
Amend last 2 paragraphs, spelling etc, take out pic with the other dude
The rest reads nice though"
Thanks for the feedback x |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"anyone interested to give me pointers for my profile please?
Amend last 2 paragraphs, spelling etc, take out pic with the other dude
The rest reads nice though
Thanks for the feedback x"
By amend i do mean delete most |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"anyone interested to give me pointers for my profile please?
Amend last 2 paragraphs, spelling etc, take out pic with the other dude
The rest reads nice though
Thanks for the feedback x
By amend i do mean delete most"
wouldnt have been a bit easier if you said delete most rather than amend lol |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"anyone interested to give me pointers for my profile please?
Amend last 2 paragraphs, spelling etc, take out pic with the other dude
The rest reads nice though
Thanks for the feedback x
By amend i do mean delete most
wouldnt have been a bit easier if you said delete most rather than amend lol"
Maybe,I was hoping he'd have the sense to see what shiukd stay and go in those two paragraph |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"anyone interested to give me pointers for my profile please?
Amend last 2 paragraphs, spelling etc, take out pic with the other dude
The rest reads nice though
Thanks for the feedback x
By amend i do mean delete most
wouldnt have been a bit easier if you said delete most rather than amend lol
Maybe,I was hoping he'd have the sense to see what shiukd stay and go in those two paragraph "
I mean you not he |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Since we’re on the topic, do any of you kind people mind having a look over my profile and giving me the cold hard truth? "
Too much to type but basically a lot of Waffling, we can see you not slim so no need to mention, repeatedly. Better pics |
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I learned that you are run of the mill type of guy and to ask if there's anything else I'd like to know. I guess you mean you are average.
Unfortunately, most men here will be average. If you are just emphasising that you are not distinct from the thousands of others, then you will struggle to make progress.
To get better results, you will probably have to make yourself stand out from the rest. Share your personality, your sexual skills, desires and what you'd assume partners will want to know. |
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"Since we’re on the topic, do any of you kind people mind having a look over my profile and giving me the cold hard truth? "
It's poor form to as good as hijack someone else's thread, as you can create 1 that gives you exclusive scrutiny, keeping advice clear. |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"anyone interested to give me pointers for my profile please?
Amend last 2 paragraphs, spelling etc, take out pic with the other dude
The rest reads nice though
Thanks for the feedback x
By amend i do mean delete most
wouldnt have been a bit easier if you said delete most rather than amend lol
Maybe,I was hoping he'd have the sense to see what shiukd stay and go in those two paragraph
I mean you not he"
fair enough lol i did change the last 2 paragraphs but not sure what to delete lol..my brain can be turned off at stupid times lol |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"Since we’re on the topic, do any of you kind people mind having a look over my profile and giving me the cold hard truth?
Too much to type but basically a lot of Waffling, we can see you not slim so no need to mention, repeatedly. Better pics"
Lol noted! Cheers! |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Just looking for an honest evaluation, see if it connects to anyone. How does my profile come across?. "
Wonder Kid - interesting user name
Why kid?
I’m looking for a man, not a kid, so that would instantly put me off |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
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"Just looking for an honest evaluation, see if it connects to anyone. How does my profile come across?.
Wonder Kid - interesting user name
Why kid?
To be honest it was the first thing that popped in my head
I’m looking for a man, not a kid, so that would instantly put me off"
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I think you come across very well. 
